pritus ff^kismat connection^thread 2 last part on page 19 - Page 5

Posted: 8 years ago
Now ruchi  ur ffs r only hope to enjoy Naksh...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›...Warna u know Na Yrkkh has become so irritating &boring...
Keep writing beautiful parts of Naksh ff ...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by munna111


My god no words I'm just speechless kya likha yaar tum ne๐Ÿ‘...Full of emotional part..I was literally crying while reading each line๐Ÿ˜ญ..Starting frm d first Nk break down was just superb...Sach kahu tho Yrkkh emotional epi se bhi tumhara ye part emotional kardiya๐Ÿ˜ญ..Hatts off to U ..U have witten each &every line so beautifully...Maa baap apne pehle bacche ko khone ka dard ..๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ..Nk bahut dar gaya tha AK ko Sach bata Na paya...But nurse se Ak ko bata diya...Poor AK was shocked๐Ÿ˜ญ..Loved How Nk is supporting AK in this tough time...Bechara khud bhi kitna tuut gaya lekin AK ke liye wo strong bana..Apni AK ka sahaara bana๐Ÿ˜ณ...Naksh r in so much pain๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...Kitne sapne dekhe the Naksh ne apne bacche ko lekhar๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...
Thank u so much ruchi for this wonderful part...I can visualise all dese scenes in front of my eyes๐Ÿ˜Š
Waise bhi Yrkkh dekhar mera mood kharab hogaya tha...But Ur ff made my day๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Eagerly waiting for next part๐Ÿ˜‰&so sorry for late commenting...

Oo god m admiring ur comment fouzi.. ..m so hpy that u liked all emotions in this part..mere khayal se toh emotional scene ko esse show karna chahiye jaise padne ya dekhne wala touch ho jaye bilkul...nd i did it yaiee ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ..jo mere dil mai aaya i wrote...thanku so much fouzi for liking it nd big comments. .. ๐Ÿ˜Š
I m hpy that atlest yeh pad ke tu khush hui which is big for me..
Dont be sry.. ..
I will do update next part soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by munna111


Now ruchi ur ffs r only hope to enjoy Naksh...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›...Warna u know Na Yrkkh has become so irritating &boring...
Keep writing beautiful parts of Naksh ff ...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Serial ka i cant say.. ๐Ÿคข ..
But i will write always all in naksh ff cuteness emotional parts romance funny everything ๐Ÿ˜› ..
Actually mere ff bhut open ho gye hai warna i waana write one ff in current situation ๐Ÿ˜Š ...
Posted: 8 years ago
Nyccc Part Dear welldone plz cont next part soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by sameera_naksh


