Phir Milenge (RajivAmna ff) last prt uptd - Page 35

Posted: 16 years ago

       Part-29

Recap-
 Hiten Rahul se puchta hai ki kya wo Rhea se shaadi karega, jiska jawab Rahul nahi de paata.. Surveen
Rahul ko samjhati hai ki use Rhea se shaadi ke liye ha kehna chahiye.. Rhea Rahul se uske aur Tamanna ke rishte ke baare mei puchti hai, jiske baad Rahul Rhea ko shaadi ka proposal deta hai......

Ab aage......

Rhea: i know this is very personal per kya tum aur tamannaa.... i mean i can be wrong per...
Rahul: {looks at her and smiles} ha rhea, you are right...
Rhea: what?
Rahul: main tumhe batane hi wala tha... hum dono kaafi time se.... per ab...
{rhea thodi upset si hoti hai per phir bhi muskurati hai, rahul uski taraf dekhta aur ekdum se has padta
hai}
Rahul: rheaaaa.... kya ho gaya tumhe? Are baba aisa kuch nahi hai...Tamanna bas meri ek dost hai
Rhea: {smiles} rahullll... tum bhi na, mujhe laga jaise maine tumhe bhi kho diya
Rahul: kyun?
Rhea: bas u hi, kya karu ab tumhari adat si ho gayi hai na... bhool hi gayi thi ki tumhari apni bhi ek
zindagi hai.... Kisi ek din tum bhi mujhe aur khwaish ko chod chale jaoge.... jaise kunal..... Anyways chale?
{wo palatti hai per rahul uska haath pakadta hai}
Rahul: Shadi karogi mujhse Rheaaa????
Rhea: rahul for god's sake aisa mazaak dubara mat karna.....
{rahul uska haath chodta hai}
Rhea: jaanti hu tum bhi wahi chahte ho jo baaki gharwale chahte hai per Rahul zindagi mie har kisi ko
sab kuch mile ye mumkeen to nahi na.. Waise bhi tumhe to mujhse bhi achi ladki milegi jo tumse bahot pyar karti ho aur wo pyar tum deserve bhi karte ho... Shayad mujhe apne hisse ka ghum aur khushi mil chuke hai, jo bas mera apna hai... Meri zindagi u samjho ab bas kuch hi palo ki hai...
Rahul: aur agar main tumhara saath dena chahu to? tumhara humsafar banna chahu to?
Rhea: Rahulll....
Rahul: ha Rhea, kisi aur se ye baat tumhe pata chale iss beheter yehi hoga ki main tumhe batla du..
Chahne laga hu tumhe, per mera yakeen karo mujhe tumse koi humdardi nahi hai bas pyar hai... Nahi jaanta ki tum mere baare mei kya sochti ho, aur main ye baat tumse kabhi nahi kehta, per aaj jab mere saamne ye sawaal rakha gaya to main chahta hu ki sabse pehla faisla tumhara ho... Jaanta hu naa to main kabhi Kunal ki kami ko pura kar paunga aur naa hi uski jagah lena chahta hu, aur naa to tumhe sahara dena chahta hu........ main to bas tumhara saath dena chahta hu.... Jo hua use hum badal to nahi sakte, per apni aane wali zindagi zaroor savaar sakte hai.... Aakhri faisla main tumper chodta hu.. tumhara faisla chahe jo ho, bas ye yaad rakhna ki Rahul kal bhi tumhara saath tha, aur aaj bhi tumhare saath hai....
{rhea kuch keh nahi paati bas rahul ko dekhti rehti hai aur phir waha se chali jaati hai... Rahul ko iss
baat ka darr tha ki kahi wo Rhea ko kho na de, per phir agle hi pal usi wo sachchayi nazar aa rahi thi jisse ab tak sab anjaan the... Waha Rhea samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki wo kya kare...usi waqt rhea achanak behosh ho jaati hai, per kisi ko iss baat ka ilm nahi tha.....
Kuch 2 ghante baad Nandini Rhea ke kamrei mei aati hai to dekhti hai ki Khwaish ro rahi hai aur Rhea
wahi neeche behosh padi hai... Nandini ghabra jaati hai}
Nandini: rheaaaaa... rheaaaa utho betaa....
{nandini ki awaaz sun rahul aur yash waha aate hai)
Rahul: kya hua dadi?
Nandini: Rahul Rhea ko hospital le chalo ye behosh hai.....
{rahul fouran rhea ko hospital le jaata hai... Yash, Hiten ko inform karta hai aur wo log bhi wahi aa jaate
hai....
Kuch der baad doctor rhea ko examine kar room se bahar aate hai}
Rahul: is everything fine doctor?
Doctor: Mr.Raichand arent u aware of her illness? She was strictly adviced for complete bed rest as
its her last stage
Rahul: whaat???? ye aap kya keh rahe hai?
