So good to see you,
was spying since morning, finally paid off😉
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Simply refreshing👏
Total new concept
new characters
new names
a new feel
His pain seeing his di is inevitable,but he got stuck in between two trees, is there any connection to the story ? He saw Khsuhi,but his lips whispered "Mom".So he is seeing innocent , pure soul as his mother.Love that part👏
Arnav's confusion is still there, that why Khsuh is calling Dr.Balraj as her Uncle and Dr is calling her as of his daughter.waiting for next update for this clarification.
Neha is so cute nd Molly...rfff
Love this sensitive part where Molly was comforting him when he told Neha that his booboo is hurting.
Neha gave him her own Angel...absolutely touched my heart .This part is so beautiful.I love the sensitivity in your writing and this part is marvelous.
Khushi and her banter, a chatter box whose beauty is alluring, making him lose even in his wounded state.Love the description of Khsuhi's beauty from Arnav's eye...His POV is so visible.
we need Khsuhi's POV about Arnav
She ruined his shoes, and he ruined her mood.
Last part is very amazing...So Neha is orphan😭
Edited by Roop_P - 8 years ago
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