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OS :: Genre Series# Crime/Mystery. (Page 5)

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Banjaaran.

Originally posted by Vaiyambar...

Res.. Machi... Hug ...

Unres...

I'm spellbound... Man I'm left with no words... What an OS it was just first class man... I doubted Sanskaar.. But not like this way... I thought he must be son of eighter one.. But man what a twist... Mind blowing Clap Clap Clap ... Mmmawh machi...

Love you...


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Machi..
Hug.

thank you so much re.

so you guessed it is Sanskaar.busted thereLOL.
But I am glad I managed to shock you in the end.

Love you back. Muah!</font>





Ha.. Ha... Ha.. Man you imposed doubt seed on Laksh and Adarsh.. When a writer do this then it's definitely not them.. Then my doubt turn on Ragini and Sanskaar.. But that selfie confirmed it.. It's Sanskaar.. I love to solve this kinda enigmas machi... Mmmawh for you giving me this... CBI missed me.. LOL ..

Love you... You won't change.. Still telling me thanku... Puking.. Dead

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
I want part 2 hamaari mange puri karo...laal kile pe dharna denge...we want part 2...
What yaar ?
Every tym I read u I think it is d best n nothing can be better than this ...but I always forget that u are nimmi...kasam khaake baithi ho to prove me wrong ...every tym fresh topic ...fresh story...starplus tagline suits u best...rishta wahi soch nayi...
Bw  m again going out of topic ...yaar Angel hangover nahin uttar ra...I wanna ask Maddy's new profession which he has now opted?
Love
Ishita...but naam pataali Devi hone m der no large GI if u didn't give part 2 ...okLOL


Edited by ishanita - 15 April 2016 at 12:42am

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Star Star Star Clap Clap Clap wow such an amazing story I had no idea  who was the traitor and I tried not  to guess because I smhw knew that the traitor  will be someone unexpected and same thing happened I  didn't expected this at least not in this way, when I got to know it was sanskar I was so shocked and confused but when read the whole story twice I understood    hats off to you.ClapClap I was literally scrolling for more but there was none Cry 
But fulfill our demand of part two
 




Edited by Sanya17 - 14 April 2016 at 3:39pm

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Brilliant!!! I am kind of speechless right now. This is so so good. Wonderful os. please Write one more part where they will meet again. I really want them to meet again. Please continue this one. Will be  waiting for their 'someday'  :)))

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
Nimmi jaan...
Brilliant and outclass...enjoyed it alot...full suspense n mystery...i was suspecting adharsh n lakshya..but amazing twist n turns...
Sooo a very different type of love between swasan...far from each other..but still they will meet one day...muahhh

first Historical fiction n now this crime story of swasan..loved both...excited for next...

Will wait for comedy n supernatural...everything ..excited

Update soon...

Love
Talia


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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
I AM SPEECHLESS...WHAT COULD I SAY FOR THIS ONE..THIS IS THE BEST OS I HAVE EVER READ..JUST HATS OFF TO U..LOTS OF LOVE FOR YOU NIMMI..I LOVE THE WAY HOW YOU SHOW SANSKAAR'S CHARACTER ALWAYS DIFFERENT..MEANINGFULL..OUT OF THE WORLD..THE MISTERY OF SANSKAAR..JUST BEYOND OF ANYTHING..!!

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ... Embarrassed

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cinderella3

Res again!


I'm so sorry that I'm unable to unres my comments. It's a too hectic week for me. Will try to unres as soon as possible. 

Love you! Heart
Ashi. Smile


No problem ashi. take you time.
so good to see you.

Hug

Love you.

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