RiMa SS - Race Against Time - Part 12 on Page 34 - Last Part - Page 10

Ahmadalli

@Ahmadalli

Groupbie

Posted: 8 years ago

Nice update So the PM and Brin are crating doubts in RK's minds for his wife conspiring with someone. I hope RK knows his wife better to Be left doubted on their relation. Thanks for the update. Even if u give short updates no probs but make it frequent. My like Button isnt working So couldnt Do the same

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Hope rk doesnt doubt madhu
Awesome update

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silverfire

@silverfire

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Great going. The suspense is building up.😛

Biwi or the Russian president.😛 First biwi then the president.😃

I suspect the president 's PA. She seems very upset when RK asked her to go out.

His boss suspects Madhu. He Is gonna get his head bitten off.😃

How is our boy gonna crack this? Looking forward to it.

Thanks for the PM.

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Abigail

@MlleAnonyme

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Ishu 🤗

Just started reading this. I know I'm behind many chapters 😆 But better late than never right? 😉 😆 I will give my feedback on each update 😃 excited to read the other parts. You are really an awesome writer. 😃 Just love your writing style ❤️

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Abigail

@MlleAnonyme

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Something is fishy! Sullu is talking too much 🤢🤣

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Abigail

@MlleAnonyme

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

2nd Chapter

What the hell ?? Sullu knows about Rishabh? 😲 PS- Wasn't Madhu feeling uncomfortable with this man following her everywhere? 😆 From the airport to the passenger seats 😆 Missed RK in this chapter ❤️

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Abigail

@MlleAnonyme

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 3

Wow I'm already hooked up to this story 😎 Sullu is awesome too 🤣 I hate him but like how he has planned everything in your story 😉 I love to read detective stories. But what does he wanna do with Vladmir Putin? 😉 😆

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Abigail

@MlleAnonyme

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 4

RK was missing her so much started kissing pillows 🤣 I wonder what he will do to her when she comes back home 😉 🤣 That idiot punched Madhu? 😡 How bad!

Suspense is killing me 😲

*Runs to read the next chapter*

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Abigail

@MlleAnonyme

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 5

I wonder what's happening around? Is Sullu really a terrorist or just fooling Madhu with another intention? 😕 Awesome update Ishu 😃 I read 5 chapters in one day. Almost reaching the 6th (where you have updated the latest) 😉 😆 Keep on writing more 😃

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Abigail

@MlleAnonyme

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 6

Oh no! RK will suspect Madhu now 😔 Damn. This is too interesting. 👏 Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon 😃 Overall it was quite thrilling to read. Loved the concept & you have manage to hook the readers to this story line which is amazing.

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