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Reserving my space for comment...I will read the chapters now and get back here again 😛
UNRES
OMG OMG!! That was way more intense than I could ever imagine!!
In my last comment in Thread 1, I was still in the catch up mode, so trying to understand the characters all over again. But now these two updates have been so eventful and action packed!!
First of all, the brothers going after the monster 're-incarnated' without taking much help with them was kind of reckless I suppose. But even then they were not exactly privy of what to expect...
Their accident was terrifying, but what followed after that was way more horrific. You won't believe me, I read the first part and that very night I had a scary nightmare which made me wait for some more time to get back to the story 😛 ...so you know how efficient you are to portray scenes with your words in your readers' mind 😳
So Shaurya is a diabolical character who lives two extremely different lives at the same time...no wonder Kapoor brothers would face lots of hurdles to bring his heinous crimes to light.
As usual, the conversation between the brothers is cold and detached even after the horrific accident, though it seems Rudra's persistent attempts at getting into his brother's head are coming to effect slowly.
Viraj was like a blow of fresh air in this assemblage of people haunted by their past...he loves Meera and does not deter from making it clear to her, as well as make her realise her futile attachment to Reeshan. I suppose now Maya will try to help him in her way, although it would not be accepted by Meera all too well. Or may be Maya will try to keep herself away from all this fiasco, as she already knows her position in Reeshan's life is all too complicated for her as well as Meera. But finally it was good to see her getting some sort of comfort from Bittuji.
And now, the showstopper...what was that? Shaurya must have been informed about the involvement of police in the dead bodies found from his property. Is he going to take Reeshan as hostage to get himself safely out of the way? Or is it going to be more gruesome than that? It felt as if I am sitting at the edge of my seat and watching this hair-raising thriller on a big screen.
You are a god-gifted writer...this story should get appreciations from a bigger population if you publish it beyond TV show forums..
Waiting for more...let's see what is going on in that convolutions of your grey matter
😉
UNRES
OMG OMG!! That was way more intense than I could ever imagine!!
In my last comment in Thread 1, I was still in the catch up mode, so trying to understand the characters all over again. But now these two updates have been so eventful and action packed!!
First of all, the brothers going after the monster 're-incarnated' without taking much help with them was kind of reckless I suppose. But even then they were not exactly privy of what to expect...
Their accident was terrifying, but what followed after that was way more horrific. You won't believe me, I read the first part and that very night I had a scary nightmare which made me wait for some more time to get back to the story 😛 ...so you know how efficient you are to portray scenes with your words in your readers' mind 😳
So Shaurya is a diabolical character who lives two extremely different lives at the same time...no wonder Kapoor brothers would face lots of hurdles to bring his heinous crimes to light.
As usual, the conversation between the brothers is cold and detached even after the horrific accident, though it seems Rudra's persistent attempts at getting into his brother's head are coming to effect slowly.
Viraj was like a blow of fresh air in this assemblage of people haunted by their past...he loves Meera and does not deter from making it clear to her, as well as make her realise her futile attachment to Reeshan. I suppose now Maya will try to help him in her way, although it would not be accepted by Meera all too well. Or may be Maya will try to keep herself away from all this fiasco, as she already knows her position in Reeshan's life is all too complicated for her as well as Meera. But finally it was good to see her getting some sort of comfort from Bittuji.
And now, the showstopper...what was that? Shaurya must have been informed about the involvement of police in the dead bodies found from his property. Is he going to take Reeshan as hostage to get himself safely out of the way? Or is it going to be more gruesome than that? It felt as if I am sitting at the edge of my seat and watching this hair-raising thriller on a big screen.
You are a god-gifted writer...this story should get appreciations from a bigger population if you publish it beyond TV show forums..
Waiting for more...let's see what is going on in that convolutions of your grey matter
😉
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