Reshmi u never told me u wrote poems
good ones matter of fact!
dude that was awsome..
and for the game...
Where is south pole and why is it there?
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~~~Mahak~~~
Originally posted by: daniel_4ever
because i didn't have the time to warm it π lolzzz
my is the sun hot
cos sumbody heated what was once upon a tym the moon...
why do people laugh!
Originally posted by: SpoILed BraTi noticed people are sharing poems...i wanna share one i wrote quite some time ago... hehe... its not that good... but its a try π³
Pretend
by: Rashmi
Some time ago i decided to play
A little game that would brighten my day
I got my tiara, though it was out of trend
And I set off to play pretend
I had a throne and even a scepter
I thought things could not get any better
But before the day could come to an end
You said I was too old to play pretend
The next day came so bright and new
I woke up and I wondered what I'd do
I found a small, black doctor's kit
It had a big, red cross on it
I said I'm a doctor, one who could heal
I haven't graduated, but what's the bi g deal
I thought broken bones I could mend
But you said I was too old to play pretend
Now I love you and you know its true
But you don't feel the same, what can I do?
I'd let my feelings come to end
But am I not too old to play pretend?
I hope you guys like it
WOW!!!! WOW!!! Rashmi you are gr8...π
nice attempt good attempt...when your first attempt itself is so good your second attempt may going to be excellent....
meaningful poem...as per your nature....please keep it up...
conratulations and God bless...π luv u Rashmi
Originally posted by: SpoILed BraTthanks so much thameem! π π π
you are welcome dear...it's my pleasureπRashmi
waiting for your next poemπfingers crossed
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