Doctor: ohh.., lagta hai aap ab tak iss bare mei nahi jaante... Rhea is sufferring from blood cancer since
a long time...
Rahul: whatttt?????? {rahul was dead shock to know this and so were the rest of the family members}
Doctor: yes, she had requested me not to tell u anything about it... khair.. Rhea kaafi time se iss bemari
se ladh rahi hai..., per uski kismat to dekho..jab tak use iska pata chalta tab tak bahot der ho chuki thi...
{ye sunkar sab itne hairaan rehte hai ki koi kuch kehne sunke ki halat mie nahi hota}
Doctor: i know its a very difficult time for u, but u have to face it... Rhea ke paas ab bahot hi kam waqt
bacha hai...
Rahul: cannn... cann i meet her?
Doctor: yes, but only for some time...  Take care..
{rahul bahot himmat karke room mei jaata hai, aur rhea ki taraf dekh uske aasu thamte nahi... har ek
badhte kadam per use rhea ke saath bitaya hua ek ek pal yaad aa raha tha... Wo rhea ke kareeb jakar baitha hai aur bas use hi dekhta hai... kuch der baad rhea aankhei kholti hai aur rahul ko saamne dekh muskurati hai... Rahul ab apne aapko rok nahi paata aur uska haath apne haato mei lekar rone lagta hai...}
Rhea: ayee Rahul, kyun?
Rahul: tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi rhea, hum kuch kar paate the..... Why Rhea? kyun....
Rhea: kya batati.... jab tak pata chala tab tak bahot der ho chuki thi....
Rahul: tumhe kuch nahi hoga rhea, main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga... i'll get the best of doctors for u...
Rhea: Rahull.... ab kuch nahi ho sakta... aur tum u rote hue bilkul ache nahi lagte.... ab asu pocho aur sabko
bulao... ek aakhri baar sabse milne nahi...
{rahul bina rhea ki baat sune waha se chala jaata hai... jaise hi kamrie ke bahar jaata hai sab uski taraf
dekhte hai... }
Rahul: rhea... aap sab se milna chahti hai....
{aur wo waha se chala jaata hai... sur uske peeche jaati hai}
Surveen: sambhaliye apne aapko bhaiya...
Rahul: kya karu sur main... chahakar bhi Rhea ke liye kuch nahi kar sakta main...., bas use apni aankho ke
saamne jaata dekh sakta hu... Why am i so damn helpless... kyun????
{tabhi tamanna waha khwaish ko lekar aati hai}
Tamanna: kam se kam apni beti ke liye hi apne aapko sambhalo rahul.......
{rahul chup hota hai aur khwaish ko gale se lagata hai}
Tamanna: rhea tumse milna chahti hai....
{rahul khwaish ko sur ko dete hai aur rhea ke room mei jata hai}
Rhea: dadi, papa.. main rahul se kuch baat karna chahti hu....
{yash kisses rhea on her forehead and then they leave}
Rhea: kal raat main tumhare saawaal ka jawaab nahi de payi... wo zindagi jo khatm ho rahi thi, tumhe
uska hissa kaise banati? Mujhse pyar karte ho to uss pyar ki khatir ek wada karoge?
{Rahul just looks at rhea}
Rhea: Tamanna se shaadi karlo Rahul... aur meri jaan, meri bachchi khwaish ko main tumhare hawale kar
rahi hu.... Aur isi naate maine tumhari wo galati jo tumse anjaane mei hui uske liye maaf kiyaa...
Rahul: Rhea tumm....
Rhea: ha rahul, maine tumhari aur sur ki baatei sun li thi aur usi waqt mujhe sab kuch sach pata chala...
jo hua anjaane mei hua, per main jaanti hu uske liye tumne bahot kuch sahaa hai.. Mere liye tum apni family se dur hue, apna sab kuch chod diya sirf meri zindagi banane... Jo hua use bhool jao aur tamanna ke saath ek nayi zindagi ki shuruwat karo.... aur kunal ki baat yehi khatm karo, wada karo ki uss baat ka kisise bhi zikr nahi karoge...
{rahul rhea ko hug karta hai aur dono rote hai}
Rhea: acha ab tum jao aur mujhe aaram karne do... {aur wo rahul ke aasu pochti hai} aur meri khwaish ka
khyaal rakhna... use main bas tumhara sahare iss duniya mie chod rahi hu.....
Rahul: rheaaa...
Rhea: sshhh.... jao ab...go...
{rahul waha se chala jata hai aur rhea phir roti hai... Rahul khwaish ko gale se lagata hai bahot rota hai}

