TwiNj OS: Mumbai dreams

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
This is my first time writing an OS so please tell me how you found it, SRK is one of my all time faves and I am totally in the Fan zone so I thought it'd be perfect to combine my two favourite worlds. 


On the way to the hotel:
Kunj: Twinkle, let's make this the most amazing vacation ever, deal?
Twinkle: Hmm...
Kunj: Tu abhi bhi bohot dukhi hai na, Mahi ke baare main.
Twinkle sadly replied: It had just started to get better between us Kunj, she had apologised for everything.

Kunj pulled Twinkle in for a hug, he knew that's exactly what she needed. 
Kunj: I know Twinkle, but you'll have to be strong, for Mahi. How long will you live like this for? Why don't you remember her like she'd want you to, with happiness. 
Twinkle: I guess... 
Kunj wiped away her tears and reassured her that she'd be ok. They got to the hotel where they checked in and went into their room. Twinkle went on to the terrace from where she could see the entire Mumbai.

Twinkle: Kunj, tum jaante ho, people call Mumbai, the city of dreams?
Kunj: Acha, do you have any dreams which you want to get fulfilled?
Twinkle: Actually Kunj... mujhe Shahrukh Khan ka ghar dekhna hai 
Twinkle said this with the biggest smile on her face, Kunj knew how much Twinkle loved SRK and how this would be amazing for her, to bring that smile back on her face.
Kunj: Bas, itni si baat, don't worry Twinkle we will go to SRK's house first thing tomorrow but first, let's go sightseeing!

The next day:
Twinkle woke up first all excited, today was the big day, she was going to go to Mannat! She gave Kunj a kiss on the forehead and Kunj smiled feeling her presence around him.
Kunj: Aaj kisi ko bohot pyaar aa raha hai mujhpar, aisa kya kiya hai maine?
Twinkle: Kunj, you're fulfilling my dream, I am so excited, when can we go?
Kunj checked his phone with a text message which said "SRK is still shooting, not now, in a few hours"
Kunj: I have an idea, how about first, we complete one of my dreams
Twinkle: Yes yes Kunj, anything what is your dream?
Kunj: Tumhe yaad hai maine tumhe kya bola tha, ke zindagi bhar main apni Simran ka intezaar karta tha, ke woh kaisi hogi?
Twinkle: Haan, tumne kaha toh tha
Kunj: Toh let's go Maratha Mandir, and watch DDLJ.
Twinkle: BRILLIANT IDEA! I love DDLJ, it's my most favourite, let's go!
Whilst Twinkle was getting ready, Kunj was just observing the happiness on her face. In his mind he made sure to thank bebe for allowing them to go on holiday, this was his perfect chance to make Twinkle herself again.

A few hours later:
Twinkle and Kunj walked out of the cinema together holding hands.
Twinkle: Waah kya film thi, i've watched DDLJ 40 times, but this was most definitely the best.
Kunj: Of course best hoga, aakhir tum mere saath jo thi.
Twinkle: Mr Sarna, Itna bhaau mat khao, it was the best because it was on the big screen and not my TV screen.
Kunj: Whatever you say, ab chale, SRK ka ghar dekhne.

Outside Mannat:
There was a huge crowd of fans all staring up to the terrace. SRK would normally come out and wave at the millions of fans who had come to show their love for him from every corner of the world. Twinkle was totally in her zone, a girl in the back somewhere had played some SRK songs and Twinkle was happilly singing along, from Dard E Disco to Aankhein Khuli. All of a sudden, that girl who started playing Tujhe Dekha Toh and Kunj got down on one knee. Kunj and Twinkle started happilly dancing away and all the fans were cheering and clapping. All of a sudden, one of the body guards came out and noticed Kunj.

Bodyguard: Arre Kunj, tu yahan?
Kunj: Ravi, yaar tu kaisa hai aur yahaan kya kar raha hai.
Twinkle: Kunj yeh kaun hai?
Kunj: Mera ek purana dost hai.
Ravi: Oh haan, main Shahrukh sir ke saath kaam karta hoon, tumhe pata nahi tha?
Kunj: Bilkul bhi nahi, aur by the way yeh meri beautiful wife Twinkle, City of Dreams main aayi hai, SRK ka ghar dekhne.
Ravi: Aap dono abhi aaj raat ko free ho? 
Kunj: Haan kyun?
Ravi: Aap mumbai main aaye ho, hamare ghar dinner ke liye ana hi parega, aur bhaabi ji, aapke liye ek surprise bhi hai mere paas.
Twinkle: Surprise, mere liye? Haan, hum zaroor aayenge hai na Kunj?
Twinkle looked at Kunj with excitement in her eyes, how could Kunj refuse? Her happiness was what he had been waiting for for the longest time.
Kunj: Zaroor aayenge.

Ravi gave Kunj his address and Twinkle made sure that he'd got the right address, just so she could get her surprise. Nightfall came round and Twinkle and Kunj both get ready for dinner. They knocked on the door where they were greeted by Ravi who took them in and made them sit down. As they were talking, the doorbell rang. 
Ravi: Bhaabi, Aap hi darwaaza khol lo, mujhe Kunj ko kuch dikhana tha iss ghar ke baare main.
Twinkle: Haan haan zaroor, main abhi aayi
She opened the door and she couldn't believe what she saw. She pinched herself, twice, whilst the person at the front door gave a beautiful smile which exhibited his perfect dimple. 
SRK: Aur aap hongi Twinkle Sarna?
Twinkle: Aap ko mera naam maalum hai, kaise?
SRK: Uske wajah se (SRK pointed towards Kunj) Actually, Kunj ne Ravi ko bataya tha ke aap ki behen ki death ki baad aap kitni udaas ho gaayi thi. Aur woh aapko khush karna chahte the, is liye isne Ravi ko poocha agar hamari mulakat ho sakti hai. Ravi toh mera bohot acha dost hai, aur usko main mana toh nahi kar sakta.
That night was one of the best nights of Twinkle's life. When she came back to Amritsar, she proudly showed everyone how she had met SRK because of her amazing husband. Kunj was delighted to see his Twinkle back to normal, and well when it came to night time, you can just guess what Kunj got as his reward... right?

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Komal1298 Senior Member

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Ahaa amzing amazing.. lagta nhi pehli baar likha..Clap

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.Khamosh. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS Embarrassed

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Duumps IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
An awesome OS

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17.sonal Goldie

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
I am on cloud 9,
Very good ji very good..
Srk..first love of my life.. 
Jus loved it.. This much... Embarrassed

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Sherni_Jerry IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 2:56am | IP Logged
amazing os. you are really good. please write more ;)

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Iansomer1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 3:12am | IP Logged
it was adorable and amazing
loved it
do write more
cute os

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adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 10:00am | IP Logged
loved it

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