SwaRon SS : Love In A Cruise *updated Ch 2 pg 5 (10/1)* - Page 5

Originally posted by: --lavanya--

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Originally posted by: --NupurSwaron--

Loved d update ...its amazing 👏

 How swayam  shared his life secret   wid sharon n den sharon hugged him to lessen his pain is beautifully penned down ...

den sharon was still nt sure abt sharing her secret wid a stranger bt den d excitement of meeting him next day n swayam gettng impatient ...d story on cruise is gettng interestng wid each update 

last hug was d bst ...waitng for d next part eager to knw wat's in store for us 

Update soon 😊

Originally posted by: vrishan

awesome update

love how swayum share his pain with sharon

that sanaya hate her😡 poor swayum

but sharon was not not sure to share her grief with a stranger

the last hug was awesome

waiting for sharon side of story

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome update..loved it.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Rupita

last part was awesome😛...do pm me whenever u upadate...thank u👍🏼

Originally posted by: 3sisters

Awesome update loved it 

Originally posted by: Shonaalii

Thnkxx

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Beautiful update

Originally posted by: mythreyii

Heya ayu

Beautifully written..

The whole flashback was crisp and clear without dragging..

Loved how swayum was in solace jus by being with her

And when he asks her to listen to his song was all the more sweet. Really loved it the cruise is like a value addition to the ss. Swayum was acting to b drunk is the surprise element.

And the way he startes convo in the morning was really nice.

The last part was all the more good when he ram behind her to console her jus like she did..

Beautifully written.. 

Awaiting next one badly its jus growing interesting