raeysha,Ariya: our love forever

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Hey guys I old member of this forum but had to discontinue due to some reasons.. . But I am back now and miss g all so thought to rite anew story pls cooperate
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: lovvinit

Hey guys I old member of this forum but had to discontinue due to some reasons.. . But I am back now and miss g all so thought to rite anew story pls cooperate




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]So here is cs.. Hope u will enjoy.
And ha obviously the stody will be romanric md emontional

Should i continu??
And pls send me buddy req and
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Arjun suryakant rawte. ... Same as show no past.. Sams younger brother and fallen for riya..

Mr. Sammer damsing dathore... Etf chief and arjuns elded brother... Loves riya as a sis ..

Ayesha kappor... Loves sam d riyas bff

Riya.. Same as show fallen for arjun...

Shree, liza chotu same as show


So

Proluge


Etf memeber at jungle for case ... Ayesha in danger. ..

Age ka intejar karo yar...


Should i cmtinue... Pls tell nd likes nd comments 😊 [0][/COLOR][SIZE=3]</f


 Hey all πŸ˜Š thanks for response i will continue...
so heres the fisrt upate enjoy
and same with ariya...


let me clear   
sam and ayesha have already fallen for eachother nd their love cycle is going on..


Chap -1
 ETF office
Rathod: godd morning all
All: good morning sir..

Rathod: We have a new case so have to go..
so team get ready..

Its in jungle so be carefull 
shree and chotu tumlog asas me nagar rakhoge , shree apna lappi sath lel lena hamein directions pata karnein padenge.

Chore: Ok sir..
Sam: Rawte tum  aur riya sath rahoge aur mein aur ayesha dusre jagah talash karenge..

Liza ko kuch ka, hhain lab mein to agar uski jaruat padi to usko bad mein boldenge..
Shree tum liza ke contact mein rehna.

Shree MV: Kya yar mein hi mila tha sir lo us liza ke sath ..

Chalo team be ready we have to go and girls be carefull kafi dangerous hain..

Ayesha MV: sam jab ap mere sath hain to muje koi chunta nai hain... 


Team reaches jungle and find some clue all are discussing about that.

aarjun: rathod muje lagta hain yeh jarur koi underworld ka admi hain, koi ais waisa nai hain ..hum aur bhi satrak rehna hoga...

Tabhi sam ka phone bajta hain its unlnown num:

Sam: hello 
Admi: To ap hain woh ETF ke chief sameer rathod  woh kya ahin  na muje policewalo se ladne mein aur bhi maja ata hain to tum aur tumahre admi .taiyar ho jao..ab to maaja ayega


Sam: koun ho tum aur tumko kaise pata hum jungle mein hain ?


sorry guys jana padega  thdi der mein post kati hu..
lekin comments chahiye   jaldi karoπŸ˜›





Edited by lovvinit - 8 years ago
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Amazing concept
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Help sorry ha kuch. K am that to gain this here is the continurd updateupday



Continue...[SIZE=3]rathod woh admi kopichta hain ke use kaise pata chala ke uskiteam jungle mein hain

Admi : muje sab pata gain rathod... itne mainusko pata chalta hain. Ki etc team me sath do ladikya bhi gain..


ADmi : oh oh rathod kya bat apne team me I not ladiya bhi rakhte ho... kya bat gain an to air aka ayega waise mal (girls) to acha hi hoga...

Sam and arjun became angry...


Sam: ttum Jo koi bhi ho same so... tumne etc walk se panga lene ka sochkar apni maut no davat di gain...



Admit:   itni bhi kua jaldihain ... abhi to khel shuru hua gain... itni asani se thdi me in hath aunga... mere admi sarie jungle me in gain him at him to lado...



Sam says shree to trace the number all became alert...


Admit cuts the call




Sam: team be alert..

Charo jagah fel jaon...

Ayesha: tum or ri sath me in kaoge...


Ri: OK bhai...



They start searching their admias... half day pas in searching and searching all etc members are in ntch withh each other...




After sometime rathod tells etc team to gether at one place...


All come at that place.



Sam:: kiwi no much clue mila...???where num trace hua???

Agree: sir signal nai mil raha lagta gain kahi n aisi jagah se phn kiya gain jahan hum na porch paye.




Sam: think gain..

Arjun: rathod much to chut raha gain... aise to much nai milega much sochna padega...



Suddenly chotu notices something




Chotu;: aieysha kahan gain???


All see to chotu
Sam: kya Aisha nai gain???



Riya: lekin last take to won mere sarh hi this...



Itne me in phir se call ata. Hain.


Sam: kahan gain meri ayesha.. usko much hua to me in time in kinda nai chodunga...



Admit: kya bat hain... kya tadap gain.. thara mal mere pas gain abhi too sahi salat hainn bad ka pata nai.



Sam get fuming..



Arjun::: dekho chod no uskko...


Phone cuts.


Sam arjun:: hello hello

Achanak unko gloi ki avaj Sinai deti gain...
They all became allert.


Sam: team be careful chalo lagta gain goli ki avaj yahan se ayi gain..



They all went thode due unko ek chat jaise dikhai data gain wahan do admit bahar ghum rahe gain...


Arjun dekhta gain ki ayesha no wahan bamdha gain...



Arjun: Sam dekho ayesha...


Sam eyes starts fuming

Ria: bhai ayesha no much nai hoga... chalk.


Sam: team sbhal me Jana...




They reach there.


Sam ayesha me pas jata gain..
Agree undono ai no pakad me raha gain air Mar raha gain...



