Aditya,Chakor,Vivan,Imli after leap FF-Its Destiny(updated pg9) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK
Wow chhavi superb. Kal adi ka naam aaya aur aaj ff ka next part. Too good. Loved d destiny conversation. Excellent update. Waiting for d next part.

aww thank u so much for ur lovely feedback dear😳⭐️

will post next part very soon 😉😊

hope ki aadi show mein bhi jaldi aye ...⭐️😉

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Tamanna

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: creationschhavi
part-16
Aditya chakor standing together in titanic pose one holding hands
Their eyes closed
And enjoying the rain totally
Lost in the thoughts of each other
Hasi Bann Gaye plays...
Chakor remembers how adi saved her from train
How they used to eat icecream together
How he explained about music player
And she get bored
Slight smile spread on her face remembering the cute innocence smart adi
Adi remembers their hifi
their fighting on every small thing
Their holding hands of each other
When chakor hugged him on her birthday

Slight smile spread on his face to after remembering chakor
His everything now

Suddenly wind starts blowing fast very fast and rain stops
Both open their eyes slowly one after the other and see towards sky
Adi :chakor hum...
Chakor :haan kya aadi ...bolo

Adi holds her
Adi :chakor hum itni der se yahan pe bheeg rahe the
Beemar pad gaye to ...
Chakor : to kya ??

Hum itne time baad barish ka maja liye ek saath aur tumhe bimar hone ki chinta padi hai? ??

Adi :hum aise hi hain
Koi problem???

Chakor :chakor ko bhalla apne bijli ke dabbe se kya problem hui sakat hai? ??

Adi :theek hai
Ab chalo yahaan se
He holds her hand and starts moving forward...

Chakor hold his hand and stops him

thodi der aur yahaan pls...

Adi:par kyon?

Chakor :hume tumse kuch kehna hai ...
Adi :haan bolo
Chakor :adi...
Humari life kitni ajeeb hai naa...
Kismat
Adi:mm destiny...
adi :kisiko hum apne banana chahte hain aur koi kab humara apna ban jaata hai hume pata hi nahin chalta Adi points his finger at her head :are buddhu
Isi ko to kismat kehte hain
chakor :adi... par
adi :chakor hum ye saari baate ghar jaa kar bhi kar sakte hain ...
Chakor :naahin... yahin par
adi :achchha meri maa theek hai ...
Chakor :haan to adi ...kismat kya hoti hai? Tum to humre bijli ka dabba ho naa... tum ko to sab pata hovat hai...
Chakor sits under tree there and asks adi also to sit there and tell
Adi :kismat... Kismat wo hai jo insaan ki soch se bhot dur hai
He holds chakor chin And d
Says :wo...upar dekho he points towards moon Chakor :chandu ..ji...
Adi:haan ...chandu ji Ye tumhari meri hum sab ki kismat ye hi likhte hain
chakor:par...ye to humare best friend hain naa...to ii humka batavat kyon nahin humri kismat...??
Adi :buddhu... kimat koi batane ki cheej nahin hoti Ye to bas hume same ke saath hi pata chalti hai Chakor :achchha ii batao humre liye kaun achchha hai kun bura ii kese pata lagat hai...
iske...peechchhe bhi kismat hovat hai naa Agar humri kimat achchhi hai to hum ko pata lagi hai naa
??
Adi :chakor!!!tumhe kya hua hai aaj .. itne saare questions ek saath
???
Kuch hua hai kya? ?
Chakor :adi humka kuchchho nahin hua hai bas hum ii janna chahvat hain... She holds her hand Batao naa...
Adi:ye sab samay ke saath pata chalta hai Hum kisi ko achchha sachha samajhte hai Aur hota kuch auur hai
Hume nahin pata ki kaise pata lagaya jaye par
Hum ye mante hain ki jaroori nahin jo jaisa dikje wo waisa hi ho Jaise
Life itni easy dikhti hai
Aur hai kitni complicated
chakor :ek min ...ek min...complicated matlab??
Adi :matlab...uljhi hui ...
Chakor :aur pyaar?
Adi looks in her eyes with love Their hairs start flying...
Adi :pyaar?
Chakor :haan ...pyaar... Adi :humari dictionary mein
Pyaar ka matlab nahin hai Bas itna jante hain ki pyaar wo hai jo hum apne dada dadi mummy aur papa se karte the ...
Chakor :bas...
Adi :bas matlab...??
Chakor :kuch nahin...
adi :aur koi question hai kya madam?
?
Chakor :mm...she smiles Nahin ...shayad Jaab yaad avega tab batayege
adi :to ab hum ghar chalein? ??
Chakor :mmm
How it is frds?😊

