Tere Mere Darmiyaan Ratri os updated on pg 4 - Page 3

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Originally posted by 1973deepak


Thanks the trailer was nice and you can give title based on the investigation. Please update soon


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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Tasha1994


wonderful title


Thank you
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Please read the prolouge on first page before reading this part. Its a continuaton from that.


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Raghav tried to brush away his fears. He composed himself.


Raghav: Hi Tejal! Hope everything is fine.


Tejal: did trisha di called you today?


Raghav: no! Trisha teek toh hai?


Tejal: Pata nahi! Woh subah library gayi thi jab mein apni friend ki ghar gaya project work ke liye. Woh ab tak lauta nahi. Aur woh apni phone bhi nahi udarahi. Woh kabhi aisa nahi karthi. Mujehey toh bahuth dar lagara ha hai. Ma papa bhi yahan nahi hai. Mujehey nahi pata mein kya karoon. Kahan gayi hogi meri di?


She has almost broken after this.


Raghav: Tejal relax! Kuch nahi hoga tumari di ko. Trisha is a brave girl. I am sure she will be fine. I am coming to your residence.


After consoling and assuring tejal he kept the phone. Though he consoled Tejal he himself couldn't stop getting worried for trisha. The memories of his past came back. Once again he felt scared of loosing someone close to his heart. He called Rajbir and bikram and informed the matter. He has also asked Bikram to go to the public library and enquire about Trisha and meet him at Trisha's house. Before leaving the house he just couldnt stop himself in front of the pooja room for praying for Trisha's safety.



Trisha's house!


Tejal opened the door hoping that it would be trisha. But it was raghav. Even though she has not meet him before she knew everyone of her team as the team & the members are always in headings of the news channel. Tejal invited him inside.


Tejal: aapko kuch pata chala?


Raghav: nahi! But dont worry but bahuth jald Trisha miljayengi.


She was on a verge of crying.


Raghav: Tejal please don't cry. Trisha ko Kuch nahi hoga!


She wiped her tears.


Raghav: mein tumse kuch sawal poochna chati hoon.


Tejal: yes please


Raghav: kya subah jane se pehele Trisha tumse kisi se milne ke bare mein kuch bath karli. Koi rishtidaar aur friends?


Tejal: ji nahi. Di ki nature aap ko janta hai na. Woh bauth reserved hai. Usko uthna friends bhi nahi.


Raghav: kya trisha parishan thi?


Tejal: ji bilkul nahi. Infact woh bahuth kush thi. Mere liye meri favourite khana bhi bana rahi thi.


Raghav smiled. He remembered during a case investigation he has teased her by asking whether she ever entered kitchen? She suprised him by saying that working women can be equally good home maker. Trisha always suprised him.


Raghav: trisha bahuth acha khana banathi thi?


Tejal: kya? She looked at him amazed. But still she replied. Ha bahuth acha khana banatha hai woh. Actually mere liye hamesha woh hi lunch banatha hai agar woh out of town nahi gayi toh.


Raghav smiled. His phone rang. It was Bikram. He informed that he spoke with the librarian & confirmed that Trisha had left the library long bang. He also said that they have found trisha's car & handbag from the parking lot. Her mobile phone was also found inside the bag. Raghav asked bikram to come with her car & handbag to the headquarters. He also asked him to contact the cyber cell and collect the details of trisha's call records.[ Swati has gone to her native place. She is on leave.]


Rajbir too has arrived by that time. He too was shocked when he received raghav's call about trisha.


Rajbir: raghav mein ne apni sources se patha karli koi bhi criminals jise humari wajah se jail jana pada jail ki bahar nahi hai.


Raghav closed his & took a deep breath.


Raghav: tejal hume trisha ki room search karna padhega. Shayad kuch clue hume miljayega.


Tejal: ya sure. Uper se left.


Raghav looked at rajbir. He too followed him. Raghav stopped while he was crossing dining table. He could see trisha had neatly arranged the dishes for lunch. He moved towards the table. He opened the dishes. He could smell the aroma of tasty food.


Raghav: waki mein trisha acha khana banati thi khushboo bahuth achi hai.


Rajbir: ha raghav mujehey toh lagtha hai hume ek baar khalene chahiye. Apni boss ki haath ka khana khaney ka saubhay har rooz thodi na milti


Tejal who was standing there lost her control.


