OS :: Genre Series# Crime/Mystery. (Page 7)

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Saumya2102

*sobs* *and sobs* *and keeps sobbing*
That was beyond beautiful my lady!! I scanned the whole Oxford Dictionary but couldn't find a single word worth to describe it!! 

aww... Saumya..
thank you so much girl.

Ragini, Adarsh, Laksh and Swara.. their team is just so wonderful. They had all sorts of nutties present there. All 4 of them completed each other. Isn't it how we have friends in our friend circle. In mine.. there's the pretty one, then the one who lives only and only for food, there's a brainy, the flirt and the sarcastic one!! And I love them all!!

True that. you said it. in fact I am now visualizing my own friends.
crazy, nutty, different and make a perfect circle of friends.

Coming back to the story, you know what.. I found Sanskar a composition of all 4!! Anyways.. his entry was just superb! No really!! When Swara was saying all sorts of stuff to Sanskar not realising that the guy whom she's 'praising' so much is just behind her!!

thankh ku. Sanskaar is Sanskaar.
well Swara is Swara too.LOL

This story was really interesting and actually different!! I really enjoyed the blossoming friendship of Sanskar and Swara. They had come to be really close.. Isn't it??

that they did. I am glad you found the story different. and interesting of course.Embarrassed

The mystery part was also amazing. But what took me by shock was that Sanskar was actually not Sanskar!!!! I was really hoping you don't make him the main murder and thankfully you didn't!! The last part left me teary eyed. He did so much for friendship!! Seriously, such friends are a gem!! <3 <3

he is a murderer but not in a moral sense may. i dunno if I made sense. he just delivered justice in his style.
true that. friends like that are priceless.

He didn't want anyone to know his real identity that's why he was not taking selfies.. it was not the ape reason!! But what took my attention was that even though he did not allow anyone to take his picture, he took a selfie with Swara.. 'So that you always remember me' Girl.. you don't even know hiw these lines affected my "emotional fool" heart!! 

aww again. you are a sweetheart saumya. I am so happy this story touch you on emotional level.
I am really enjoying these series of yours.. But lazy girll... at least send PMs naa!! Anyways bye.. take care..
*me still sobbing*

Oye I am sendign pm.. errr thoda late hi sahi. but I am sending.
and hey please.. Pushpa.. I hate tears reHug.

Thanks darling for loving these series.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Saumya2102

One more thing.. any chances for part 2?? This was a very meaningful ending but still I feel it's incomplete because Swara and Sanskar didn't unite in the literal sense. You gave us hope.. but iss dil ke liye hope kaafi nhi!!

Waise.. Sanskar in this FF must be October or November born.. hai naa?? All his qualities are similar to that of a Scorpion. The Scorpio sun sign!! He loves his friends and can do anything for them.. And if you make Scorpio your enemy, they would not leave you easily!

PS- I am not a Scorpio but a Pisces.. It's just that this sign amused me very much and Pisces and Scorpions are the Perfect Couple of the zodiac!!

surely girl.
will come back with part two as soon as I am done with other genres.Embarrassed.

anything for dil.

Oh so you dig sun-signs eh. to think of yes.. this Sanskaar comes across as Scorpio. the one who never forgets friends or enemies.

Pisces.. wow. I like them.
so Pisces and Scorpios are perfect match eh,
sorry yaar. but this guy is taken. Swara will definitely mindLOL.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Meself

Someone's on overdrive mode!LOL You should continue this one...has a potential to be another dhamaakedaar story!!!


Over drive mode.
you can say it againLOL.

too bad I gave away the ending. now I feel I could have made a killer FF out of it.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerulalli


Nimmi Hug

Such a beautiful crime thriller it was Clap

The awesome foursome--  Swara, Ragini , Aadharsh and Lakshya Smile

The murder was really brutal by the way u explained the photos Ouch

One fine day an officer comes from the head branch-----Swara thinking how would the guy be 
Infact waiting for him ( Nuisance from the headquaters , snob arrogant ass and show off )ROFLROFL

Aah.. The way sanskaar countered it LOL 

Both are equally impressed with each other...

The bond grows bigger and better and best day by day Wink

The way sanskaar deals when the info is lost by bugging evryone's mobiles including swara's and his own is worth appreciating Clap

Both of them had that immense belief on each otherSmile

All the one liners  u used to describe their emotions were fantastic nimmi Clap

So according to swara , he suspects aadharsh and lakshya Big smile

The next day...The bomb...That both the maheshwari brothers are killed...OMG...for a moment i thought is sanskaar thereal culprit as another " original sanskaar"  Turns up to their officeOuch  (I know me being the crazy me)

But the moment ragini starts narrating the "real story " that the murdered mna belonged to defense and sanskaar must have been a part of that force and might have to avenge his friend's death is purely commendable Clap

Swara's respect towards Sanskaar increases by power INFINITY Embarrassed

She keeps on wondering why did he allowed her to click a selfie while opening her car and finds the note " coz i want u to remember me forever"Blushing
That was sooo sweet of him yaar

Hey this OS deffo can be converted into a TWOSHOT  if u want to...by beinging SWASAN together...Wink

Well the choice is ursBig smile

This was indeed a wonderful OS nimmi 

Lots of hugs and jhappis for this HugHugHug

Update soon


wow Prerana..
such a wonderful and detailed comment.

thank you so much dearie.
for reading the story and liking it. and for this wonderful comment.

and surely will write another part of this one. as soon as I am done with other genres.

big thank you once again dear girl.
and big big Jhappis.

Lots of love.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharif_lafungi

this was fanf**kingtastic girl!!!!
intelligent boys are sexy as he'll nd when one has the face of vk...then competition is none...
loved loved the plot...just before the climax I was disappointed nd thought he is the traitor...but what a beautiful twist...
totally brilliant...I was hoping sanskar will come meet swara but the end is totally justified too...can't complain...
again..u r brilliant nimmi...added to the list of my favorites... ;)

Heya SL..

@bold.. Second that!

I am so glad you found this story so good. and loved the twist.
Psst.. giving away a secret here. Sanskaar will remain a hero always in my stories. dark, grey or white.. but hero always.

thank you so much dear for the compliment and your lovely comment.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sree8410

Nimmy wow !!! It's freaking awesome!!! I simply loved it to bits and pieces.

I can see a part 2 coming our way. Please tell me I'm right. 

Let Swara meet Sanskar in the second one. And someday means never did you know that? 

Sanskar felt like Jack Reacher to me. A ghost. He believes in justice being delivered. That's all he cares for. Sharp one.

Swara and the rest of the team was also good. The reason for leaving behind a picture for her was such a beautiful gesture. 




thank you so much sweetie. for reading and loving the story.
and for your lovely comment.

and yup.. you are seeing it right. part two is indeed coming. a little late.. but hopefully soon.

you didn't say Jack reacher.. big jhappis girl. I love reading Jack reacher. read only one novel though. planning to get my hands on more.

a big thank you once again dearest.

Lots and lots of love.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anjaan210

Nimmi Heart
I loved it!! I cn see smth of angel in here
It wd b amazing to hv an ff on this plot plz go on!!!


Angel lives on.Heart

thank you so much dear girl for loving this story.
and will surely think of one more part if not an FF.

thanks again dear.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tr_eta

awesome update...,loved it totally

Thank you so muchEmbarrassed

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