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Posted: 8 years ago

Strangeness

She stands there looking at the sea in front of her ...the waves soothes the shores...she doesn't know the man who stand beside her. There is a wave of strangeness around her ...

She looks at his eyes with the same feelings of looking to a stranger...she saw her life in his eyes just like a mirror...there also she see the strangeness, that she can't understand till now...

When standing near to him in front of  the god as his to be bride, when step her legs to his decorated room she doesn't know him...at last  when she waited for the freedom at the family court, till he was a stranger for her...

Her mother love never allow her to divide her daughters childhood at the court...yes, she like loses.

Today ,after 5 years...again standing in front of him...she feels the same strangeness ...the same feelings she can see in the eyes of her daughter...

She withdraws her gaze from him and she walks away without sharing the happiness or loneliness of the past 5 years...

"You didn't talk to her , astha"

"There are no dreams in my hands to give her , shlok."

She walks leaving behind a sea, his mind and a little girl...

 


do comment...this is a story that i write in Malayalam .just translate to  English and posted here...so plz ignore the mistakes...

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Posted: 8 years ago
it after a long time u came here..plz update your stories didi...waiting for it
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice keep it up always
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome os...👏👏
keep writing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice one waiting for other one keep on posting new os..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

nice one waiting for other one keep on posting new os..


Sorry my computer are damaged can't able to update until it get repaired
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice os. so emotional. hope ur cmptr will get repaired soon. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
miss ur os and waiting 4 them
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Posted: 8 years ago
Glad 2 c a Malayali here.I am also a malayali.So Ashlok got divorced,but she never fought over her daughter as she didnt want 2 destroy her childhood.Last sentence was very touchy.very emotional OS like a lovely poem
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Posted: 8 years ago
is ur cmptr still on repairs? when ll u get it back? missing ur os sooo much. please update when u get it back dear. v r waitng.