Ariya TS HAAR KI JEET last part out.7/5

Posted: 8 years ago
HAAR KI JEET

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Kolkata  12- 05 - 2012

Ek ladki jo apne early 20's mai hai apne bed par baithkar book pad .tabhi ek ladka Jo usse kuch chota hai daud kar aata hai.WO bahut haaf raha hai. Or kuch pareshan bhi.
Boy - di di 
Girl - kya bat hai rishabh itna pareshan q hai 
Ris - riya di jaldi chalo news channel on karo.
Ri - aisi kaun si news aa rahi hai TV par.
Or wo TV on karti hai.har channel par ek hi news flash ho rahi hai.
Kal rat India ke sabse chahete or best cricketer arjun suryakant rawte jinhe unke fan pyar se ASR bulate hai ka accident ho gaya. WO airport se apne ghar ja rahe the or raste mai ye. Hadsa ho gaya. Sutron k anusar car driver chala raha tha .achanak driver ko dil ka daura pada or car out of control hokar ek dumper se ja takrai.driver ki mauke par hi maut ho gayi or ASR ki halat abhi bhi gambheer hai.
Hospital k bahar unke fan ki bhir jama ho chuki hai or sabhi unke liye prayer kar rahe hai aayiye hum unke fans se puchte hai
Itne mai riya TV off kar deti hai.
Ri - omg rishu ye kya ho gaya
Ris - haa di wo to humare favourite player hai. kash wo jaldi theek ho jaye.
Ri - chal hum bhi Kali maa se unke liye prayer karte hai.

Kolkata  14- 6- 2012
Ris - riya di .dekho asr ki news aa rahi hai TV par
Ri - accha kya hua unhe hosh aa gaya.  Or wo TV k samne aakar baithti hai.
TV reporter
Darshako aaj pure 1 mahene bad hum sab k chahete cricket star asr ko subah hosh aa gaya .ab wo khatre se bahar hai. Par ek dukhad khabar hai. Drs ka kehna hai accident ki wajah se asr k pairo par sabse jyada effect hua hai.WO chal to sakte hai pr ab WO kabhi professional cricket nahi khel payenge.. Aaj ka din cricket itihas ka kala din mana ja raha hai. Aj desh ka sabse best cricketer jindgi ki pitch par haar gaya. Aaiye hum aapko asr ki ab tak ki life se rubaru karwate  hai
Arjun suryakant Rawte yani ASR ka janam Mumbai mai hua. Wo humesha se hi cricketer banana chahte the. Or iske liye Unke pitaji ne unhe 4 saal ki umar se hi training dilwani shuru kar di thi.15 saal ki umar mai under  19 national team mai unka selection hua.
17 saal ki umar mai unhone international team mai apni jagah bana li or pehle hi match mai unhone century bana kar apna pehla man of the match  jhatka the or team ko jitaya tha. For unhone kabhi piche mudkar nhi dekha. Matra 23 saal ki uamr mai 1 mon pehele hi unhe arjun award mila tha . unhone us din kaha tha  ye to ek padaw hai manjil to abhi baki hai. Award or bhi abhi Baki hai.cricket abhi baki hai.
Par unka or unke fan ka ye Sapna ab kabi pura nhi hoga. Ab kabhi wo shandar cricket dekhne ko nhi milega. Unka wo six Marne ka tarika. Jeet k baad wo chamchamai ankhe or killer smile ab cricket pitch par nhi dikhayi degi.sabhi fans ko pyar se diya gaya unka 
Autograph or msg ab kabhi nhi milega. Bharat ko shandar jeet dilwane wala haar gaya
.pura desh sadme mai hai.
Riya TV off kar deti hai un dono bhai behen ki ankho se ansu beh rahe hai.
Ri - mujhe unhe phone karna hoga.
She dial a no but she get "the number you are calling is switched off"
Ri - ab kya karun mujhe Mumbai Jana hoga.

