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OS :: Genre Series# Crime/Mystery. (Page 10)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanya17

Star Star Star Clap Clap Clap wow such an amazing story I had no idea  who was the traitor and I tried not  to guess because I smhw knew that the traitor  will be someone unexpected and same thing happened I  didn't expected this at least not in this way, when I got to know it was sanskar I was so shocked and confused but when read the whole story twice I understood    hats off to you.ClapClap I was literally scrolling for more but there was none Cry 
But fulfill our demand of part two
 




Thank you so much SanyaEmbarrassed.

well that's how I read suspense stories too. without guessing.
I am so glad you found the surprise good.

will surely write part two. thank you so much dear for reading the story, loving it.
and hey.. for this lovely comment.

Love.


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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -LumosMaxima-

Brilliant!!! I am kind of speechless right now. This is so so good. Wonderful os. please Write one more part where they will meet again. I really want them to meet again. Please continue this one. Will be  waiting for their 'someday'  :)))



Thank you so muchEmbarrassed
for reading the story and finding it so good.

will surely write part two. they ARE going to me 'someday'


Thank you once again for this lovely comment.

Love.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by krishuuu

Nimmi jaan...
Brilliant and outclass...enjoyed it alot...full suspense n mystery...i was suspecting adharsh n lakshya..but amazing twist n turns...
Sooo a very different type of love between swasan...far from each other..but still they will meet one day...muahhh

first Historical fiction n now this crime story of swasan..loved both...excited for next...

Will wait for comedy n supernatural...everything ..excited

Update soon...

Love
Talia




Talia..
Hug

Thank you so much dearie for liking this story.

Hope you liked the other ones too. comedy is done. Supernatural on hold for now. its gonna be SS me thinks.

thank you so very much once again girl.

Love.


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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by M_Annu

I AM SPEECHLESS...WHAT COULD I SAY FOR THIS ONE..THIS IS THE BEST OS I HAVE EVER READ..JUST HATS OFF TO U..LOTS OF LOVE FOR YOU NIMMI..I LOVE THE WAY HOW YOU SHOW SANSKAAR'S CHARACTER ALWAYS DIFFERENT..MEANINGFULL..OUT OF THE WORLD..THE MISTERY OF SANSKAAR..JUST BEYOND OF ANYTHING..!!


awww Annana..
Hug.

you are being too kind dear.
thank you so very much for your generous words.

Lot and lots of Love for you too dear girl.
Sanskaar is my muse. i get my love for him shows.Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 7APK

Awesome OS ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ... Embarrassed


Thank you so much girlHug
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ssroomani



Wow Wow Wow!!  I absolutely loved this one...fabulous!!  Clap  Hug


I did not expect the second twist...you satisfied every cell in me which loves mysteries!   Big smile
 

May I request a sequel please?   Lots of potential for continuing this...Tongue


Thank you so much for reading and liking this story.
and for this sweet comment.
I am so glad I could surprise you with the mysteryEmbarrassed

surely! will write the sequel too.
thank you once again.

Love.Hug




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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Teddy94

Wow.. Awesome... Loved it a lottt...
The entire stry is superb...
Please can u cont it... Like Swara n Sanskar meeting again... As she hopes...
Please try to cont it...
Thanks for the pm dearSmile


Thank you so much TeddyHug
for reading and liking this story. and your sweet comment.

will surely continue dear. and they WILL meet!
thanks againEmbarrassed

Love.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AditiPant

Wow man I'm so spellbound, speechless and out of words...such a clever plot...wow girl you're amazing
So finally you wrote a os on my favorite genre... Thank you so much for that...what a great plot, what a great bonding between sanskar and swara, what a great revenge by sanskar and what a great deal of justice done to each character

For a second I was considering the fact that laksh was the culprit... Especially when sanskar said to swara that his new phone looked expensive... But ultimately it turned out to be wrong and sanskar was not sanskar...he turned out to be someone else... What was his real name BTW??? Well I guess that question is gonna remain...

And finally we came to know that sanskar belonged to the elite special defence forces...and was here to avenge the murder of his friends...wow man if there was anything we had expected, it was not this... But still, everything was amazing... And the way swara displayed her trust in sanskar and didn't reveal anything about the selfies was great...and sanskar's note in her car was adorable... Because he wanted her to remember him forever...I'm sure she will

One request- please convert it into a ts and return with a second part...we all wanna see them meeting again...kindly consider 

Loved the os and the lovely and clever plot... Return soon with something more (can never have enough of your writings) till then, love ya and tc dear


Aditi..
Hug

Love you girl.
always always a pleasure to read your comments on my thread.
so love you again.

so this is your favourite genre.. why am I not surprisedLOL.
I know you so well.
I am really happy you found this story good. and I am so glad I could surprise you with the twists.
Mission accomplished.

and yup.. surely returnign with part two.

thank you so much dearest for your wonderful comment. and liking my stories.
Big hugs and lots and lots of love.

love ya back.
Jhappis.




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