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neha9

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 1:27pm | IP Logged

J: Lakin Yeh Kya Hai

A: Mera dil ka armaan....

J: Matlab?

A: Jassi yhe shaadi ka joora hai.... who shaddi ka joda jo maina tub desing karwaya tha jub tum mujhse door chaligayi thi... Lakin mujhe vishwaas tha ki tum ek din zaroor wapis aogi...

J: Itna Pyaar katha hai app mujhse.... itna vishwaas tha mujhpe....

A: Tumse jaada mujhe hamara pyaar par vishwaas tha....

By now both jassi n armaan have tears in his eyes.... looking into each others eyes.... as if the whole world has stopped for them.. as this moment will stay like that forever... looking into each others eyes.... armaan moves closer to armaan... and closer... stills they are staring into each others eyes.... jassi hugs armaan tighter than ever.... 

A: Still hugging jassi back says, kya tum mera armaan poora karogi?

J: Ha... lakin aapko bhi mara armaan poora karna para ga... aap apni es dulhan ko kudh saaja ga... (deck her up)

A: seprating from jassi.... says... aaj hum ek doosra ka armaan poora karaga.... LOL 

the mood has lightened up by now and jassi says ab app jaoo..

A: Kaha?

J: Aare mujhe change karna hai...

A: Who too tum mera saamna bhi karsakti hoo

Jassi hits armaan on his arm and drives him out...

A few minutes later jassi hasnt still come out and armaan knoks on the door....

J: Haa

A: Jaldi karo....

J: Bas ek mint

A: Main aandar arha hoo

J: Armaan nahie

A: Teek hai bas ek our mint

armaan is leaning on the door when jassi opens the door and armaan falls onto jassi right to the bed...  LOL they both look at each other and laugh...

J: Abb chora bhi

A: Nahie...

J: Ok

and armaan hugs her.. and they both laugh

Still hugging jassi says... armaan tumhe appna armaan nahie dekna kya...

now finally armaan lets go of jassi.... and jassi stands up fixing her dupatta and armaan looks at her as if he were dreaming.. he gets up from the bed..

hugging her from the back says: Tum koi pari tho nahie... jassi shyly looks down.... armaan sits jassi on the bed and decks her up.... he puts oh er bangels and jewery and turns jassi to the mirror... 

J: Kya aapka armaan poora hoa hai....

A: Nahie ek chees baki hai

J: Kya

Armaan takes jassi's dupata and puts it on her head...

A: Aab mara armaan poora haou hai.. jassi turns and hugs him...

a few minutes later jassi break armaan from his dream saying i hate to go..

A: Kuch der aur please..

J: Nahie armaan please... mujhe jaana hai

A: Ok ek shart

J: um.... kya!

A: ek kiss...

J: Armaan tum nahie sodaro ga

A: Bahi main tho aasa hi hoo

J: Leans foward and kisses him on both cheeks... and then his forehead..

A: yhe 2 extra kisses kis kiya?

J: bus u he...

A: Ok ab tum jaa sakti hoo...

J: Bahi waa.. aashiq ho to aaisa....

A: Thank you, par kyun...

J: Bahi maina tumhe 2 extra kisses diya aur tumna ek bhi nahie

A: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

J: ok main ab chalthi hoo.. 

A: Ok...

J: At least bahar tak tho chor doo

A: OK

Jassi starts to walk when armaan pulls her back to the bed..

jassi looks at him with pleasing eyes....

He moves closer to her and wispers... tumne mujhe 3 kisses hi main thmhe kitni doo... jassi shly looks down... armaan moves to her cheeks and gives her one... then he moves up to her forehead and gives her another kiss.. and then tp her other  cheek and then moves down to her lips... and closer... but before he could kiss her jassi's cell rings and jassi moves her head shyly (its jassi time time n not armaans cell)

J: Hello

Amrit: Beta kaho tum..

J: Mama bas main abhi aati hoo

as jassi is talking on the phone armaan is playing with her hair..  and basically being naughty with her...

J: Ok mama main bas abhi ati hoo.... and puts the phone down...

J: Armaan tum kabhi nahie sudroga...

A: Nahie!

Jassi smiles...

A: Jassi ek baat batao

J: Pucho and jassi turns...

A: Jabhi main tumhe tumara lips par kiss karna jatha hoo tho kuch na kuch galat ho jata hai...  kyun

Jassi puts her hands on armaan neck n says ARMAAAAAAAAAAAAAN tum vakahi kabhi nahie sudhro gaa...

And they both hug each other n then jassi gets up to leave...

at the door armaan wont let her go....

J: Armaan please mujhe chodo.. nahie tho papaji shaadi cancel na karda gaa..

A; Tho main phir main tumhe bagaka leyajo gi

J: Aur agar main nahie aapka saath nahie chali tho..

A: Tho..

J Tho...

A: Tho main thuahara ghar ka saamna aapni jaan daa do ga..  jassi puts her hands on his mouth and hugs him saying aagar tumne phir aasa kuch bhi kaha tho main aapsa kabi baat nahie karogi

A: Ok baba nahie kaho gaa.. lekin tum bhi kabhi ya mat khana ki tum mara saath nahie do gi...

J: Ok.. lakin ab tho mujhe yana do.. ok..

A; Ha lakin hamari who kiss abhi tak pending hai..

J: Really!

A: Really.. and they both look into each others eyes...  and jassi moves closer to him and gives him a quick kiss on armaans lips and runs away...

A: Jassi...  and runs his hand through his hair...

END! The next part will be the day of the wedding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

see u soon!

 

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Aabha

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Woo hoo!!!  The "Cursed Kiss" is not cursed anymore!!!!  Excellent A4Ever!!!! I love your fan fiction stories!!!!  Thanks for making my day!!!!

Ttyl,

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neha9

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
awsome! love it! Embarrassed Clap

happe

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
nice and very romantic Embarrassed. Keep it up Neha.

marvelous.malks

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 2:02pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by armaans4ever

awsome! love it! Embarrassed Clap

ooppps.....that was soppose to be me LOL

ketaki_ry

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
wowwwwww!!   ClapClap

akalra

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
Winkamazing, so tell me when is the next part comin out?!!?!?/1

tina59

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
that was gerat ....waiting for the next one

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