OS :: Genre Series# Crime/Mystery. (Page 6)

ssroomani IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 1:07am | IP Logged

Wow Wow Wow!!  I absolutely loved this one...fabulous!!  Clap  Hug

I did not expect the second twist...you satisfied every cell in me which loves mysteries!   Big smile

May I request a sequel please?   Lots of potential for continuing this...Tongue

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Teddy94 Senior Member

Joined: 30 November 2015
Posts: 277

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Wow.. Awesome... Loved it a lottt...
The entire stry is superb...
Please can u cont it... Like Swara n Sanskar meeting again... As she hopes...
Please try to cont it...
Thanks for the pm dearSmile

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AditiPant Newbie

Joined: 02 February 2016
Posts: 38

Posted: 17 April 2016 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Wow man I'm so spellbound, speechless and out of words...such a clever plot...wow girl you're amazing
So finally you wrote a os on my favorite genre... Thank you so much for that...what a great plot, what a great bonding between sanskar and swara, what a great revenge by sanskar and what a great deal of justice done to each character

For a second I was considering the fact that laksh was the culprit... Especially when sanskar said to swara that his new phone looked expensive... But ultimately it turned out to be wrong and sanskar was not sanskar...he turned out to be someone else... What was his real name BTW??? Well I guess that question is gonna remain...

And finally we came to know that sanskar belonged to the elite special defence forces...and was here to avenge the murder of his friends...wow man if there was anything we had expected, it was not this... But still, everything was amazing... And the way swara displayed her trust in sanskar and didn't reveal anything about the selfies was great...and sanskar's note in her car was adorable... Because he wanted her to remember him forever...I'm sure she will

One request- please convert it into a ts and return with a second part...we all wanna see them meeting again...kindly consider 

Loved the os and the lovely and clever plot... Return soon with something more (can never have enough of your writings) till then, love ya and tc dear

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mishrialways IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Awesome one nimmi
sheer brilliance
sanskar was such a mystery
loved it
poor guy from headquarters totally confused on what to do

Loved it really a lot

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Nynaeve IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 November 2015
Posts: 4413

Posted: 18 April 2016 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Banjaaran.

Originally posted by Nynaeve

Not fair, I still have to unres for your historical OS (you should have some pity on your angelsWink)


when I start writing I take mercy on no one. not even on Angels.Evil Smile.

take your time sweetie.
love ya.

CryCryCry  for not having mercy on us.

Finally unres on page 1 and for all your other OS (unless you have gone and posted one more in the last one hourWink)


Edited by Nynaeve - 18 April 2016 at 11:26am

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showrav24 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
superb update dearClap
loved this os series
mostly this & previous one
hope we get second part of this os
waiting for next one

Edited by showrav24 - 18 April 2016 at 11:57pm

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navyasingh Senior Member

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Posts: 471

Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:20am | IP Logged

Can I say I am really loving this concept of many small stories from different genresBig smile.

And this was an amazing OS NimmiStar. I enjoyed it a lot. In between you introduced a brilliant twist. I was seriously shocked because I really never accepted the story to go that way.  I really can't figure out that what comment should I type down for this brilliant fic.  I am really stunned,  speechless, shocked and amazedSmile.

Woah... Swara is in full on angry mood. She is a fiesty girl. Why do I have this feeling that this blue eyed, pretty sunny boy is gonna be SanskaarWink.

Adarsh, Laksh and Ragini... they all are very sweet. Ragini is somewhat like Bozo here, extremely good with computers. Laksh is a funny and likeable guySmile. And Adarsh is a tough man. Swara has one lovely team with her

Seems like that crime scene is extremely brutual. I am sure they will crack the case soon.

And I was right. That sunny boy is SanskaarEmbarrassed. And he heard Swara's curses regarding him. Oh.. I love Swara. Instead of being or saying sorry to him, she was checking him outROFLEmbarrassed.

Sanskaar is also pretty cool and a smart guy. In the very first meeting he liked Swara. And our girl is also fascinated by himSmile.

Seems like our famous five cracked the murder case. But oh the evidences get lost. Someone is definitely a traitor amongst them.Ouch

How lovely.. Swara and Sanskaar can communicate with each other without even saying a wordEmbarrassed.

Sanskaar's plan of catching both the culprit and the backstabber is good. Haha.. totally loved what Sanskaar said about selfies and us channelling our ancestorsLOLLOL.

 Adarsh also has a bad timingAngry. He broke such an adorable moment.

OMG... WHATShocked..I was really wondering that who is the traitor in the team. I had my doubts in all 3, laksh, Ragini and Adarsh. But I never imagined that the person would turn out to be Sanskaar.

But that person's name wasn't even Sanskaar. Was the crime Branch sleeping for all this time. Someone outsider infiltrated there department, and they didn't even know.

And when I was thinking my quota of surprises for this fic is overLOL, you introduced a one more twist. Sanskaar and that couple were from defense forcesShockedShocked. So Sanskaar is not a bad guy as I was thinking earlier.Wow Nimmi, it was brilliant story with an extremely brilliant plotClap.
It was a very good plan by SanskaarSmile. He perfectly infiltrated the crime branch sneakily. And was involved in a dealings of a murder case, without even raising a single ounce of doubt. Deleted all the evidences, so he can catch the criminals by himself. And he didn't even leave any single of his trace behind, not even a bloody picture. An extremely brilliant plan by himStar.

Friendship is a very beautiful bond. Swara was feeling guilty when she  doubted her friends. And Sanskaar undertook this risky operation to avenge and provide justice to his friends/team members who were murdered brutually.

I am happy that Sanskaar atleast left a pic of him and a note with SwaraBig smile. Although I am sure Sanskaar that Swara would have remembered you regardless of a  pic or not.  But still it was a very lovely thing, that he left a pic as his memory with her.
I really hope that they meet in future as Swara wished forEmbarrassed. And Nimmi if you are thinking of writting its sequel. Please do itBig smile. Not at all presurring you. But would like to read that when and how do they meet next time, and what would be their reactions. Vaise this too has a perfect endingSmile. It kind of justifies the tittle..mystery. Which is left to the reader's own imagination.

I  loved SanskaarEmbarrassed. He was just amazing, intelligent and brilliant.

Brilliant work NimmiStar. Told you na that I am speechless, can't figure out that how I should praise this OS. I Really loved itBig smile.

Thank you for writting it and sharing it with us.

Take care
Lots and lots of loveHug

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Banjaaran. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by soumi93

Nimmi can u please write a Part two for me????its badly needed.
Well well i am an addicted thriller reader...so i somehow expected only anyone from swasan would be the traitor...Loved the way u build it up and then ended up wd a great clymax...I am highly impressed.
Its actually too much awesome.
keep writing more and a part two plich

thank you so much soumi.. for reading and liking the story.Embarrassed.
and for your compliment. so you guessed eh. I am glad I could surprise you with climax.
will surely write the part two soon.
gotta finish other genre and come back again to this one.

thank you once again dear.

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