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Idhar Udhar | ArHi Story (Ch 4 - Pg 5 - UPDATED 18/07) (Page 4)

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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
am loving it :-)

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Sounds like a great story! Time to go on your blog to read it Smile

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Chapter Three Updated!




Edited by AngelTeen - 03 May 2016 at 8:39am

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AngelTeen, after reading the first two chapters, I thought this is a light hearted romantic story. But chapter 3 was very intense.

Akash is so right. India is far behind in accepting gay people. But still there is awareness. People have accepted Karan Johar. He is a celebrity and even then it took him so long to come out in the public. I can't imagine how difficult would it be for a common man to announce this to the family/friends. I am sure parents will call some pundit and do havan/pooja or even worse pressurize them to get married immediately.

Nicely written.



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well written...

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Nice update. :)

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Hi AT ji, 

The first thing I notice is the length of the sentences. I tend to read fast but now am learning to slow down, even re-read a few lines, to capture the essence in it's entirety. 

I love the dialogues and each and every character portrayed is unique in their own way, have their own individualities setting them apart. Were Arnav and Khushi the same people 10 years ago? How different they were, time will only tell. 

The reactions that follow after Arnav self-invites himself, is a clue that he has changed by leaps and bounds over the years. Chori-chipe talking needs practice and Khu and Aru have quite the experience. They are managing to fool Akash and Aditi at the moment, I think she might pick up a hint soon and yet remain mum and let Khushi do the honors like promised. 

Aditi - There is always a sweet girl like her in every class in every school.  Now does Aman too have a crush on her, or is it just Akash? 

It is going to interesting to know what professions the rest are in, Khushi being a super model is intriguing enough. 

Planning a get together is challenging, never knew it was this easy. It's just that priorities matter and of course the company. 

Chapter Teen going to be thrice as long? The updates are amazing enough and having long ones are an added bonus. 


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