Mriara Collab FF : Jaan-e-baharan - Page 2

hi guys,  wanted to start a poll with the possible titles of this collab ff , and sicne its acollab so i cant decide on my own the title so will vote  , for now i have these tieles in mind , please guys if you have more suggestions please  let me know and i wil add it in the poll , i will make the poll tomorrow 

1 . Love is in the air

2. Tumhe apna banane ka

3. Deewana kar raha he

4. Maahi

5. Saason ko  

please guys i want your name suggestions too to add in the poll.

story comtinues;

Tara was cooking lunch in the kitchen ,  and listening to the sound of the rain as it was pouring outside
... She heard someones footsteps com,ing near her, she could feel his masculine scent coming near her until his hand slid  on her waist pullingher .. her back collided  aginst his chest



Edited by miniapplepie - 8 years ago

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"tumhe yahaan kya chahiye?" Tara said without looking at him,
"Mujhe bas apni biwi ke saath do minute akele mei bitana hai.." MJ said.
Tara turned towards him,
"Mei kaam kar Rahi Hun... aur kaam Karte waqt..." But before she could complete her words MJ placed a finger on her lips,
"Shh... tum na batein bohot karti ho..." He whispered, leaning towards her, "Pehle mere baat sunlo... Baba hum dono ko honeymoon pe bhejna chahte hai..." He said.
Tara was very happy listening to this, she could not believe in her ears,  she smiled looking at him..."

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a soft blush appeared onhr cheeks ... and her eyes looked down , he couldnt express how much he loved her pink cheeks... he leaned forward and tara clsoed hr eyes in nervousmness...  he placed a kiss on her cheek...  and whispered in hr  ear : " jab tum aise blush karti ho... toh  bahut pyari lagti ho "

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""Achha...?" Tara said and smiled a little.
"Ye batao hum ja kaha rahe hai honeymoon keliye...?" She asked again,
"Lagta hai bahot excited ho..." Mj winked.
"Batao nah..." Tara said.
"Surprise hai pata chal jayega" Saying this MJ left.

At night, everyone was in the dining hall for dinner. Tara was serving the food,
"Bhaisahab nahi aya khana khane..." Jairaj said this looking at Tara.
Tara was going to say something to him when Rudrapratap entered into the place..."

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Rudrapratap enterd ... he was about to sit when his phone starts ringing
r. Um... hum ..abhi aate ...
he pivks thevcall and leaves from thre ...

tara sits next to mj ... he looks at her   ... she also stares at him .. suddenly mj holds her hand ...and smirks . Tara doesnt know what to do... she loks at him giving a pleading look but he lookedvat her in a nuthy way ... soon jairaj eyes fell on them

Continue soon guys

Please loving the story

Hey Mini, this is great idea ... 😊
Everyone is going superb ⭐️

I am late
Though want to participate ...    Story continues :


Jairaj saw them and smiled himself . For getting everyone's attention, he coughed . Mrityunjay withdrew his hand instantly.
Jairaj - Main aap sabko kuch batana chahta hoon, per Bhai Shahab kaha gaye !

Meanwhile Rudra returned and sat on his chair.
Rudra - Kya baat hai Jairaj , kya batana chahte ho ?
Jairaj - Bhai Shahab main ek decision lia hai. Main Mrityunjay and Tara Bahu ko honeymoon bhejna chahta hoon. In logone ek dusre ke saath utni time nahi bita paya toh maine aisa socha. Aapka kya kheyal hai ?

Tara felt anxious if Tayaji wouldn't give permission..  Rudra gave a hatred look at Mrityunjay who was giving him a wily smile... Rudra thought at the first place Mrityunjay freed his enemy Radha from his captive. Now he and his wife was going to honeymoon ... But he didn't express his feelings.
Rudra - Bohot acche kheyal hai tumhara Jairaj. Par tum jante ho Mrityunjay aab kaise Bhopal ke bahar ja sakte hai. Uske upar charges laga hua hai.

Tara's heart sank there. Anyone could tell seeing her face that she was totally depressed.
Jairaj - Bhai Shahab uske tension mat kijia. Main Police se baat kar chuki hoon.. Aur aise bhi Mrityunjay aab chutne wale hai..

