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Pallot ne muse daanta 😭 😭 😭
tab sudhar gayi mao 😉 😉 😉
Actually mere meetings cancel hue the unexpectedly 😆 😆 😆
So I could complete reading stories in time 😊 😊 😊
So here is my review. Rating are sent over IM 😊
All Participants did excellent job. When I tried to write funny story for this contest, I learned how hard it is to write funny stuff 🥱 🥱 🥱. You guys are all so great 👏 👏 👏.
Plot 1:
Entry 1:
Couple of comedy flicks 😆. Marker dialog and Aditya sir taunts are good 👏
Guess: 😕 😭 Vis?
Plot 2:
Entry 1: Freddy training part was 🤣. The costume part was hilarious too. Esp Abhi saying "Asha, tum yahan Daya ki wife nahi bann rahi ho...logon ko vishwaas hona chahiye ki tum Daya ki wife ho" 🤣 🤣 🤣. Also it's so sweet showing that Abhi enjoyed 👏 👏 👏
Guess : VIS 😃
Entry 2: Too dominating wife doing hungama. Liked the person who empathized Daya 😆 😆 😆.. awe Daya must be pouting at end na 😉
Guess: 😕
Entry 3: 🤣🤣 forgot abt ACP sir 😛. Free suit 😲 😛. Tasha is sachi dominating wife 😆 😆 😆. I will get some tips from her 😉. Few of the humor lines are from known jokes, but still it didn't spoil my mood as I imagined Daya as bechara husband. Hmm serial killer is a nice twist 👍🏼. last part Caption was 😆 😆 😆. The best part was how you managed so well with disguised names without mentioning a word that Daya is Mr X 👏 👏 👏
Guess: 😕
Entry 4: OMG It's a laughing blaster that shirt buttons and poor outfits, fluffy😉 😉 and diabetic 😆 😆 😆. Buttons flying 🤣 🤣 🤣. Totally enjoyed and a sweet ending 😳
Guess: GD 😃
Plot 3:
Entry 1: Prank 😉. Had sparks of humor. Esp Abhijeets ghar ka halat 😆 😆 😆. Par Devika didn't try for Daya 😲 ... par wo plane me chatting wali bat toh zabardast tha. When I wanted to write yahi tha mere brain me .. awe kisi ne mera idea chura lee 😭 😭 😭.
Guess: GD 😃
Entry 2: Couple of smiles 😆 😆 😆. Acha khasa phasa diya Daya ne airport me 😃 😃 😃. Car scene is very hilarious 😃
Guess: 😕
Entry 3: 🤣 prank ulta pad gaya Daya pe.. I really enjoyed Abhi reversing things 😆 😆 😆
Guess: 😕
Entry 4: Nice attempt 😃. I felt things were rushed in beginning, but by end of story it was all YSPT 😆 😆
Guess: 😕
Entry 5: gold ka dant keliye suraksha 😲 😆 😆 😆. Bechare Abhi to Dad ke sharan me gaye 😆 😆 😆
Guess: 😕
Entry 6: hehehee sach much back fire. I love the way daya digged pit for himself 🤣
Guess: 😕
So bad at guessing na 😉😆 😆
Pallot ab sorry bol 😭 😭 😭 itna dant liya tum ne innocent mao ko 😭 😭 😭
tab sudhar gayi mao 😉 😉 😉
Actually mere meetings cancel hue the unexpectedly 😆 😆 😆
So I could complete reading stories in time 😊 😊 😊
So here is my review. Rating are sent over IM 😊
All Participants did excellent job. When I tried to write funny story for this contest, I learned how hard it is to write funny stuff 🥱 🥱 🥱. You guys are all so great 👏 👏 👏.
Plot 1:
Entry 1:
Couple of comedy flicks 😆. Marker dialog and Aditya sir taunts are good 👏
Guess: 😕 😭 Vis?
Plot 2:
Entry 1: Freddy training part was 🤣. The costume part was hilarious too. Esp Abhi saying "Asha, tum yahan Daya ki wife nahi bann rahi ho...logon ko vishwaas hona chahiye ki tum Daya ki wife ho" 🤣 🤣 🤣. Also it's so sweet showing that Abhi enjoyed 👏 👏 👏
Guess : VIS 😃
Entry 2: Too dominating wife doing hungama. Liked the person who empathized Daya 😆 😆 😆.. awe Daya must be pouting at end na 😉
Guess: 😕
Entry 3: 🤣🤣 forgot abt ACP sir 😛. Free suit 😲 😛. Tasha is sachi dominating wife 😆 😆 😆. I will get some tips from her 😉. Few of the humor lines are from known jokes, but still it didn't spoil my mood as I imagined Daya as bechara husband. Hmm serial killer is a nice twist 👍🏼. last part Caption was 😆 😆 😆. The best part was how you managed so well with disguised names without mentioning a word that Daya is Mr X 👏 👏 👏
Guess: 😕
Entry 4: OMG It's a laughing blaster that shirt buttons and poor outfits, fluffy😉 😉 and diabetic 😆 😆 😆. Buttons flying 🤣 🤣 🤣. Totally enjoyed and a sweet ending 😳
Guess: GD 😃
Plot 3:
Entry 1: Prank 😉. Had sparks of humor. Esp Abhijeets ghar ka halat 😆 😆 😆. Par Devika didn't try for Daya 😲 ... par wo plane me chatting wali bat toh zabardast tha. When I wanted to write yahi tha mere brain me .. awe kisi ne mera idea chura lee 😭 😭 😭.
Guess: GD 😃
Entry 2: Couple of smiles 😆 😆 😆. Acha khasa phasa diya Daya ne airport me 😃 😃 😃. Car scene is very hilarious 😃
Guess: 😕
Entry 3: 🤣 prank ulta pad gaya Daya pe.. I really enjoyed Abhi reversing things 😆 😆 😆
Guess: 😕
Entry 4: Nice attempt 😃. I felt things were rushed in beginning, but by end of story it was all YSPT 😆 😆
Guess: 😕
Entry 5: gold ka dant keliye suraksha 😲 😆 😆 😆. Bechare Abhi to Dad ke sharan me gaye 😆 😆 😆
Guess: 😕
Entry 6: hehehee sach much back fire. I love the way daya digged pit for himself 🤣
Guess: 😕
So bad at guessing na 😉😆 😆
Pallot ab sorry bol 😭 😭 😭 itna dant liya tum ne innocent mao ko 😭 😭 😭
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