Utne me in ek admi bahar. Ata. Hain.


Admi::: oh to tum log poch hi hate idhar...


Sam usko Marne jata gain lekin tabhi do admi ake Sam arjun riya shree no bndh date gain...



Sam::: ayesha no chodo..


Admi ayesha ke. Pas jata. Gain..


And tries to touch her..


Sam:: heyy.. chilla lar.. usko hath mat lagana.



S arjun no ikuch ishata karya gain...

Achanak chotu akar undono admi no Marta gain wog log gir hate gain..
Tabhi chotu sab no chudata gain ayesha no bhi..


Thdi der take sab laddte gain.. lekin ek admit wapas ayesha no gale se pakadkar bolta gain.


San guns niche rakho warns yeah upar jayegi...



Sam:: usko chodo...


Ayesha:: sir isko mat chodna muje kuch nai hoga...



Arjun: chodo use warns..

Admi  aur gun ayesga ke pass le jata gain..

Sab guns ko niche rakh dete hain won ayesha no dkhaka Marta gain...

Ayesha dod me idhar at I gain tabhi won dekhti hain ki won admi Riya no goli Mar ne wala hota. Hain. Tabhi ayesha bich mein ati h ain air goli usko lagti gain...


Ayesha falls down... blood is running out...



Sam: ayesha..ha...


Arjun riya ko puchta hain won thik hain ??... Riya nooded yes



Tabhi picje se koi unsab ko goli mardeta hain...
All sees it's Liza


All: Liza tum yahan kaise???
Li: won sab bad me in ayesha no hopistal eike chalte gain..



Precap::: ayesha in hospital nd much more.



Kaisa laga age chahye???????????... to like nd comment.



Jaldi jaldi...


Hello mein a logo se nalaj hun.. muje like nd comments nai mile raje hain😭


chalo jaldi se like and comment karo next update jalhi mil jayei




thanks for the comments do comment more


heres the next update


recap: aisha kko goli lgti hain... blood is running from her shouler.. all are tensed. liza ne sab ko goli mardi us underworld ke admi ko khatam kar diya hain...
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ab age...


sab log SUV mein betkar aisha ko hospital le jar rahe hain..
arjun is driving car... aisha sam ke godi mein sar rakhar dard se chila rai hain... riya ko bura lagta hain ki uski wajah se aisha ko goli lagi.
Sam had tears in his eyes..
Sam: aisha tumhe kuch nai hoga. mein tumhe kuch nai hone dunga...

All : sir aisha ko kuch nai hoga pls sambhaleye apne ap ko.



At hoospital

Sam: shouting  emergency emergncy...
doc comes and takes aisha to opd on strecther..



Sam had tears in his yes.. Riya sam ke pas jati hain.
Riya: bhai sorry aur sam ke age do hath jodti hain aur kehti hain
Bhai aj meri wajah se aisha bhabhi ki yeh halat hain muje goli lag jati to acha hota aisha ne kyun muje bachaya?

sam: pagal ho gai ho kya...tumhe kuch ho jata to arjun aur mera kya hota.. badi mushkil se tum wapas ayi ho humari life mein khas kar arjun ki zindagi mein..

Tumhari  koi galti nai ahin usme... sab thik ho jayega... 
Riya: aisha bhqbhi ko kuch nai hoga woh jald hi thik ho jayegi..

saying this riya hug sam.. and sam also hug her to console her..

thdi der bad doc ate hain/..

arjun: doc kaisi hain aisha? 

doc: ab woh khaytre se bahar hain lekin goli kafi under tak lagi thi to ghav gehra hain.. bharne mein waqt lagega.. 

Sam: hum aisha ko ghar kab le ja sakte  hain?

Doc: usko hosh ane bad ap use ghar le ja sakte hain..

sam: thik hain thankyou doc..


doc goes

sam: sab log ghar jao. aj day off kal agar koi case nai aya to paper work complete ka denge..


all: ok sir..

arjun: liza tum wahan kaise pochi??

Liza: sir shree muje continously update de raha tha.. lekin thdi der bad muje signal nai mila to muje laga jarur koi gadbad hain..

to meine net per se location nikali us jungle ki aur poch gai...


Sam: good job liza..
liza: thanks sir/..

Chotu (teasing liza): liza kya bat hain shree ke sath reh rehkar tum bhi gadgets mein master hoti ja rahi ho...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Liza: chotu.. acha joke tha..

Shree looksa at chotu..


Sam: ghar jao sab.

Riya: bhai ap?

sam: mein aisha ke pas rukta hun ..

arjun: rathod mein aur riya bhi rukte  hainn

sam: nahi rawte tum aur riya gar jao..

arjun: thik hain lekin pdates dete rehna..

sam: thik hain..




kaisa laga? should i contiunue...

ha ha muje pata hain meine kaha tha ki romantic story hain... lekin thoda sabr kijiye ..milega romance..



precap: ariya and raieha moments... a


jaldi se comment karo aur like karoo jaldi jaldi...


πŸ˜›





Edited by lovvinit - 8 years ago
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Fab updates dear
Loved them
U just pm to ur readers then they will get to know tat u have updated 
Pm me when u updt it
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: jeharshu

Fab updates dear

Loved them
U just pm to ur readers then they will get to know tat u have updated 
Pm me when u updt it
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon






thanks dear i will do send pm... 
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Superb
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Thanks for pm
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Awesome update
Love it
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nice story keep updating Thnx for pm and update
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