Tejal: oh god! Whats wrong with you guys? Yahan meri di gayab hai aur aap log khana enjoy karne ki soch rahi hai. Dekhi ye mujehey meri di jald se jaald wapas chahiye. Agar unhe kuch hogaya mein aap logoko chodungi nahi.


She gave a disappointing look & went towards her room.


Raghav: ye ladki itna impossible kyun hai?


Rajbir: kitni samjehdar hai humari trisha aur yeh. He shook his head.


They moved towards trisha's room. Her room was well maintained.


Raghav: yeh kamre se zyaad library lagra hai. { seeing Trisha's book collection in her rack.} usse library jane ki kya zaroort thi? Khud ek library mein rahthi hai.


Rajbir: aur aaj kal public library mein jake book padna sirf aur sirf trisha hi karsaktha hai.


They searched trisha's room. While searching through her books raghav got a red rose from one of them. He remembered giving a red rose to trisha after clearing his suspension during zorino's case. He smiled & kept it back. Even though they searched entire room they couldn't get anything which they could relate what had happened to trisha. Raghav took trisha's laptop from her study table.


Raghav: rajbir mujehey lagtha hai hume trisha ki laptop check karna padega. Uske liye hume office jana padega. Bikram ne ek tech expert ko headquarters bulaya. Aur hume tejal ko bhi saath le jana padega.


Rajbir: what usko? Par kyun?


Raghav: trisha ki parents yahan nahi hai. Aur hume nahi pata trisha kahan hai aur hume kab miilega? Usse akele yahan nahi rahne de tha. Trisha ko khudh kehthey huey main suna woh sirf dikhne mein badi hai. Bilkul bacchi ki tarah hai. So we have to convince her.


Rajbir agreed with raghav.



Cbi headquarters!



Raghav, rajbir & bikram had gone through trisha's laptop. Her laptop mainly consist of work related stuffs. Details of cases they have handled. The newspaper writings & videos related to cases etc. They almost gave up. Suddenly raghavs eyes caught on something.


Tejal who was sitting in trisha's cabin came to conference hall.


Tejal: kya aap logo ko kuch clue mila di ki laptop se?


Rajbir & bikram nodded there head in negative.


Raghav: lekin mujehey ek clue mila.


Bikram: kaisa clue?


Raghav: khudh trisha ne apni laptop mein choda.


Rajbir: matalab?


Raghav: trisha kuch research kar rahi thi aur apni laptop mein usse related notes bhi banathi thi. Mein padtha hoon.


" hindusthan! Aaj hum har ek field mein apni hunar aur pehachan bana chuka hai. Jab hum hamari desh ki 68th independence anniversary celebrate kar rahi hai ek bahuth bayanak sachai bhi hume pechana hai. Hamari desh mein har rooz ek police station mein atleast ek ladki missing complaints register ho jatha hai. humari desh mein ladki ya har field mein ladko ko mukhabla karthi hai. Par ladkiya kai bhi jagah safe nahi hai. Iss missing ladkiyo mein 95% ladkiya aaj bhi missing status mein hai. Woh sirf ek ladki nahi. Kisiki beti ya behan ya biwi bhi hai. Kiski puri duniya ho sakthi hai. Kanoon ki haath kabhi kabhi bahuth choti hoti hai"


There was pin drop silence in the room.


Bikram: raghav tum kehna kya chathi ho. Kai trisha bhi women traffiking ki racket mein phas gaye?


Raghav nodded his head in an yes.


Rajbir: oh no! Ab hum kya kare?


Raghav: rajbir tum pata karo kya uss public library ki area ki ass pass area mein recently koi ladkiyo ki missing hogayi? Agar hogayi toh zaroor us area ki aur ass pass police station mein missing report tho likha hoga.


Rajbir: ha raghav mein pata kartha hoon.


Raghav: aur bikram tum apni sources se pata karni ki koshish karo aisi kuch rackets ki bare mein. Humain kuch bhi karke trisha ko jald se jald dhoodna hoga. Jitna hum late hogey tho utna trisha ko milna mushkil hoga.


Rajbir came back to conference hall.


Raghav: tumara shak sahi nikla raghav. Pichle kuch dino se purani delhi aur ass pass jaga se laghbagh 12 ladkiyo ki missing complains likhi gayi. Aur kisi bhi ladki ab tak milna nahi.


Bikram: raghav meri sources se pata chal ki kuch rackets hai ladkiyo ko videsh mein bhejne ki. Mostly to arab countries.