Awesome story with full on romance. I love this story lot...⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 34DAYA56

Awesome story with full on romance. I love this story lot...👏

thank u so much tamanna😳⭐️

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: smiles_uk
nice one ... keep it up (y)

thanks smiles..😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

thank u too core...to all who liked and praised my work...⭐️

kepp enjoying...my ff😳😊

part 17

chakor and adi reached home
Adi :finally ghar pohonch gaye...
Chakor :haan chalo
Chakor rings the bell
No response ...
She rings the bell again ...
No response
Adi :hum try carein
Chakor :han han karo naa...jaise tumre hathon mein to koi jaadu hai
Tum yahaan bajaoge aur darwaja khul jayega
Adi rings the bell
someone bangs door a bit
seems as if its open now
Both chakor and adi opens the door together ...
With a wide smile on their faces
But
after opening it they get big shock
Imli standing pointing gun towards abha on one side and other side is vivaan pointing gun at both of them ...
Chakor :tum dono ...yahaan
aditya and chakor gets angry
aditya closes his fist in full of anger
Vivaan...
Tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui yahaan ane ki
Imli humari maa ko chhodo
Imli :maa ko tab chhod diya jayega jab tum dono humare saath azaadganj waapas chaloge
Vivaan :bolo manjoor hai ya nahin ...khatam kar dein tumhari maa ko is bandook se
Adi :humne kaha humari mummy ko chhodo
Chakor :vivaan ye sab kya hai ...tumko hua kya hai
Humri mausi ko chhod diyo ...
Vivaan :chhod denge ...par pehle humre saath chalo ..
Adi :nahin
Tumne humari maa ko peechhe kuchh kiya to?
Chakor :vivaan ii kaisi zidd hai
Ab kya chahat ho tum
?
Aditya :hume manzoor hai par humari ek shart hai ...
Imli :kaisi shart?
Adi :shart ye hai ki abha mausi ka khyaal rakhne ke liye chakor yahin par rukegi aur hum tumhare saath yahaan se akele hi jaayenge ...
uff abha mausi nahin mummy
chakor hold adi hand
Nahin aadi tumhe ii log mar dalein hain
Hum apne karan tumri jaan khatre mein nahin daal sakat hain ...
Chakor :adi...agar tum jai ho to hum bhi tumhre saath chalenge tumri wo dhaal bankar jo aaj tak tum humre liye bane the
Adi holds chakor hand
Nahin...
he frees her hand from her
Aditya :hum jayenge akele aur tum humara intezaar karna hum waapas ayenge tumhare aur mummy ke paas
Chakor holds adi wrist
Nahin adi...mat jao...
Adi tries to free his hand
Adi :hume jaana hoga chakor...
Tum kamzor nahin pad sakti aise ...
Tumhe mummy ka khyaal rakhna hai
Aur apna bhi...
Chakor nods her head left right saying no
Adi chakor eyes filled with tears of seperation
Chakor :adi nahin
Nahin adi
Vivaan holds adi from shoulders
Adi gives him intense look
Vivaan says :chal baith jeep mein
Chakor adi keep seeing each other
Adi sees chakor and his mother both with tears in his eyes
Mummy hum waapas ayenge aur umeed le kar ayenge azaadi ki
Chakor ki udaan ko koi nahin rok sakta koi bhi nahin ...
Suna apne...
Chakor :adi hum dono tumre saath hain
Tum ko kuch nahin hovega adi
Tum koi kuch nahin hovega
Abha :adi apna khyaal rakhna aur jaldi aana
Abha eyes filled with tears
Seeing chakor adi in so much pain
Abha can now feel the connection of chakor and aditya
