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Posted: 06 November 2006 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Get ready for another Heart Attack Folks........ Yes i am back with

Fanfic #14!!!!!!

Tadap Tadap Ke!

Its all becuz of Shina (Lonely14) if i didnt have told her about my new ff.. and didnt get ideas in my head.... then i wouldnt have post it!!!



Summary:

Basically this one is about... Bani!

Bani's family hates her she's the eldest of 4 but she's the adopted one!!.. and she's living with her 12 year old younger Brother Aryan who is mentally challeneged! and she has to support him!!! She needs to find a job fast for his medicine and what not!!!!!!!!!!!..........


This is about her struggles with life!!!!....

There is only one Neg character in the FF and thats Pia!!! Bani's younger step sister!!!



Enjoy guys..... now seriously if it isnt good... tell me to stop! and i will!!!Big smile!!!

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Part 1

Bani is going job hunting!!

And some of the places!!!!!!

She needs the job badly!!!!!!!

And wherever she goes

She is turned down

She begs

Cuz she needs the job!!!!

She's like where do I go!!!!

She's gone everywhere!!!!

But no luck!

She comes back home!!!!!

And when she comes home

She gets a big hug from his little brother!!!!

And he's hugging her

And she smiles!!!!!!

Ragu Kaka: Bani Beta…. Did you find a job?

Bani: No I didn't!!!!!!

Ragu Kaka is like don't worry!

Bani is like I need to get a job!

I have to pay for his medication and treatment and all of that

He says leave it to God!!

He will find a solution!!!

Bani looks at him!

Ragu Kaka makes dinner

(She lives in a small place!!! Very small…. )

Bani feeds him and what not!!!

I will name her brother Aryan!!!

She's feeding him

And he's refusing to it!

Handling him by urself

Is a very hard job!!!!!

But she loves him very much!!!!

In her own home….

No one cares about neither of them!!!!!!!!!!
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Part 2

And she's thinking about that!!!!!

Afterwards

She puts him to sleep!!!!!!!

And she caresses his head and what not!!!!

And then

She thinks about the past……….

In her house… there are 3 sisters… and One brother

Aryan is the youngest!!!!!!

He's only 12!!!!!!

Bani is the oldest!!!…

She's 24!!!!!

Her other two sisters are Pia and Rano!!

Pia's 22 and Rano is 20!!!!!

The problem is…

That Bani isnt their blood daughter!!

She was adopted!!

Many problems arose!!!!!

And the cause was Pia!!!!!!!!!

She was always taunting her and what not!

Even though Bani was the oldest!

And she always rubbed it in!!

Aryan was born…. But he was mentally challenged!!

Pia had an attitude problem!!

And she would always talk crap about Aryan

Bani didn't like that

She fought for him..

And their parents always wanted a son and when they got one.. he was like that!

So they didn't care!!!

Pia made Bani the bad guy….

And her parents listened to Pia!!!

And they kicked her out

But she took Aryan with her!!! Cuz she knew if he stayed they wouldn't treat him properly!!!!!

And now..

She's here!! Struggling and trying to find a job!!!!!!!!!!

And trying to support her brother!!!!!!!!!!!


The End!
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Posted: 06 November 2006 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Preview for tomorrow:

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Secretary needed for Walia Group of Industries!!!!
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Posted: 06 November 2006 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
awesome.....new fanfic......man u got too much time.......lol

i love the intro....waiting for more parts....

bani and jai meet

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Posted: 06 November 2006 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Awesome!!!!!!
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Posted: 06 November 2006 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
awesome dude!!!!!!
aww poor bani!!!actually poor Aryan!!!!

Edited by jigna_07 - 06 November 2006 at 10:33pm
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Posted: 06 November 2006 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
interesting.something different.looking forward to reading more. Smile

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