Nyccc Part Dear welldone plz cont next part soon

Thanku sameera ...for liking ๐Ÿ˜Š ..i will continue it...
Posted: 8 years ago
Part-37
Doctor's came to saw to ak...dey treated to her..nd came near of nk outside...of room.
Do-ji she is ffine...lill si behoshi aa gai..suddenly itni badi news unhe thodegi hi..but dont worry she is fine..but she is weak from inside nd unko kam se kam 10 days mai hum chutti de denge..she will be improve swlly swlly.
Nk-thanku doctor. .but kya mai ak ko two three days mai ghar leke jau..because yaha unki man nhi lagegi aur ghar par woh aacha feel karegi sabke sath..mai full things ghar pe available kara dungi..
Do-ok..if u want u can take her...but koi problems hogi toh apko care karna hoga...
Nk-aap ek nurse bhej dejiyega..nd i will call u if somthing happened. .unko hosh kab aayegi .
Do-maybe in nyt..
Nk-mai baith jau waha..
Do-sure..
nk went inside of room..saw to ak..caressing her hair..
Nk-mai ek essa pati hu..jo apki problems hi nhi share kar pa rahi..kitni buri hu ..aap akle hi yeh body problems face kar rahi hai aur mai koi help nhi kar sakta..apko toh mere jaise husband milni hi nahi chahiye thi...someone put hand on his shoulder. ..nk truened to see to her..
Nk-maa aap..
De-haa...mai ak ki maa hu..par apse bhi kuch mera rishta hai woh bhi maa ka..aap mujhe maa kehte hai na jamai saa..kehte hai na aap mere bete jaise hai..toh aaj aap yeh kyo bol rahe hai ki aap meri beti ke liye sachi nahi..
Nk-but maa..maine apki beti ki care nhi ki aur yeh pain usne akeli bear ki..jo mai nhi le sakti..
Dev-par aap us dard ko mehsus kar sakte hai aur dard batna bhi dard lene se kam nahi..
Nk-maine ak ko promise ki thi ki sare chizo mai meri hisedari hogi..par yeh pain ak akle hi bear kar rahi.kash mai unki body pain le pati..
Dev-maine toh socha hi nahi tha meri beti ko koi itna pyar kar sakta hai .ab mai isse toh nhi bata sakti hu ki patni ke dard ko aap le sakte hai ya nhi par aap meri bachi ka sath har mod pe dede yahi bhut bada sahara hota hai jamai saa ek patni ke liye...mujhe pata nhi pura yakin hai aap meri bachi ka pura pura sath denge..
Nk hug to her...thanku maa...mujhe bhut dar lag rahi..how i will handle to ak..she is weak now also..but i can give to her support..
De-mujhe visvas hai..ab aap yaha baithiye..mai aati hu thodi der mai..
Nk-ji maa...nd devyani leaves ..nk sat near of ak...ak opened eyes after somtimes...she saw to dev nd gy3 in front of her eyes..
Gy-aa gaya hosh ..beta kaisi ho..
dev-kya man kar raha meri bachi ka ..nd caressing her hair...he moved her eyes all over in room..
Gy-kisse khoj rahi ho beta..
A-amma woh nk kaha hai...
Gy-abhi tak toh yahi tha par abhi hamne jabardasti karke usse rest karne ko bheja hai..nhi toh uski tabiyat kharab ho jayegi na...aao lo khana kha lo..
She sat to ak on bed...nd gave one bige to ak..
ak-crying...amma...hug to her ..mai ek aachi bahu nhi hu...mera bacha maa..
Gy nd dev wipe her tears somehow for ak.
gy-jo apna tha hi nhi usseke liye kya rona haa..bas...aur hum jante hai beta tum kitni pyari aur aachi bahu ho...bas..
ak-amma...mai apki ek icha bhi puri nahi kar pai...mujhe jina nahi hai amma..plz mere sath essa kyo hua ..sayad maine kisi ka bura kiya hoga thabhi toh mujhe yeh saja mili...meri jan lete mere bache ki jan kyo li amma..both starts crying..
Ggy-nhi beta..jiski jindagi jitni hoti hai woh usse jayada toh nhi jita na bas yeh socho ki uski sanse hi itni hi thi..
Ak-par amma mai kaise jiugi...mai nhi jina chahti hu...amma mai bikul tut gai hu..
Gy-beta aur kisi ke side mat dekho par yeh jarur bolugi ki chinna ke liye toh yeh aanshu rok lo...woh tujhe bhut pyar karta hai..aur woh bhi tut chuka hai bilkul..uske liye..tum dono ek dusare ki taqat ho na..
Ak think a while ..she wips her tears..she was sad..
A-maa mujhe aap de dijiye mai kha leti hu..