   2 din baad rhea ki death hoti hai aur usi ke saath rhea aur rahul ki wo adhuri kahani wahi tham jaati hai...


3 mahine baad Rahul Tamanna se shaadi kar rhea ko diya hua apna wada pura karta hai, aur wo dono
Khwaish ko legally adopt karte hai... Tamanna se shaadi karne ke baad Lalit bhi Rahul ko maaf kar deta hai aur Rahul Tamanna aur Khwaish Raichands ke saath rehne lagte hai....
Tamanna ko apnane mei Rahul ko waqt lagta hai, per waqt ke saath unki duriya bhi khatm hoti hai... And
then they lived happily ever after.........................

 

     .............. THE END.................

 

comments awaited!!!

 lotsa luv,

   farheen

 

Posted: 16 years ago


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Posted: 16 years ago
wooooaaaahhhh!!!!....dat came as a suprise...n a very unexpected ending...but nevertheless an awesum 1...ive alwayz been a silent reader of ur fanfic...bt 2day after readin the last part i couldnt stop myself...nywayz i will b eagerly w8in 4 u 2 start a new fic bt till den tc:)
Posted: 16 years ago
U ended it so suddenly n that to a sad end. but a awesome fic. loved ur fic from the beginning. will wait for another fic hope it comes up soon
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by Madiha Pardesi


wooooaaaahhhh!!!!....dat came as a suprise...n a very unexpected ending...but nevertheless an awesum 1...ive alwayz been a silent reader of ur fanfic...bt 2day after readin the last part i couldnt stop myself...nywayz i will b eagerly w8in 4 u 2 start a new fic bt till den tc:)

 thank u so much fr ur comments..!! This is a surprise fr me as  silent members too are commenting as well as sending me their comments.. so a big thanks to all of my readers here... 😊 😛

 talking abt the end thn i had decided this long bak and had also thought to keep this story short... But im glad u liked it so thanks once agen.. I dunno wen wil i start my new ff, bt fr nw im doing wid immortal emotions and kkm, which i hope u will like it...😳

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by golu_1677


U ended it so suddenly n that to a sad end. but a awesome fic. loved ur fic from the beginning. will wait for another fic hope it comes up soon

 i hd decided the ending long bak dear, n abt the rest as the name itself says phir milenge.. Anyways thanks for all ur comments n a big thanks fr liking my ff.. 😳

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by cute_samrah


nice story 😭

 awwww....thanks fr those unsed comments dear...😳

Posted: 16 years ago

faru u finished it tooo sooon...😭😭 n dat too sad ending....😭😭 but it was fantatsic....👏

i loved dis fanfiction of urs as its one of the best...👏👏👏 all emotions , twist n turns, evrything...wowwwww jus amazing....😳.

now i think u mus b starting new FF heheheheh w8ing for dat one..😆

Posted: 16 years ago
Originally posted by rajeev-bigfan


faru u finished it tooo sooon...😭😭 n dat too sad ending....😭😭 but it was fantatsic....👏

i loved dis fanfiction of urs as its one of the best...👏👏👏 all emotions , twist n turns, evrything...wowwwww jus amazing....😳.

now i think u mus b starting new FF heheheheh w8ing for dat one..😆

 thanks fr ur comments neha..

 & no honey im nt starting any new fic fr now, its jst kkm & immortal emotions tht im doing now..!! 😳

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