OS :: Genre Series# Crime/Mystery. (Page 6)

Banjaaran. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nynaeve

Not fair, I still have to unres for your historical OS (you should have some pity on your angelsWink)


when I start writing I take mercy on no one. not even on Angels.Evil Smile.

take your time sweetie.
love ya.

Banjaaran. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lucky.m

Y Y Y ..Y OS?? Make it two Shot na ..pleaseee..Pretty Please You cant do this yaar  I mean you cant leave in Midway without our darlins meet

And coming to OS ..It was damn brilliant me ..nuvuu asalu supero super ra nimmi ..For a god damn sec I never thought it was sanky ..I was eyeing laksh ..but gosh that was such a mindboggling twist..ClapClap

I loved that equation b/w swasan and That one moments where they are close and get lost in each other..awww and he let her have their selfie together , he know swara would never disclose ..aww TRUST..man I love this OS ..Embarrassed Brilliant piece of writing nimmiClapClapClap


PS; Please make them meet na ..Please


I believe in saying.. Some endings are best left to imagination.
isliye left it like thatEmbarrassed.

righto girl.. will make our darlings meet them.

gee.. ne happy. nannu nuvvu guess cheyalledu. yeah!

and I am happy that you loved the little love moments too.
chala thanks ra babes.
mana darlings kalustaaru.. pakka.

and awiiee such a cute emo.

love you ra.Heart

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Banjaaran. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess2791

ohh what a suspense. what a justis by sanskar to his friends plzz make one more part and let swara and sanskar come together forver. come to this os i love it love it most. ragu is computer genius laksha as always cool. bonding between swasan is so pure. waiting for next.

thank you so much Princess.

will surely make one more part. a little late maybe but will make it.Embarrassed.
I am so glad you liked the story and the characters.
thanks again.

Banjaaran. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sneharay


thank you sneha.Embarrassed

ssroomani IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 1:07am | IP Logged

Wow Wow Wow!!  I absolutely loved this one...fabulous!!  Clap  Hug

I did not expect the second twist...you satisfied every cell in me which loves mysteries!   Big smile

May I request a sequel please?   Lots of potential for continuing this...Tongue

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Teddy94 Senior Member

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Wow.. Awesome... Loved it a lottt...
The entire stry is superb...
Please can u cont it... Like Swara n Sanskar meeting again... As she hopes...
Please try to cont it...
Thanks for the pm dearSmile

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AditiPant Newbie

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Wow man I'm so spellbound, speechless and out of words...such a clever plot...wow girl you're amazing
So finally you wrote a os on my favorite genre... Thank you so much for that...what a great plot, what a great bonding between sanskar and swara, what a great revenge by sanskar and what a great deal of justice done to each character

For a second I was considering the fact that laksh was the culprit... Especially when sanskar said to swara that his new phone looked expensive... But ultimately it turned out to be wrong and sanskar was not sanskar...he turned out to be someone else... What was his real name BTW??? Well I guess that question is gonna remain...

And finally we came to know that sanskar belonged to the elite special defence forces...and was here to avenge the murder of his friends...wow man if there was anything we had expected, it was not this... But still, everything was amazing... And the way swara displayed her trust in sanskar and didn't reveal anything about the selfies was great...and sanskar's note in her car was adorable... Because he wanted her to remember him forever...I'm sure she will

One request- please convert it into a ts and return with a second part...we all wanna see them meeting again...kindly consider 

Loved the os and the lovely and clever plot... Return soon with something more (can never have enough of your writings) till then, love ya and tc dear

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Awesome one nimmi
sheer brilliance
sanskar was such a mystery
loved it
poor guy from headquarters totally confused on what to do

Loved it really a lot

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