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Sorry for disturbing the flow...

The opening scene was very emotions , it now all her life she never was important in anyones life , she never had the reason to feel excited. After a long time Khushi is feeling this excited and feeling special. 

                 So many people has described Khushi in a saree but the way you described was very sensuous , I don't know if you have watched a movie in Telugu "Sadaa me sevalo" in that movie the director has shown that saree is the most sensuous outfit for a woman and after that this scene you wrote was so amazing.

 

                   I think Khushi is this vocal only with Arnav she never hesitates to ask any question , she is so innocent and cute. Lol from now when ever I see a grasshopper I will remember Khushi and her first kiss lol too much I am rolfing.

 

                The whole date was so beautiful I have no words to describe , Arnav has take care of everything , he thought about her uneasiness in a crowded area , he kept her likes and dislikes in mind and according to that he took care of the food. But when Khushi asked him the same he just shrugged it away wasn't he the same  from the start he always did things for her but never told her nor took the credit. Coming to Khushi everything was overwhelming for her , everything was for the first time for her , even the kiss I think. In the past she might have been kissed to satisfy desire but may not be kissed out of love out of passion out of Possessiveness.

 

                  The kiss was so amazing and the way you wrote it was beautiful. Amazing update 

Edited by Srilathalolla - 8 years ago

Me ready for the date Deeps 😛 

Edited by -Bhavi - 8 years ago

waiting for thursday night..

resh

Happy Holi SBHians🤗

Unres

So so amazing update no no amazing Date.😳

From the very beginning you takes us different world totally it wasn't just their date i was our dream as well, date of khushi with her dr. R jii
😃

Khushi enthusiasm to get ready quickly and then getting cautious of what she have to wear to not let down arnav's image. Her sadness when she stand infront of mirror was heart piercing but at same time her determination of being think about only them was so outstanding.

Ohh i just love abhay gayatri, how beautifully they always stand with arnav with his every decision and every moment of his love journey.

Arnav saw real beauty of khushi, a seren natural beauty of her. Khushi asking arnav abt her dressing not getting any compliment was so cute, and the way arnav compliment her was really need to relax her

Aweee poor Grasshopper, in khushi excitement he became Bali ka Balkara 😆 love her childless while telling story behind Grasshopper. But more than their laughter and arnav's aim bringing original khushi back is happening.

And finally here come the destination of thier special night their date. Just love itso so much, how wonderfully arnav choice place for her, her liking, her comfort level, her enjoyment and her moment with him. Arranging everything right from natural destination with tealights to her favourite food with new experience of having wine while a music again her choice of music playing all was so so memorable for her and her overwhelming reaction, her expressing her love and gratitude with simple but loving kiss was so pure, her enjoying every beat of this special date is memorable for him, and for them.


After their beautiful dinner, arnav being impatient and khushi acknowledging it with same feelings is really amusing to see, she finally start taking steps towards their relation, start letting go of her past accepting her present n future with her dr. R jii. . Her staring arnav, observing his charm, her thinking about her sweat on his shirt and lastly reciprocating him in their kiss was a new and beautiful start of their togetherness.

Marvelous update, so much love itEdited by Sh0Nali - 8 years ago

u are back...awesome...how are you feeling...hope ur doing a-one...

Great to see u back...

Edited by aranya_19 - 8 years ago