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Omggg!!! I just can't believe that I'm the first one shalu 🤗 😆
Edited by pravallika - 8 years ago

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Wonderful start Shalu...
This story has started itself from the mystery...
Arnav's father fight with each other and later his mother died...
While Arnav blamed himself for the same...
But it's not really his fault because he just thought to make his father happy in his childishness...
Not knowing what those pills were for...
Okay so Arnav's mother has this mole which symbolises good luck...
And now Khushi too has one and that too at same place...
What's the relation B/w the duo...
Waiting for next update...
Update soon... 😊

Edited by _CrazyFlames_ - 8 years ago

that was one hell of a start girl. i was going shit shit shit from the moment little arnav got fascinated by those pills. damn it, poor little boy 😭 i can't imagine the kind of guilt he's going to live in for the rest of his life.

and what's with the mole? arnav's mother too had it. don't tell me khushi is rebirth of ratna. 😕

great start. 👍🏼

awesome update more soon

Interesting prologue 

awesome start...very interesting...👏

Very nc nd intrstng concept.. Dffrnt one.. Love it

plz continue soon..

If through this birth Ratna could bring more love to Arnav,it is more than welcome...Shalini, a new venture u are staring soon and must say it is gripping...looking forward for our journey to kick start soon...Hope our Khushi brings Khushi to our Raizada...