|Aye Mere Humsafar...ek zara Intezar| Part. 3 Pg. 11 | 7/6/16

Posted: 8 years ago

Prologue:
Jab HumSafar ne hi saath chod diya beech rah main, 
Tu KISMAT ko kya dosh dena.
Meri KISMAT ne bhi kya ajeeb khel khela hai,
Jab ZINDAGI ne hi haara diya mujhe, 
Tu NASEEB se kya ladna...


Edited by CrazzyBusy - 7 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Character Sketch:
Geet Hayat Khan: I wish you could see, what I have become without you. Hai bas itni hi ilteja meri, tujhse aye mere Humsafar, ke kya thi tere jane ki wajha.

Maan Singh Khurana:I wish I could tell you, why I have left you. Bebas hoon main itna, ke tujhe chacha kar bhi chacha nahi sakta, tunjhe paa kar bhi paa nahi sakta. 
Hai talab-e-ishq mujhko teri, hai in saanson ko teri hi talab...par is talab ki koi manzil hi nahi...

Mr. Khan: Jab bhi haat-uthe mera teri Ibadat main, Tu mangi bas ek hi Dua us Rab se.
Ho Ata tujhe, aye meri noor-e-nazar, is kainat ki sari khushiyon se tera daman bhar doon. Par shyad hamari Duaon main hi koi kami rah gai, ke jo bejhi tu dua, wo unsuni ho gai.

Dr. Shahzeeb: I'm a Doctor. Us Rab ne hai nawaza mujhe aise hunar, se jo deti hai zindagi auron ko. I am a Doctor who gives life to people, who gives hope to people that someday they will be cured and will live a healthy life. I am a Doctor, but am I really a person to give life to others. If so, then why don't I help my friends. Haan Dost. naseeb walon ko milti hai dosti, aur main wo ek Khusnaseeb ho...par saath hi saath badnaseeb bhi ke apne hi dostoon ke dard ka ilaj nahi hai mere pass.

Labeel: Main Hoon Labeel. I am a friend of that person who took all my pains and all my suffering away from me. But then today...today when she is in pain, why am I unable to take away her pain from her and make it mine...why am I not able to give her the happiness she deserves...Why?


Edited by CrazzyBusy - 7 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Index
Teaser: Page 4
Part 1: Page 5
Part 2: Page 7
Part 3: Page 11
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Edited by CrazzyBusy - 7 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
waiting yaar..happy new year 2016..
Posted: 8 years ago
congrats, awesome banner! waiting 4 prologue, cs n updates😊
Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful banner :)
congrtz for new story :)
Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks guys for supporting me with this new SS.
This is already written, just need to write the end and a few scenes in the parts...so it won't take long to finish it...
Anyway, the Character Sketch is up on the first Page...
Will post the first part by tomorrow...
Mariam
Edited by CrazzyBusy - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
is this going to be a sad story ? :(
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice prologue n CS dear.. Waiting for update..
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice prologue quiet sad nice cs looks like maan left her because he is helpless not that he doesnt love herEdited by Drashtilove - 8 years ago

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