He gave a board smile to Mrityunjay. Everyone was happy to hear this news specially Tara who gave a gleeful smile to Mrityunjay.
Jairaj - Main in dono ko kal hi vej dena chahti hoon.. 
Winks were exchanged between Vasu and Meethi . They also winked at Tara. Tara stared at them angrily but couldn't hide her happiness.

After dinner
Vasu - Wow! Mrityunjay Bhai and Tara Bhai honeymoon pe ja rahe hai kal..
Meethi - Haan, kitni acchi baat hai na...
Vasu - Toh aaj un dono ko thodi satate hai.
Meethi - Nahi nahi . Kal hi in dono ki shaadi hua hai aur aaj unlogo ko disturb karna thik nahi.
Vasu - Bhabi aise mat bolo na. Aise bhi kal jaa rahe hai na in dono. Waha kaha hum disturb karenge..
 

I think it has become big  😳

Edited by Khadeja - 8 years ago

After Khajju's superb portion...


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Mj was returning to his room after talking with Jairaj. He smiled a little reaching in-front of his room, the room was closed, he turned the latch-key, the door opened and he saw Meethi and Vasu there.

Mj- Tum dono yahaan kya kar rahe ho? he said, he didn't expect to see them in his room at this time of night.

Meethi- kya kar rahe ho matlab...hum toh Tara bhabi ko packing mei help karne aye the...

Vasu came and stood beside Meethi,

Vasu- Kyun bhai apko achha nahi laga kya hum help karne aye... She said in an innocent tone and winked at Meethi.

Mj- Nahi nahi bahot achha laga... he replied with a fake smile.

Vasu- toh bhai aaj hum puri raat batein karte hai bahot maza ayega...

Tara was smiling to see Mj's reactions,

Mj-batein karna hai tum dono ka

Meethi and Vasu nodded,

Mj- Meethi Adi bechara akela hai jao usse bhi thoda batein karo aur Vasu jake so jao...

Meethi was going to say something but before that Vasu cried "Bhai ap mujhe bhi nikal rahe ho bahar...this is unfair.."

Mj-Haan kyun ki bacchio ko itni raat tak nahi jagna chahiye

He sent them out of the room and locked the door.

 At Rudrapratap's room:

"Haan dono kal nikal rahe hai yahaan se...tumhe pata hai na tumhe kya karna hoga? Rudrapratap said.

"Ji..." The man replied from the other end of the phone.

"Yaad rahe dono zinda wapas laut kar nahi ana chahiye..." And he cut the call off, a sinister smile played on his lips.

 

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 8 years ago

Great Part Di ⭐️

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After close the door MJ looked at Tara who was busy with packing. And the whole bed was mess with their clothes which irritated MJ.
MJ - tum kab tak packing karogi.
Tara - Are kal jana nahi hai, packing toh karna padega. Aur tum Vasu and Meethi ko bhi vej dia. Aab mujhe yea sab akele karna padega.
Tara showed her fake anger on MJ. MJ went beside Tara and hold her to stop her work.
Tara - Are kya kar rahi ho mujhe packing karna hai.
Saying this she freed her hand and went to closet. Picking some clothes she returned and again occupied at her work.
MJ - Toh tum pure raat baith kar packing karogi ? !
Tara - Haan toh aur kya. Time kaha mila hai. Aur tum bhi toh aapni packing nahi kar rahi ho. mujhe hi toh karna padega na.
This annoyed MJ more and he threw the clothes from her hand. He pushed her in his arm. Tara was little surprised, but tried free herself.
MJ - Tumhe sirf packing ki padi hai, mera nahi. Subah se tumhare piche padi hoon but tum ho ki bhav nahi de rahi ho !
Tara - Toh piche kyun padi ho? Kaun bola hai... Dekho MJ bohot packing baki hai. Abhi nahi karoonga toh time nahi milega.
MJ was now really irritated and let go of her. Angrily said
MJ - Toh tum packing hi karti raho. Main UC jaa rahi hoon.
Saying this he opened the door and angrily got out of room.

Tara smiled herself.
Tara - Gussa kar sakte ho par hak jatana nahi aata ...

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Edited by miniapplepie - 8 years ago