Raghav: agar aisa hai toh hume har ek boat yards aur sea routes check karna padega. Yeh log zaroorr ladkiyo ko by air leja nahi saktha. So the only way is sea route. Come on lets hurry up.



Trisha slowly opened her eyes only to find she is lying down in some unknown place. She remembered after taking books from the library she went directly to the parking lot. She was about to open her car but something hit her head and after that she couldn't remember anything. She got up only to find that along with her few more girls are there. They too are clueless just like her. The agent's eyes made her realise that along with her these girls are also kidnapped. She knew she cant panic. She need to deal with this situation somehow. She not only have to save herself but also these girls & also she has to reach the hands behind this. Trisha could hear the noise of sea. She was sure that they are going through sea route. But which sea route and how far they are from land no idea. And she has no clue about the time. She decided to talk to the girls. If they stand together she has a way in her mind to get out of this mess.


Trisha: dekhiye aap log khabraye math. Mein ek cbi officer hoon. Hum sab kidnap hua hain. Ho saktha hai ye kisi women traffiking ki kaam ho. Hume sea route se koi aur jagha leja rahi. Agar humsab saath hai toh humein yeh mushkil paar kar saktha. I have an idea.


Trisha spoke with the girls.


Trisha: kya aap log tayar hai?


Girls nodded there head.


Trisha & the girls bang the door hardly in which they are locked. And shouted.


" daarwasa kholiye daarwasa kholiye" they kept on banging the door.


After some time they could hear the noise off door being opened.


A guy who looked stout like a gundey came inside.


Guy: kyun chila rahi ho? Chup ho jao. Tum khoobsurat ladkiyo ko humne isliye yahan le aaya thaki hum tum logo ko dubai sheikh ko bhej sakhey. Chup chap baito. Samjhi.


Trisha who had already kept a wooden rod before banging the door. She hit his head hardly from behind. The guy fell un consious.


Trisha: come on girls fast move out.


Girls moved out of the room fastly one by one. Trisha had got the lock and key from the guys hands. And after everyone

Moved out trisha locked the room.


She fastly locked the drivers cabin too moving cautiously without making him understand what had happened. That could get them in danger.


One girl: mam aapko kaise patha chala ship mein sirf ek aadmi hai?


Trisha: jab muhejey samej mein aaya hum sea route mein Hein. Main daarwaze ke pass Chala aur main iski Baath suni. There is a life boat in this ship. Lets move girls. We need to move really fast.


Trisha along with the girls moved toward the life boat.


Trisha: aap sab log boat mein baitiye.


One girl: mam aap


Trisha: mein nahi aa saktha.


Girls: par mam.


Trisha: suniye hum log toh bach gayi. Par agar aaj mein tum logko ki saath aagayi toh ek bahuth bada racket bachjayenge. Woh log kai aur jakar masoom ladkiyo ko agwa kar behj denge. Muhej un logoko pakdna hogo. Sasa dilwana hogo. I am sure meri team muhj tak bahuth jald pahujayegi. Muhej un pe poora barosa hai. Aur tum log apna khayal rakhna. I am sure tum log safe ghar pahujayenge. Yeh meri colligue agent raghav ka number hai. Jab tum log pahujayega iss number par contact karna.


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Trisha was abnormally surrounded by silence. She always belived that silence is golden but today this silence is killing her. She never was scared of risking herself. And today she has taken the biggest risk of her life. That too only because of the trust she has on him. Raghav! She knew he will never let to break her trust on him. he will find her soon. And save her from here. Like usual. The thought of him brought a smile on her face even in this situation.



Cbi office



Rajbir: raghav muhej khabar mili ki ek chote se ship yard se ek boat dhoopair le gaya hai. Uss mein kuch ladkiya bhi the. Ek harbour worker ne byaan di hai.


Raghav: rajbir i am sure trisha bhi the uss mein. Kyunki ye jagah jahan se trisha gayab hui uss me sabse kareeb the. We have to hurry up. Bikram speed boat ko arrange karo. Hume jald se jald uss ship tak pahujhna hoga. Waqath nahi hai hamare pass. Lets go.



In the ship.



Trisha came back from the thoughts when she heard someone shouting. The guy whom she had hit and locked in the room is standing in front of her. She got scared. He hold her hands tightly.


