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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
yes... aap logone sahi suna...my second venture with 2nd OS  which is the continuation of my first OS Tashan E Ishq


 thank you all people for the constant support and encouragement in bringing up the writer in me.thank you soo much...


  well over to the story where we stopped with... yes the thahaan marriage.


  well though bihaan did marry thapki again with anger and under force, but he did it as it was required to protect her from

  being harassed by stranger(in the 1st OS).


  he dint want to anyone calling her a s**t when he is around her.


   Thapki was not sad anymore... as she has accept bihaan already in her heart. all she wnated now is to make him understand her and gain his trust back
  again and this time a pakkawala one.

  the moment bihaan put sindoor on thapki's mang itself ... she took an oath in her heart that she will never leave him alone

  and will always be there by his side and to give him all the love that he ever missed in this life and not make him feel anymore anaad/orphan.

  she also took an oath to reform him into a very good person... no matter what she has to suffer for it.


  she knew that all he has of his own is just her and she wanted to give him the best of her, to a soul who sacrifices his wishes for others...

  she remember the scene wherein bihaan tells about vasu's partiality towards her son.a tear  dripped through her eyes.Bihaan although was protective about
 her ... but dint want to show it to her.


  scene house:

  both bihaan and thapki reach pandey nivas.thapki was walking to the house wearing her mangalsutra and sindoor as a proud wife.

  just then she hit something hard that she just fell right there.bihaan came there and yelled at her telling that she has to always hit thing and fall.


  he pulled her up and asked her to walk.but she couldn't merely walk as she had twisted her angle.

  bihaan saw her pain and took her in his arms and went to the house.

  thapki remembers the scene where she washed of the sindoor from mang and broke the mangalsutra. she held bihaan tight as if  he was just her property and

  looked at him with possesiveness.mangalam bhagvan plays... they enter the house... everyone was presnt in the livingroom and chitchatting.

  everyone notice them and come asking what happened to thapki.


  bihaan places her on the sofa and goes to the room showing anger.

  thapki tells everyone that she tripped over a hard stone and fell.preeti bhabhi saw thapki's mang filled and even the malgalsutra.

  she teases thapki and tells that thahaan has moved forward in life and we even have prove for it.


  everyone luks at thapki and is shocked to see her in a patni form.

  dadima asked did bihaan force you to wear this.

  thapki readily told that bihaan dint force her as she wanted to make the marriage complete.she was happy.

  dhruv sir gets shocked to see some other new feelings which thapki has for bihaan. with disgust he rushes to his room.

  dadi asks shradha to put oilment on thapki's legs and shradha  gets angry and appies oilment. thapki get better.
 everyone goes.

  shradha tells thapki that how dare you make me put oilment on your legs. she takes thapki's right hand and tries to hurt herwith a knife. to protect herself

 thapki catches the knife which shradha cuts the tips of thapki's hands...

  it starts bleeding... thapki cries.
 
 shradha tells her that this is nothing, i will do even more bad with you.

 bihaan sees all this from top... as he was helpless in that situation he  hits on the wall and his hands bleed...


 scene thahaan room:


  thapki slowly comes to the room and takes her pillow and goes down to sleep...


  bihaan acts like he was sleeping and towards the midnight he gets up to see thapki. he see her cut fingers and feels sad as it is still bloody.

  he first aid box and puts bandage on her fingers.thapki turns other side with pain. bihaan looks at her and gets lost in his memories of the bee sting when thapki

  treated him.

  he goes and sleeps.


  scene: morning thahaan room

  thapki gets up and finds bihaan sleeping and she find her fingers with bandage and she tells to herself that sheerji cant accept the fact that he cares and plans something

  she gets ready and bihaan also gets ready... both are using the mirror... thapki is putting earings and she sees the malgalsutra on her neck and

  remembers maa's-poonamji  scene where she tells  thapki that that one day one person will come ... the sharjahan of your dreams... and fill you mang and make you his and will protect
  you from any danger.his pain becomes yours and your pain his.

  thapki takes the sindoor dabba which her mother had given to her on her marriage which she never opened after the truth revelation.


  thapki takes the tin and tries to put sindoor but her cut fingers are bandaged so she is finding it hard to take.


  bihaan sees this  and tells thapki to give the sindoor and mangalam plays...

  bihaan fills her mang... dhruv sir was passingby and saw this... he was shocked and out of jealousyness went down to eat.

  thapki stands there still as she starts looking at bihaan in an awkward way.


 
 livingroom:
 dadi tells everyone that today is a special day and we have a guestin our house  which is gurumaa...

 gurumaa enters the house and evryone takes ashirvad from her.

  both thahaan took ashirvaad as couple. gurumaa praises thapki as she has now totally been transformed as bihaan's wife.

  they all invite gurumaa for food.

  all males have their food first and they leave the plate for the wifes to eat... that was the ritual when gurumaaa came to house.

  everyone has food and now they leave the table and goes.

  bihaan knows that thapki will not eat in his plate so he takes it to kitchen before that thapki stopps him and tells keep the plate there as i have to eat.

  na na na na plays... bihaan shocked to the core.

  although he was internally happy... he gathered courage and looked expressionless.

 thapki has food in bihaans plate and all ladies have their food.

 gurumaa lateron goes...

 only this much for today...

 if anybody likes and want its continuation let me know.

 #mission top5

 people let me know if any modification required!

 

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
dont ask. please do continue. like your both os. loved these series. please vontinue soon waiting.

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Awesome!!! Especially that part with Thapki's mom's words and eating in one plate!!
Do continue!!! pls

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
its nice.most attractive element of this os was the way u hv intertwined the scenes frm the show to it.

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
I loved it again !!! Big smile
great work sachu ! Clap
i just loved the scene where bihaan was filling her hairline and dhruv saw it and got jealous ! Evil Smile
He deserves that ! LOL
please continue writing more !WinkEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Clap

Plz do continueLOL

I loved it! 

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
No need to ask.
Plz continue soon

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Posted: 12 April 2016 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
this is really sweet and romantic. We'll definitely get Scenes like this sooner or later

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