Mumbai 12- 05 -2014
Ek ladki apne bedroom mai ek photo lekar baithi hui hai uski ankhon se lagatar ansu beh rahe hai. Uske aaspas bahut sari photos or paper cuttings hai.
Riya - kaha ho tum arjun pure do sal ho gaye tumhari koi bhi khabar nhi.do sal se tumhe dhund rahi hu .Mumbai mai shift ho gayi main  sirf tumhe dhundne ke liye. Par tum to aise chup gaye ho jaise tumhe kisi se koi matlab nhi .kya tumhe mujhse bhi koi matlab nhi arjun. Kya tum mujhe bhul gaye. N she start crying uncontrollable.
Waha ek newspaper cutting padi hai jisme likha hai
Date 20-6-2012  Ex cricket legend lapata
 Arjun Rawte ko kal hospital se discharge mil gaya hai .par WO kaha hai kisi ko nhi pata.pura media unke statement or ane wali life k liye wait kar raha tha par asr kahi chale gaye .kaha ye koi nhi janta.
Ri - bas ek yahi last bat thi jo tumhare bare mai pata chal payi muje. Har mumkin koshish ki par kahi nhi mile tum mujhe. Par mai abhi haari nhi hu arjun dhund lungi tumhe.
At the same time 
Mumbai se dur outskirt mai ek 2bhk house hai .bahut beautiful full of nature n full of life.
Par andar se utni hi worst condition hai. Lagta hai kab se saaf nhi kiya gaya.diwaron par furniture par sab jagah dhul hi dhul. Ek chair par ek admi baitha hua hai. Age almost 25 par dekho to lagta hai 40-45 sal ka hoga..long hairs long Beard gande kapde or bejan chahera.
Man - kaisi life hai ye kal tak mai arsh par tha aaj farsh par hu.  Meri sari mehnat bekar ho gayi.mega har Sapna tut gaya. Par usse bhi jyada afsos is baat ka hai ki Maine papa ka Sapna tod diya.unka akhiri sapna tod diya Maine.haar gaya apka arjun papa.
Fb 
One man in his 40's sitting on chair n watching TV
Man - arjun jaldi aa beta dekh.
One child of 12 year come
Ar - kya hua baba
Sur - dekh beta ye dhyanchand award hai .ye best cricketer ko as life time achievement milta hai. Mera Sapna hai ye mere bete ko mile.arjun suryakant rawte ko.
Par humesha yad rakhna beta safalta mile to bhi apni saralta or acchai kabhi mat khona. 
Bol tu karega na mera ye Sapna pura .
Ar - ha baba I promise you.ek din sabki juban par ek naam hoga arjun.
Both hug each other.
Fb end
Ar - Maine humesha apke adarshon ko follow kiya baba. Kabhi apni saralta or sacchai nhi khoyi.to fir q kiya usne aisa mere sath mai to uska best friend tha na.  Q akhir q kiya tumne aisa vishal.
Fb 
Mumbai hospital 18-05-2012
Arjun hospital mai hai uska naukar usse milne aata hai.
Shyam - arjun baba .ab ap kaise hai.
Ar - tabiyat to thik hai kaka par sab kuch khatam ho gaya.
Sh - baba Hume apko kuch batana hai.
Ar - boliye kaka
Sh - beta us din jab apka accident hua to hume pata chala mohan (driver)ki maut ho gayi WO bhi dil ka doura padne se or jab hum apse milne aye the to yad hai apne hosh mai aate hi pucha tha mohan ji kaise hai or jab apko pata chala ki unki dil ka daura padne se maut hui to apko ajeeb laga qki wo fit the or roj jog karte the. To apne thik se test karwane ki bola.unki body mai kuch tha  par asli post martam report badalwa di .Hume kal hi Dr or us admi ki bat suni.
Arj  gusse mai - kisne kiya ye kaka.or apko kaise pata chala
Sh - beta kal rat jab hum apka khana laye to humne socha pehle Dr se puch le apki tabiyat ke bare mai to hum waha gaye or humne Dr ki or vishal ki bat suni. Unhone khane mai koi dawa milayi thi jisse dil ka daura padta hai.
Ar - shocked .kaka apko koi galat fehmi hui hai.vishal nahi wo to mera best friend hai.WO ye San nhi kar Sakta.
Sh - humne unki puri bat suni beta.
Arjun kuch der shocked ho jata hai or fir vishal ko call karta hai. Vishal aata hai.
Ar - q kiya vishal aisa tumne .q mara mohanji ko.kya bigara tha unhone
Vi - tum ye kya bol rage ho arjun
Ar - I want truth vishal kaaka be tumhari or Dr ki bat sun li
Vi with evil smile- ab jab tumhe sab pata chal hi gaya hai to bata hi deta hu. Mohan se meri koi dushmani nhi thi Maine to wo medicine tumhare liye milayi thi tumhare dinner pack mai par tumne to us din fast rakha tha or WO pack mohan ko de diya.
Arj shocked - kya mere liye par q
Vi - qki mai India ka best cricketer banana chahta tha Jo tumhare rehte possible nhi tha. Or ab to tumhe captain banane ki bat chal rahi thi jabki mai senior hu.isiliye
Ar ki ankho mai ansu aa jate hai.
Ar - par tum to mere best friend the na
Vi - dosti haan .stardum or paison k aage kaisi dosti kaise rishte
Ar - mai chodunga nhi tumhe mohan ji ki maut ki saja milegi tumhe.
Vi - tum kuch sabit nhi kar paogae.koi sabut nhi hai.or mera kam to ho gaya finally you are out of the game. Haar gaye tum asr haar gaye. Ha ha ha 
Fb end
Ar - haar gaya arjun papa had gaya. Meri wajah se mohanji ki jaan gayi unka pariwar anath ho gaya. Sab meri wajhe.apka  Sapna tut gaya. Uska sacrifice bematlaab  ho gaya. Kaise najre milata usse. Ab yahi meri saja hai.akelapan or gumnami. Meri haar ki saja. Sabko hara dene ki saja.
Another end
Ri - mai tumhe dhund lungi.tum haare nhi ho.abhi akhiri dao baki hai.jindgi abhi baki hai arjun.hum jeetenge.is haar ki jeet milegi arjun.