Chakor cries and goes heartbrokenly hugs her abha mausi...
Abha caresses her
:chakor chup ho ja beta wo aa jayega
Chakor :mausi ii sab humri waja se ho raha hai
Na hume adi bachata aur no wo log hume pakadte...
aur adi ne fir se apni jaan khatre mein dal di humko bachane ke liye...
Mausi hum apne ap ko kabho maaf nahin kar payi hai agar use kuch...
Abha puts her hand on her mouth to shut her mouth
Abha :shhh
Aisa nahin bolte sachhi dosti aur sachche pyaar ki takat use
Bacha legi dekh lena tu
Chakor thinks what is love?
Abha :ye pyaar hi to hai jo tu use apne se dur jate nahin dekh sakti
Khud ki jaan ki parvaah kiye bina uske saath jana chahti thi uski dhaal bankar ...
Chakor breaks the hug and says :nahin mausi...ye pyaar nahin hai ...
Adi ne hi humko bataya tha ki pyaar wo hai jo hum apne mummy papa dada dadi se karat hain ...
Achchha ap hi batao mausi...apki nazron mein pyaar kya hai? ?
Abha :pyaar wo hai jab koi anjaan apna lagne lagta hai
Pyaar dosti hai vishwaas hai
Pyaar wo hai jab hum ek duje ke bina jee nahin sakte
Chakor :mmm
ye hai pyaar ...
Abha :haan ...yahi hota hai pyaar ...
Par ..
kuch logon ke liye yahi pyaar kamzori aur kuch ke liye unki taakat ban jaata hai . ..
chakor :ye to bohot complicated hai mausi
Abha:complicated ...
?
A
Chakor:mm matlab uljhi hui
Abha :ye tere ko kis ne bataya
Chakor :bijli ke dabbe ne...
chakor stops and gets confused after saying so
Abha sees unknown love in her eyes for adi
abha :chal b tu ja ke soja
Adi ko kuch nahin hoga ...
Chakor :nahin mausi hume nahin pata ki ye pyaar hai ya dosti par ii sach hai ki hum adi ki takat banna chahte hain kamzori nahin
um bachaye hai bijli dabba ko
U ko kuchchho nahin hone diye hain hum
Abha sees her with full of love
Chakor :hume jaana hoga mausi
She was about to go just then she
Chakor :nahin mausi aap yahan surakshit nahin hain
Raste mein humari frd ka ghar aata hai hum aapko wahan chod diye hain
Theek hai naa...
Abha :haan chakor
Tum adi ke paas jao
Chakor takes mausi and they finally reach her friend home
She tells her frd to take care of mausi for some days
As she have to go to save adi
Her friend agrees and understands her situations
She tells her that dontworry she will take care of her mausi well
Chakor thanks her
Chakor :mausi hume ashirvaad do ki hum adi ko apne saath waapas le kar ayein ...
Aur jeet kar ayein
Is ladaai mein
Abha :bhagvaan kare jeet tum dono ki hi ho ...
Chakor :thank u mausi hum chalat hain ...u ko apne saath le kar hi aayi hain ab ...
Chakor runs fastly on the road etc
Adi tuko kuchchho nahin hoga
Hum aarahein hain
Chakor runs faster faster and more faster without stopping in btw
While running she remembers her asking adi about love
Then mausi defination about love
she remembers how she and adi used to be bestest friends forever their dance
Their seperation
Samjhavan song plays
Chakor :kya yahi pyaar hai...?
Hum nahin jee sakte us ke bina
Aaj tak khwaab mein jeete aye thi ki hum vivaan se pyaar karat hain
Par sach to ye hai ki wo pyaar nahin lagav tha bas
kya pyaar dosti hai ...?
She keeps running and running
And she reaches azaadganj finally⭐️

Edited by creationschhavi - 7 years ago

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