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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Res.. Machi... Hug ...

Unres...

I'm spellbound... Man I'm left with no words... What an OS it was just first class man... I doubted Sanskaar.. But not like this way... I thought he must be son of eighter one.. But man what a twist... Mind blowing Clap Clap Clap ... Mmmawh machi...

Love you...

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 13 April 2016 at 10:30am

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 5:15am | IP Logged
awesome...! just loved it. Embarrassed

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Woah Nimmi... That was so f****** amazing I tell ya!! It was too good. Another masterpiece of your sheer brilliance and amazing words!! Fabtabulous hun, and I'm so impressed man!! Such a plot..Kudos!* claps wildly*
I was all the time thinking who the hell is the traitor!! It never occured that it may be Sanskaar. I was like it has to be Laksh. But thinking of Sanskaar was completely outta question!! What all shhe didnt call him and he grinned!! Sanskaar was so cool:-)
SwaSan spending all time together was slowly paving the way for deep true love!! Enigma and Open Book!!? I LIKE IT!!
All this time it was Sanskaar?? God!! This is shocking. I mean i was actually stunned for a moment. Then I read it whole and realised. But dude, you really ought to write a crime novel!! You're fab at it<3 Such a plot!! Wouldn't have ever crossed my mind!! Defence?? Amazing buddy!!
The last part of the card was so heart touching!! Just loved it. Hey Nimmi!! Can you please please please please please please write a part of this one where Swara and Sanskaar actually meet like she hopes!! Please Nimmi! And let his name be Sanskaar only!!
Can you write a part two for me?? I loved it tooo xInfinity much
Lots of love
Sakshi!!

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Woah!

What was this?!! I just LOVE this. Big smile This is so awestruckingly beautiful!!! Day Dreaming Magnificent! This comes next to or almost equal to "Angel" and "Sanskar Chronicles". Those two are my top favorites! But this is no less. I love you Nimmi! Mwah! HugHeart

The team bonding and friendship was beautiful. Loved each and every person. And what an entry by Sanskar! (Ermm... I can call him Sanskar, right? Ermm)

Loved the way our SwaSan developed a beautiful bond, the way they understood each other and the trust they had on each other. He eliminated every trace which would lead to him, but still let Swara capture him in her memories forever. He trusted her enough to leave his picture with her. Heart

You did manage to throw us off balance with the appalling twist that you came up with. The ending was beautiful. But still I wish it didn't end there. I wish i could see SwaSan together. Can you please continue this? Pretty please?! Embarrassed

Keep gracing us like this with your wonderful writing skills. I would always be happy to spend my free time reading them. 

Love you so much Nimmi! Hug
Ashi.


Edited by Cinderella3 - 27 April 2016 at 11:54am

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 5:54am | IP Logged
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Not fair, I still have to unres for your historical OS (you should have some pity on your angelsWink)

Nyna

Got lost with your other OS - hence the delayWink Wow the twist was something I did not see it coming - I thought for a minute that Sanskaar had something to do with the deaths of Durga Prasad and Ram Prasad but the reason was astounding as well as the fact that Sanskaar was NOT Sanskaar (sounds insane when you read it out loud but I hope you get the gist). 

Do we get a sequel - we were sort of left hangingEmbarrassed

love,
Nyna

PS: Ragini reminded me of Penelope Garcia of Criminal MindsWink


Edited by Nynaeve - 18 April 2016 at 11:23am

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Nimmiii
Y Y Y ..Y OS?? Make it two Shot na ..pleaseee..Pretty Please You cant do this yaar  I mean you cant leave in Midway without our darlins meet

And coming to OS ..It was damn brilliant me ..nuvuu asalu supero super ra nimmi ..For a god damn sec I never thought it was sanky ..I was eyeing laksh ..but gosh that was such a mindboggling twist..ClapClap

I loved that equation b/w swasan and That one moments where they are close and get lost in each other..awww and he let her have their selfie together , he know swara would never disclose ..aww TRUST..man I love this OS ..Embarrassed Brilliant piece of writing nimmiClapClapClap

Love
Lucky

PS; Please make them meet na ..Please
 

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 6:18am | IP Logged
ohh what a suspense. what a justis by sanskar to his friends plzz make one more part and let swara and sanskar come together forver. come to this os i love it love it most. ragu is computer genius laksha as always cool. bonding between swasan is so pure. waiting for next.

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