RES
YEAAAYY
ILY
MATH CLASS HAI TRIGONOMETRY...
SORRY
BRB TO UNRES 🤗
Unres
I knew it, its ur pm waiting in my inbox before opening it.. And guess It was u. Well aisa bohot kam hota hai, u can say hota hi nahi ki mai jo sochu woh ho.. Man propose and God dispose.
I was not going to open it(I WAS ALREADY LATE FOR MATHS CLASS) but i anxiously opened cuz i thaught you were leaving again..
🤣 🤣.
I knew from the time i saw the link, it would be awesome... bohot achchi smell au rahi thi os ki. Yummy yummy and as i scrowled down it was as tall and sexy as my arya. :$ but my math class, I had to wait and read it afterwards.. :-(
It is awesome and the best os I HAVE EVER READ ON ARDI.. Starting from start, the part was so beautifully written with intelligence..I MEAN BRAIN WORK. I love how panchali heard my arya's real name from his own mouth. The credit goes to u not panchali 🤣 i loved such parts where u have to work wid your brain.*THOUH I AM JEALOUS. I will rate my jealousy 3/10*
Then the part where arjun leave her u described it really very well. It was awesome.
But the most touching part *His brothers were cry and telling him not to go and Arjun look at drau who was blank and looking at the groun thousants of questions, accusitions but silently coveying the msg come back soon and stay safe* it was awesome. Copy paste ki nahi yaad karke likh rahi hun 🤣
And the part was very awesome and very emotional where arjun gets married to subhi. It was so sad part When panchali was crying and Arjun did not even meet her.
But at last that bed wala part, I am damn jealous, i will rate it a eight outta ten.
That kiss waah i love romantic parts and kiss situated in such f8ing bg. I loved that karu part when drau was angryly tell him that she has a crash on u. *mera naam nahi liya usne khyar its a fanfiction asal me arya loves me in real the most*
And the part wait i will take a break i am tired..
Haan toh mai kahan thi woh hoo K baby born. You know I love babys so much ummah ❤️
Rossogoll baby Its a awesome part putr.love u for this.
And the next part i really use to be so angry that mere mu se koi comment hi nahi nikalti. U made me cry.
*arya was strocking her hair and how he made her eat foods naming her sons, father, brother I am out of my words. This is the heart of this OS..
And when drau was questioning him why din not he stop bheem, yudhistir and shield her was heart wrenching. And how he was pamparing her like he use to do with kirti and that lalluby was awesome but when she was needed him the most he was'nt for her.
And the next and the most heart breaking part... It always makes me cry.. Loved that line *lie of this day and lie of the life* it was so touching.. Kirti dies...u wrote it so well and it was so moving.
Loved the part when arjun hears the word "father" it was the heart of this kirti part..it conveys so much..a little peace of a father's heart before a violent storm. Awesome. Hats off to u.
And the last part. Gawd they die..and that song, u chose so perfect. She goes hell for him. Awesome sam. It was brilliant. Sperb, amazing and the best os i have ever read. I will never forget this one... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Itne lambi comment ka answer sirf 'thank u' maat likhna...
Originally posted by: Mahiima16
OMG!! this is just beautiful ❤️
Sammy I loved it!! 🤗 ❤️
I love the title <3
Seriously amazing OS!! THIS IS THE BEST OS ON ArDi ❤️ ❤️
so finally after such a long time u wrote something on ArDi! You know i love your ArDi FF! thanks for writing this beautiful OS and keep writing more n more on ArDi!! ;)
Originally posted by: ltelidevara
The journey is too gripping and fulfilling. It is beautiful Just like ARDI. Enjoyed thoroughly. Keep writing more Ofcourse only on ARDI.
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