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Edited by sur1911 - 7 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
oh dear this amazing

very fresh thought on ariya...very good..arjun cricketer aur lapatha

riay sue doondne ayi mumbai..arjun feeling bad ...

lkein wo riya ko jantha hei, tho usko yad kyoon nahi karraha hi ..mujhe patha hei iske jawab next part me milegi..continue soon ..and thanks for pm
Posted: 8 years ago
wow wonderful update dear
but little confuse about ariya's relation
riya sirf fan he arjun ki ya or bhi kuch he
anyways next part me pata chal hi jaega

Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! It's awesome update yaar! Ak nayi soch ariya par jo bilkul alag he.. Next part soon, thanks 4 pm.
Posted: 8 years ago
Wow its awsome nd fresh concept, liken ariya ka kia rishta hai??
agr riya just fan hai tu arjun mbl num kahan se aya us k pas??

Or agr koi rishta hai tu arjun riya ko yaad q nai kar raha??


Nd i knw in questions k answers next update mei hain so plz plz plz conti so soon

Thanx for the p.m
Posted: 8 years ago
Hmmm something new n different concept
Lovely
Acha laga read karke
Riya bhi udhar be chain hai
Aww dost me ye kiya poor arjun
Good thing kaka heard everything

Jaldi se dusra part update and also yr other stories please
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome start
eagerly waiting for next part
cont soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Awsome update..
Riya Arjun ki sirf fan he ya fir usaki personally janti he..
Plz continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

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