Dev-la mai kila deti hu..she feed to her...
Ak-bas maa...than nk comes nd saw to ak .
Nk-aap uth gai ak..
Ak saw to nk..
Ak-haa nk...
Nk-aap esse hi lete rahiye. ..bas...he sat near of ak..nd caressing her hair..r u ok na..
Gy nd dev -hum aate hai abhi..
Nk-ji ..dey leaves...ak aapki health thik hai na..kuch khai apne..
Ak-haa amma ne kilaya...
Nk-he kissed on her forehead...aap thik hai na..i mean..
Ak-ji nk...mai thodi der aaram kar lu..
Nk-haa..bilkul..she turned her face...nd crying. ..
Nk had tears on his eyes..but he was sat on her bed..
Nk-mujhe nahi batayegi apki pain..akle rona chahti hai..
Ak plz..telll me..if u want to share with me..plz..apko meri kasam..
She turned. ..
A-nk..plz..mujhe kuch mat boliye...pehle mujhe yakin to karne dijiye ki maine kuch khoya hai..
Nk-hamne.
Ak-she hug to him...nk..mai apne bache ko nahi bacha pai..nk..kyo essa kyo ho gya..
Nk-he too crying. .i dont know ak..but life to aage badne ki nam hai na...ab yeh sochiye ki aage sab aacha ho...
A-mere sath kya aacha hoga...mai toh bas mom ki tarah sab pighalte hue dekhugi..
Nk-nhi ak..u r strong so much strong..kuch nhi hogi..i promise woh sari happiness wapis aayegi..maine sochi hai ab aap ghar mai rahegi yaha nhi..
Ak-nk...she was crying after sometimes. .
Nk-bas...ab bas roni nahi hai ...chup..he wipe tears of her with his hand..chaliye so jaiye..mai apko kal leke jaugi ok...apne ghar..
Ak-aap yahi hai na...
Nk-aaiye latiye..bas. ..mai yahi hu...she holded his hand vry tighly. .he too gripped vry tight..
She slept ...more parts coming soon Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Next some day ...nk was packing all things of ak...
Ak-nk hum kitni der mai jayege ..
Nk-bas...thodi der mai chalni hai...aap apni med le lo..ye lo..gave to her...
Ak-nk..shivu ke exams..kab tak chalege...mujhe usse milna hai..ek bar hi aaya woh..
Nk-woh uski ki bat nhi karni subah se mamma ko yeh deni hai woh deni hai..surprise deni hai..he is so cute nd lovly son of ours..
Ak-had tears on her eyes...nk..
Nk-hug to her...sshh...shivu hai na hamari baby...
Ak-haa nk par is dil ko kaise samjhau jo samjhata toh sab hai par manta kuch bhi nhi..Is par mera bas nhi chal raha..
Nk-life mai problem toh mil jati hai par maybe inke aage kuch bhali hogi ..hena..she nooded yes...chale..
Ak-hmm...mai toh us mom ki tarah ho gai hu jo sirf pighalti hai apni jalan se..
Nk-sshh..hum ghar jayegi na ..u will feel better ...ok..aapko ghar mai wheelchair mai baitha dengi hum..abhi aap uthiye...
Ak-hmm...with d help of nk she reached in house..ss house..
D door was closed. .
Ak-nk pls mera hath pakad lijiye..na..
He holdes aks hand nd opened d door..
Der was so much dark...
Ak-nk yeh aandhra kyo hai yaha. ..suddenly lights coming up ..ak was so shocked to see in front of all..
Dey were holded one wlcm pic nd shouting wlcm back hamari pyaoi si ak..she had tears on her eyes..
Than shivu with brunches of roses coming near of her..
Nd singing d song-tu kitni bhooli hai tu kitni aachi hai ..pyari pyari hai oo maa. .oo maa..
But d music stooped in middle ๐Ÿ˜† ..uiii...yeh ruk kyu gaya..
Maine bola tha na jab mai mamma ko flower dunga tab rokna..
Jao mujhe kisi se bat nhi karni..
Ak laughs..shivu ..holdes his hands..aap gussa kyo ho gaye mamma se..haa..
Sh-apse nhi...yeh song maine nhi gaya apko pata chal gaya..
Ak-mujhe pata tha beta..mamma ko flower nhi doge..
Sh-uiii haa...yeh lo mamma..nd kissed on her cheeks. ..i love u mamma...ak hug to her...
Ak-i love u too beta. ..aap ho toh mamma hpy hai warna pata nhi kya karti. ..i love u so much..nd kisses on her cheeks. ..nd starts crying..
Sh-mamma apki pyari si eyes mai tears aachi nhi lagti plz smile kariye na.
Ak-mera baby meri kitni care karta hai ...mamma ko samjhathate ho na aap...she was still crying..than dj gave isara to all..
