Originally posted by: RahirameshWOW that was a beautiful start of the FF as well as the leadsπ
Originally posted by: vjctpt378rudra and rudrani description is awesome... n the way u describe scenery als too good...
Originally posted by: divyaJAFantastic strt dear..
i m truly in love with the first chptr of this story..
u r a grt writer seriously..
sword fi8 wow..
jalal is mesmerised by jo beauty nd skills..
i m eagerly waiting for nxt update..
Originally posted by: 1357rakshaWow superb start of d story. ...
Jodha jalal first meeting was amazing. .. with there sword fight... nd there conversation about there ID was superb. ...Update soon. ...Nd thanks for pm. ...
Originally posted by: avika444Stuti awesome chapter dear
I just loved the way u started describing thr sky and then breif descriotion of rajputana kingdoms .
Jajo first meet was really very interesting ,i remembered akdhas first sword fight here .
Continue soon dear
Thanks a lot for pm
Originally posted by: supriyaalliNyc chappy dr
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Originally posted by: Mavaddatwonderful start:-)
thanks for pm :-) update soon
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