Guy: tume kya lagaa mein hamasha hamesha ke liye behosh ho jayega aur mere paas sirf uss kamre ki ek chhabi hai. Tumne toh uss 12 ladkiyo ko bachaliye. Par tum kyun nahi gayi un logo ki saath.


Trisha: kyunki tum ek galth ladki ko aghwa kiya. Mein ek cbi officer hoon. Aur mere faarz bantha hein ki tum jaise perverts aur tumari saathiyo ko saaza dilwana. Aur mein tum logo ko saaza dilwake rahoonga.


Guy: arey waha. Tum sirf khoobshoourat nahi balki dimaagi wali bhi hai. Aur muhej tumari iss himmat aur tumari yeh andaz bahuth achi lagi. Issiliye mein tume tumari galtiyo ko saaza nahi dhooughi balki tume pyaar dhooungi.


He smiled and forcefully holded trisha in his arms. Trisha was struggling. She could feel some pricking pain in her hands. She realised that he had drugged her. Her body started becoming weak.


Guy: hey khoobsurat cbi officer tume drug kiya gaya haai. Aur tum kuch ghando tak kamsor hojayenge. Par tum sab dekh sakthi ho aur sun sakthi ho. Ab tum apni aankho se dekhna mein tume kya karooungi aur tum chakar bhi kuch nahi kar paoge.


Trisha slowly fell down. She could see the guy coming near her. He slowly touched her face. Trisha wanted to kick him & run away. But she couldn't even move. She closed her eyes tightly. Suddenly she heard a gunshot. She opened her eyes only to see raghav standing with his gun. She could see that he was clouded with anger. The guy was lying down in front of her wincing in pain as he got a bullet shot in his hands.


Raghav came near him and beat him hardly. He was going on beating him. The guy was shouting in pain. Even when he started bleeding raghav didn't stop beating.


Raghav: tumari himmat kaisi hui meri trisha ko haath lagane ko. Tume mein mardaloongi.


He was going on beating him. Trisha wanted to stop him. Neither she could move nor able to speak. The effect of drug and stress was taking her and slowly she closed her eyes.




Trisha opened her eyes slowly. She could see her entire team & her sister surrounded by a nurse and a doctor. She realised that she is in a hospital.


Doctor: ms. Trisha how are you feeling now?


Trisha: better.


Rajbir: thank god trisha tum theekh ho aur sahi salamath wapas aayi. Waise tumne toh bahuth badhuri ki kaam karli.


Trisha: matlab


Bikram: tumari waje se humne ek poori women traffiking racket ke logo ko pakda. Aur use logo ne jis ladkiyo past mein kidnap karke bhej diye uske sare information hume mili aur central ministry se order aaya international level pe us ladkiyo free karne aur jo bhi iss se jude un logo ko bhi arrest karawaya aur un logo pe case bhi charge kar liye.


Trisha: aur woh ladkiya jisne mein lifeboat pe bheja


Rajbir: woh logo sahi salamat aapna ghar wapas aaya. Aur woh log tume milne bahuth jald aayege.


Trisha: thank god woh log safe hai. Tejal please rona band karo. Mein teekh hoon. Aur bikram please inhe ghar le jao. Varne inhe bhi yahan admit karna padega.


Tejal: di mein kahi nahi jaoongi


Trisha: tejal please tumari haalath dekho. Please mere liye ghar jake thoda aaram koro. Please.


Bikram and tejal bid good bye to everyone.


Rajbir: ha uss nurse ne tumrahe liye kuch daawayi kharidh kar lene ko kaha. Mein woh leke aata hoon.


Rajbir left with the prescription. Only trisha and raghav was left back.


Trisha: raghav kya hua tume? Tum kuch nahi bol rahi hoon. Naaraz hoon kya?


Raghav: ha bahuth. Kya zaroorth thi uss ship mein akhele rukhne ki. Life boat mein uss ladkiyo ki saath kyun wapas nahi aayi tum? Aur kisne kaha tume yeh sab heropanthi karne ke liye. Agar waqth par mein nahi aayi toh usne tume.


Raghav took a deep breath.


Trisha hold his hands.


Trisha: kya sirf tume adventeurous bane ka haaq hai. I think ab tume samjh mein aayi hongi ki Jab tumne meri ek bhi baath nahi sunkar apne jaan khathre mein dali meri kya haalaath hui hongi.


Raghav: trisha maazak math karo.


