AsYa(KaBhi) FF "You Are Mine" Ch.7 updated,pg 50-(28/04) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice concept 
The banner is awesome 
Little bit idea past relationships of Asad is affect on the future 
Is it right 
Lots of love 
Big hugs 

Busy with theses days, that'ss why late replying 
Inshallah from next week I will be regular here  
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Posted: 8 years ago
So interesting 
A love story lost love love not received one side love 
So a love triangle is it 
So it has to be zoya in the first the bubbly cheery 
The other is ? Shilpa or ridz 
Asad is the guy 
So who was his first love lost love 
And is he married now and has a child 
But the banner has 2 kids pics so is their a child out of wedlock too 
Or did he marry the other person too 
Bcuz someone is looking at pics and the girls has on bridal wear and happy 
Confused u like doing this to us 
Continue and thanks for pm 
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Sanjhari thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow a new story...
Good concept ...bit confusing right now...
Looks like Asad has a past which is now coming in between his present.
It will b we very interesting. ...
Waiting for the update. ..:-)

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Posted: 8 years ago
hii deepu..
wonderful start dear..
ya Allah...I can't wait to read this story..
u gave such an amazing intro and prologue...
so zoya and ridz...I love both of them..
who was his first love...waiting to story unreveal..
what was in prologue..who's child is that..
I'm sure that is asad's child...
but who is the mother...I think that is zoya...
lot of confusions... plz update soon deepu..
looking forward.. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very intriguing..
But I want it to be only asya ending..
will it be?
Sp8699 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
PM to me when u update next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome prologue.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice concept
Love really is complicated
jas91 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
huggies Depu๐Ÿค—
1 taraf hai ghar wali 1 taraf bahar wali
so baaton ki 1 baat yahi story ka saar hai right๐Ÿ˜‰
but yeh title us hisab se wrong hai ๐Ÿ˜†
prologue se toh lagta hai all 3 leads r sacrificing there love atleast FL toh karing phir yeh U R MINE kaise ?? bolo bolo tell tell๐Ÿ˜†
bache 2 hain ke 1 I think 1 hoga which is wid 2nd wife cuz Asad ke saath interaction hai ๐Ÿ˜‰
but jo bhi hai I know its gonna b very interesting ๐Ÿ˜Š
but I will just say ki pehle purani SS finish kar de amma plz๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello Everyone

A Big Thank you for liking and commenting on this thread, your each comment is so precious to me and it encourage me to write further...

I know the prologue is a bit complicated rather I guess I made it more complicated...but things will get clear as the story will progress...And I want to clear one thing... it's not a story about Betrayal but about LOVE...I hope you will enjoy it...

One more thing, there is only one child in the story...

Once again THANK YOU So much to everyone who pressed the like button and took out a time to comment here...๐Ÿ˜Š


 

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