Nd he starts singing -eee dil laya hai bahar apno ka pyar ( ak saw to dj with surprise face nd smile)..apno ka pyar kya kehna ..
Than gy3 came near of her -ee dil laya hai bahar apno ka pyar(wipe her tears from eyes )..kya kehana ..kile kile chehro se aaj..(showing to ak all family member..dey were happy)..ghar hai mera (gripped her hand)..gulegujar kya kehna ...
Than bm came near of her nd sat to her in table..nk sat next to her..
Nk-hum tum yuhi milete rahe (cupped his hand on her face)..mehfeel yuhi sajti rahe..bas pyar ki bas ek dhun har subah sam bajti rahe ..gale mai meheka rahe (hug to her)..pyar bhari baho ka har kya kehna..
All r-ee dil laya hai bahar nd dancing..dj gy3 bm shivu nanu mohit rashmi..devyani..nk ak were seeing to all..nk was smiling..
But ak starts crying vry loudly...everyone stopped...nd seeing to her..
ak-plz aap log mujhe itna pyar kyo karte hai..mai itna pyar deserve nhi karti hu..aap log bhut aache hai itni badi bat hone ke bad bhi mujhe kuch nhi kaha aap logo ne..itna pyar mat dijiye ki mai usse chuka hi na pau jindagi bhar..maine aap sabse sabkuch chin liya..aapki umid pyar ..kisi ka man toh nhi rakh pai..kitni gair jimedar hu mai aap logo ne kitna khayal rakha mera..mujhe jamin par paw nhi rakhne diya ..par mai apni bewkufi ki wajah se sab chiz kho di..aacha hua yahi hona chahiye na..mere liye saja jaruri thi ...
Nk-ak..apki fault nhi thi..plz samjhiye aap..
Ak-thi nk..aap log mane ya nhi..
dj-beta ...isme tumhari nhi kisi ki galti nhi thi...u never broke our promises...dis is true..we r so lucky to have a perfect daughter's in law...beta ekdom perfect koi nhi hota hamse bhi galti hui thi na apne bete ko hamne apne gusse mai khoya...jo itna bada tha...tumhare pass toh shivu hai ..sab hai
Ak thinks a while nd wipe her tears..
Gy-hame kuch dekh ke bura nhi lag raha..jitna tumhe rote hue dekh ke lag raha beta...came near...plz ..jo ho gaya usse toh pakad nhi sakte hai par jo aane wala hai uss din ko khas bana sakte hai na..she hug to ak..
Ak-maa...
Gy-are waah matlb aaj mai chinna ki amma se jayada maa ho gai hu teri...teri maa ki jagah le li..
Ak-haa maa..apne mujhe hamesha pyar kiya samjha hai..amma..thanku..
Gy-hmm..chalo ab haske rest karne chalo...kadha pilaugi tujhe..she laugh...chinna took to her in room..
Nk-ji...aaiye...he left to her in his hand...nd took to her in room..
Laying on bed..
Ak-she was seeing to room ..it was silent...itna sant ho gaya hai ..
nk-haa ab aai hai na aap toh meri sath fight kar karke hala karegi na..na nd laugh...
Ak-she was sad...nk mujhe blanket de dijiye plz...nd turn her face..nk saw to her from back nd feeling so much sad..
Nk-apki woh naughty smile kab aur kaise lau wapas...he wore to her blanket. ..he got a call..ye call kyo aai doctor ki..he attend d call..
Hloo ..ji sir apne call kyo ki abhi is time pe...
More parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Do-ji nk ji..mujhe kuch important talks apse share karni thi..apki wife ak ke liye...u better knows to her...she is sad..aur itna bada hadsa ho gya hai woh thoda mentally nd physically weak hai..toh unke nature mai thoda gussa chidchid aana lajmi hai..toh mai itna kehna chahta hu ki aap bas khud ko samjhaiya aur kuch galt bolne ki bajaye unko pyar se samjhaiyega..ya phir kam mai thoda uljha dijiyega...
Nk-ji i can understand that..maine kosish ki hai ..sayad sabki support milegi toh woh thik ho jayegi normal ekdom..
Do-ji...aur plz thoda unka care bhi woh khabhi bhi bimar ho sakti hai toh unke pass kisi ko chod dijiyega..hmm...baki aap samjhdar hai har mamle mai..
Nk-ji..i will try my best...nd cut d phone ...
Nk comes in room with food..
Nk-ak apko khana khani hai..chaliye aaiye...went near of her nd caressing her hair...
Ak-nk...plz...skipped his hand...kya hua hai..
Nk-khana aai hai ..
