Originally posted by munna111
My god no words I'm just speechless kya likha yaar tum ne๐...Full of emotional part..I was literally crying while reading each line๐ญ..Starting frm d first Nk break down was just superb...Sach kahu tho Yrkkh emotional epi se bhi tumhara ye part emotional kardiya๐ญ..Hatts off to U ..U have witten each &every line so beautifully...Maa baap apne pehle bacche ko khone ka dard ..๐ญ๐ญ..Nk bahut dar gaya tha AK ko Sach bata Na paya...But nurse se Ak ko bata diya...Poor AK was shocked๐ญ..Loved How Nk is supporting AK in this tough time...Bechara khud bhi kitna tuut gaya lekin AK ke liye wo strong bana..Apni AK ka sahaara bana๐ณ...Naksh r in so much pain๐ญ๐ญ...Kitne sapne dekhe the Naksh ne apne bacche ko lekhar๐ญ๐ญ...
Thank u so much ruchi for this wonderful part...I can visualise all dese scenes in front of my eyes๐
Waise bhi Yrkkh dekhar mera mood kharab hogaya tha...But Ur ff made my day๐
Eagerly waiting for next part๐&so sorry for late commenting...
Oo god m admiring ur comment fouzi.. ..m so hpy that u liked all emotions in this part..mere khayal se toh emotional scene ko esse show karna chahiye jaise padne ya dekhne wala touch ho jaye bilkul...nd i did it yaiee ๐ ..jo mere dil mai aaya i wrote...thanku so much fouzi for liking it nd big comments. .. ๐
I m hpy that atlest yeh pad ke tu khush hui which is big for me..
Dont be sry.. ..
I will do update next part soon