Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Can I say I am really loving this concept of many small stories from different genres
And this was an amazing OS Nimmi
. I enjoyed it a lot. In between you introduced a brilliant twist. I was seriously shocked because I really never accepted the story to go that way. I really can't figure out that what comment should I type down for this brilliant fic. I am really stunned, speechless, shocked and amazed
Woah... Swara is in full on angry mood. She is a fiesty girl. Why do I have this feeling that this blue eyed, pretty sunny boy is gonna be Sanskaar
Adarsh, Laksh and Ragini... they all are very sweet. Ragini is somewhat like Bozo here, extremely good with computers. Laksh is a funny and likeable guy
. And Adarsh is a tough man. Swara has one lovely team with her
Seems like that crime scene is extremely brutual. I am sure they will crack the case soon.
And I was right. That sunny boy is Sanskaar
. And he heard Swara's curses regarding him. Oh.. I love Swara. Instead of being or saying sorry to him, she was checking him out
Sanskaar is also pretty cool and a smart guy. In the very first meeting he liked Swara. And our girl is also fascinated by him
Seems like our famous five cracked the murder case. But oh the evidences get lost. Someone is definitely a traitor amongst them.
How lovely.. Swara and Sanskaar can communicate with each other without even saying a word
Sanskaar's plan of catching both the culprit and the backstabber is good. Haha.. totally loved what Sanskaar said about selfies and us channelling our ancestors
Adarsh also has a bad timing
. He broke such an adorable moment.
..I was really wondering that who is the traitor in the team. I had my doubts in all 3, laksh, Ragini and Adarsh. But I never imagined that the person would turn out to be Sanskaar.
But that person's name wasn't even Sanskaar. Was the crime Branch sleeping for all this time. Someone outsider infiltrated there department, and they didn't even know.
And when I was thinking my quota of surprises for this fic is over
, you introduced a one more twist. Sanskaar and that couple were from defense forces
. So Sanskaar is not a bad guy as I was thinking earlier.Wow Nimmi, it was brilliant story with an extremely brilliant plot
It was a very good plan by Sanskaar
. He perfectly infiltrated the crime branch sneakily. And was involved in a dealings of a murder case, without even raising a single ounce of doubt. Deleted all the evidences, so he can catch the criminals by himself. And he didn't even leave any single of his trace behind, not even a bloody picture. An extremely brilliant plan by him
Friendship is a very beautiful bond. Swara was feeling guilty when she doubted her friends. And Sanskaar undertook this risky operation to avenge and provide justice to his friends/team members who were murdered brutually.
I am happy that Sanskaar atleast left a pic of him and a note with Swara
. Although I am sure Sanskaar that Swara would have remembered you regardless of a pic or not. But still it was a very lovely thing, that he left a pic as his memory with her.
I really hope that they meet in future as Swara wished for
. And Nimmi if you are thinking of writting its sequel. Please do it
. Not at all presurring you. But would like to read that when and how do they meet next time, and what would be their reactions. Vaise this too has a perfect ending
. It kind of justifies the tittle..mystery. Which is left to the reader's own imagination.
I loved Sanskaar
. He was just amazing, intelligent and brilliant.
Brilliant work Nimmi
. Told you na that I am speechless, can't figure out that how I should praise this OS. I Really loved it
Thank you for writting it and sharing it with us.
Lots and lots of love