The Moment

Bound by compulsion,
He struggles to breakfree..
Having surrendered , miffed he remains with self...
Of his forgone freedom, she reminded him...
Yet , unaware , he sought her ,
In all that he knew , believed and felt...
His anger, frustration, companionship, togetherness...
Clouded by jarring disharmony of cucooned emotions...
He fails to hear the unsung melody in her silence...
Concious mind, overpowering, he fails to see beyond his own...
Strings of heart , strung by the unchained melody..
Set him in a trance...momentarily...
For sets him free, it does, the unsung melody...
Shut out , the voices of the inner being ,
the unsung melody, he does..
As he stands , on the verge of freedom he seeks...
Yet, unwilling , to let go.. he watches...
The undeniable truth , that her eyes speak....
Deafening silence giving way ...
To the ever soothing unsung melody...
Mesmerized , he stands,
Her eyes , reflecting his true self...
Into those unquestioning eyes ...
He stares... aware of the moment..
For Moment of truth ... it is ...Now...

-Sareeta

- An attempt to pen Shiv's thoughts and possible reaction , after the truth was revealed...

(Copyright: Sarita Chitrapu. 2006-2010 .All Rights Protected) - For lines penned above..

Edited by sareeta - 17 years ago

Originally posted by: CrystalBue345

Very nice 👏

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!😊

u r really good at poetry and description. very good job. i really liked it. i liked every bit of it. how u broght two contrasting things together 👏   👏   👏

Originally posted by: sareeta

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!😊

Welcome😳

omg sareeta again a really good one 👏 👏 👏 i loved the strings line 😳   n must u have pened down shiv's true feelings very well well dear 👏 👏 👏
keep it up 👍🏼
love ya buddy 🤗
ur fan 😳
love
anu

Originally posted by: sareeta

..............
He fails to hear the unsung melody in her silence...
Concious mind, overpowering, he fails to see beyond his own...
Strings of heart , strung by the unchained melody..
Set him in a trance...momentarily...
For sets him free, it does, the unsung melody...
Shut out , the voices of the inner being ,
the unsung melody, he does..
....
Deafening silence giving way ...
To the ever soothing unsung melody...
 
..... the moment..
For Moment of truth ... it is ...Now...

-Sareeta

- An attempt to pen Shiv's thoughts and possible reaction , after the truth was revealed...

someone said it far better than me, so i'll just quote:
"Heard melodies are sweet, those unheard are sweeter....."
John Keats.
The unheard 'unheard melodies' maketh the romance, my dear....

amy
Edited by armana - 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yamulya1

u r really good at poetry and description. very good job. i really liked it. i liked every bit of it. how u broght two contrasting things together 👏   👏   👏

Thank you so much for your kind words! Glad you liked the lines penned!! 😊

Originally posted by: armana

someone said it far better than me, so i'll just quote:
"Heard melodies are sweet, those unheard are sweeter....."
John Keats.
The unheard 'unheard melodies' maketh the romance, my dear....

amy

Hey Amy, so true , so very true... the unheard melodies maketh the romance..😊 Awwww.... I was trying to capture.. that... in what I was writing.. wonder if I did justice....

Leave it to you mastarni.. to judge that for me..😊

Originally posted by: anu_thegr8

omg sareeta again a really good one 👏 👏 👏 i loved the strings line 😳   n must u have pened down shiv's true feelings very well well dear 👏 👏 👏
keep it up 👍🏼
love ya buddy 🤗
ur fan 😳
love
anu

Awwww, Anu, what do I say... you leave me speechless... buddy!!! Thanks a lot, a lot, alot , Anu for the kind words! I am glad , you like the lines!!

My fan...  awwww, me fainting.... some body help me....!!! 😳 Thanks a bunch buddy!

Originally posted by: sweet_ak92

👏 👏 👏

Thank you so much! 😊