Twinj OS: Love Is Pain Part 2 (for hrideyy) - Page 2

This OS was beautiful.. I loved the way Twinkle was scared to love.. And everything she did and thought was so apt.
Kunj trying his best for her ❤️
Again so many feels! The last part was the best where Twinkle finally gave in and reached out for his hand 😳
Keep writing!
P.S. I love you so much for giving part 2 of all your previous Oneshots. 🤗

It was AWESOME!!!

This was so beautiful
Loved it to the core 😳

This part was sooo good and beyond words👍🏼. The comparison of ocean and love was was apt. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: bluelake99

RES

😊   I CAME SECOND !!

UNRES :

IT JUST WORTH IT ..
UR WRITING S SUMTHING ELSE DEAR  ..

D 4RST PART S UNIQUE N ITS WAY ..
WHERE TWINKLE'S POV WERE HIGHLIGHTED THROUGH KUNJ ND KUNJ'S DETERMINATION AS
A HUSBABAND ND COMPANION WAS SHOWN ..

DAT SMALL 'STOP' GET ITS OPEN END N DS 2ND PART .. 
THIS PART ALSO RESOLVES AROUND TWINKLE'S THOUGHT OF SCARED PAINFUL LOVE ,, AND KUNJ'S TASK TO GET INSIDE HER BROKEN HEART TO MEND ND SEWED THE VOID GAP !! 💔  ❤️

SPEECHLESS BY YOUR THOUGHT SHAKTI ON YOUR PHILOSOPHY OF OCEAN ..

AND THE LAST GOLDEN FEATHER ADDED IN THE END WHEN U TWISTED THE THOUGHT OF TWINKLE IN A POSITIVE WAY JUST LYK OTHER SIDE OF COIN SO SMOOTH YET COMPLICATED ..
AND KUNJ'S CONSISTENCY THROUGH OUT WITH TWINKLE S COMMENDABLE ..
KUNJ S PURE BLISS HERE ..

THEIR UNSPOKEN FEELINGS SPEAK LOUDLY IN THAT PEACEFUL VALLEY IN FRONT OF DEEP , CALM OCEAN SURFACE ~~ WHERE THEIR SCRATCHED HEART  LONGING TOGETHERNESS AND MELTED IN EACH OTHERS ARM !!

~~ A IMPERFECTLY PERFECT ENDING ~~

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.

Shakti It was amazing

I loved kunj's efforts to make her smile and she did too,I know she will take time but everything will be alright,And this was written so well shakti,and thank you for dedicating it to me🤗

Edited by ...Shakti... - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

This OS was beautiful.. I loved the way Twinkle was scared to love.. And everything she did and thought was so apt.
Kunj trying his best for her ❤️
Again so many feels! The last part was the best where Twinkle finally gave in and reached out for his hand 😳
Keep writing!
P.S. I love you so much for giving part 2 of all your previous Oneshots. 🤗

Originally posted by: Anisha-k.

It was AWESOME!!!

I could literally feel the emotions...

I seriously love all ur works!!!

And thank u so much for sending me a PM!

Love u di!🤗

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

It is just so beautiful

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

This was so beautiful
Loved it to the core 😳