Ak-hmm..she sat on bed...she was taking one bite but nk foreword to her ...one bite..
Nk-lijiye...ak..
Ak saw a second to him..nd took it on mouth. .
Ak-thanku nk...mera itna sath dene ke liye...aap bhi lijite na.apne bhi nahi khaya na aachese...lijiye...nd feed to him..
Nk-thanku nhi bolti i love u bolti hai..hena..smile...
Ak-haa...nd rest on his chest...
Nk-bas sab thik hai aur time ke sath sab thik ho jayegi..
Than shivu came in room..
Sh-yaieee...they broke hug...mamma...aap khana kha rahe ho..
Ak-smile..mai apko hi yad kar rahi thi baby..aao na...he sat besides of her..aap sb mamma ke sath sona ok...aacha apke exams kaise ja rahe hai..
Sh-aache..maine na dost ko bola inhone meri bhut help ki apko pata hai..woh math ke qu jo hamse nhi bante the..dost ne turant slove kar di..
Nk was admiring to both..
ak-aacha...ab mujhe jaldi se batao time table aur kon se exam bache hai..
Nk-ek minute...ak...gave to her teb...lijiye..
Ak-nk...aap..
Nk-wat i cant give u ..
Ak-nhi par aap office nhi jaiyege esse din rat ..mere piche.
Nk-mai dekh raha hu ..online aur puri chatting bhi kar raha..itni rat ko kaha jani hai mujhe. .lijiye..she took..
Ak-shivu aap dress change kar lo chalo...
Sh-ok mamma..nd leave...
Nk gave water to her..
Nk-apko pini hai na..
Ak-nk mujhe lena hoga toh le lungi na...
Nk-sry nd took it on side...
Ak took it ...
Nk saw to her..
Nk holdes her hand..
Nk-aapko itni bachain hone ki jarurat nhi hai ak..mujhse apki pain chupi nhi hai ..par agar apko time chahiye toh le lijiye par esse mat tadapiye..
Ak-m sry nk..pata nhi mujhe gussa aa raha hai..
Nk-smile thabhi red ho gai apki nose. ..haa..meri bat sach hui na aap fight karna suru kar di..
Ak-nk..smile..
Nk-oohoo yeh hasi pe toh jan aa gai..meri pyari wife nd moves his hand..
Ak saw in his eyes..nk kissed on her cheeks..
Ak took back her hand..
Nk-i love u ak .i dont want loose to u..
Ak-nk..aap samaj kyo nhi rahe hai..apke liye assan hoga yeh mere liye nhi hai ...normal hona...nd went in verge..
Nk-m sry ak...apki khushi hi mere liye sab hai..maine apki khushi ke liye ki sab..
Ak-thanku nk .mai janti hu...par plz mujhe time dijiye na thoda sa ...
Sh-mamma..
Ak-smile ..mera baby..aao na ...aao ...mamma ke pass soge na..
Sh-mai kaisa lag raha hu mamma..
Ak-bhut pyare...aao...nd both slept ...nk changed his cloth nd took his place..
Ak felt somthing nd turn..
Ak-haw nk ko gn toh bola hi nhi...she saw to nk..
Nk...in low voice..i m sry nk..aap mujhse bhut pyar karte hai. Mai bhi kam pyar nhi karti ..aapka mind bhi toh ek chiz mai hi laga hai ...mai chahti hu aap bhi aacha feel kare nk...mai toh khud se hi lad rahi hu..

In nyt nk was sleeping ..
Suddenly in nyt his sleep broke...
Nk-oo god i want water...
He was taking water. .
He saw to shivu who was in deep sleep..
Nk-ak ki face udar hai ek bar dekh lu kya kya hui..
Je was going in other side..
Yeh voice kaise aa rahi hai.
Nk touches aks hand..
Her teeth was shevering ...nd her body was warm also..
Nk-yeh kya ho gai ak...r u feeling low..inko toh...touched her head...oo god sudden ak ko fever kaise ho gai..ak..
She is not listening. .
Nk-wat is happening with my ak..oo god ..nd crying..
Doctor. .amma...shout...
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So guyzzz after a long time i wrote this part..plz press like button if u like this part nd gave sweet comments i will wait for comments. .
Thanku for reading sry for mistake nd late comment. ..
Precap-after two month...Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by _nakshi_


Update soon...

I will princy...
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by trishanaksh


update sooon pleasee๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I Will. ...trishna.. ๐Ÿ˜Š ..
Howz u...r u enjoying ur holidays... ๐Ÿ˜Š

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