Trisha: i was not joking raghav. Muhej apni team par aur tum par pura barosa tha. Muhej patha tha tum zaaroor muhj takh pachungi aur har bar ki tharah muhey bachaungi. Aur iss bar mein thanks keha kar tume chotha nahi karoongi.Waise tumne almost uss aaadmi maridalaa.


Raghav: aur mein kya karthi. Agar bikram aur rajbir ne muhej nahi rokho tho mein une apni haath se mar kardiya hotha. Uski himath kaisi hui tume chhone ki.


Trisha smiled.


Trisha: ha woh toh sirf tumari haaq hai na.


Raghav too smiled.


Raghav: koi shaaq?


Trisha: nahi bilkul bhi nahi.


Raghav: waise trisha tumne sahi likha tha.


Trisha: kya


Raghav: ek insaan kisi ki puri duniya ho sakthi hai. Jab tum mili muhejey laga ki meri poori duniya wapas mili.


Trisha smiled. Raghav kissed her forehead.



So thats it i apologise if i made any mistake. This is my first attempt in crime series. Any query you guys can ask me.











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Edited by Az07 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
Uma awesome story. I loved the concern of Raghav for Trisha how he again and again said uski himmat kaise hui meri Trisha ko chune ki. Trisha can cook well and rose between the books, this shows how much she loves everything given by him. like the social topic of women trafficking and the last scene ha mujhe chune ka haq to sirf tumhi ko hai,  loved the ratri scenes πŸ˜³
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by 1973deepak


Uma awesome story. I loved the concern of Raghav for Trisha how he again and again said uski himmat kaise hui meri Trisha ko chune ki. Trisha can cook well and rose between the books, this shows how much she loves everything given by him. like the social topic of women trafficking and the last scene ha mujhe chune ka haq to sirf tumhi ko hai,  loved the ratri scenes πŸ˜³

Thank you
Yes how can someone touch Trisha obviously raghav will go mad only he has that right and of course she loves him a lot how can she lose that rose that's her first gift by him 
Yes as I said a working woman is equally a good homemaker it's sad that in TV shows they never show this a women is multi talented by her birth 
Yes women are not safe in our country it's an ugly fact 
Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the update off to read it
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Tasha1994


thanks for the update off to read it


Sure take your time
And give lengthy comments it motivates
Posted: 7 years ago
aww such a cute story loved it a lot .RaTri rocked in the story .loved Raghav's concern for trisha a lot .wow Raghav calling trisha meri trisha that soo cute .loved how the all team worked together. especially trisha loved the way she showed courage and helped all the girls to get out safely. the hospital scene was really awesome with Raghav kissing trisha. thanks for this wonderful story. really loved it .do write more for RaTri u are simply awesome
Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats for your first ever attempt in the crime series Uma πŸ‘πŸ‘
I loved the OS πŸ‘ 
Awesome and intelligently placed all the events and incidents. Teja and Raghav's convo and Raghav's worries for Trisha -- loved it. Raghav thinking and getting amazed over Trisha being a good cook, all the smiles on his face made the scene a bit light amidst all that tension. πŸ˜³
Loved Raghav getting the clue and Trsiha working upon the very serious matter of girl trafficking. I somehow, can see these agents are so protective towards the people and love their concern so dutiful. 
Trisha did not panic and thought maturely to rescue all the other girls becos she knew that she will be saved in time by none other than Raghav !!!
Liked Raghav collecting all the clues and reached to Trisha and that in time. He said, Meri Trisha This was dreamy. This was cute. This was magical. 
The last scene tells how they both fear for each other and how they feel for each other. ❀️Terrific story and lovely ending. Thanks Uma, for this very beautiful RaTri, i enjoyed reading it and then commenting. 
Loves πŸ€—
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Tasha1994


aww such a cute story loved it a lot .RaTri rocked in the story .loved Raghav's concern for trisha a lot .wow Raghav calling trisha meri trisha that soo cute .loved how the all team worked together. especially trisha loved the way she showed courage and helped all the girls to get out safely. the hospital scene was really awesome with Raghav kissing trisha. thanks for this wonderful story. really loved it .do write more for RaTri u are simply awesome


Thank you dear
Trisha is a strong girl. Even putting her life at risk she didn't back out from her duty
Well Meri Trisha came out naturally Trisha was drugged and almost going to get sexually harassed and witness that is not easy for Raghav she is the women whom he has fallen in love deeply. And the kiss was showing his care for her.

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