SS-Tere mere darmiya last part B updated on pg 82 dated 05/3/2017 - Page 2

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Wow very nice and different concept...
Ram KO underworld bhejdi tune...
Nice story
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Orginal writer Arayna Kapoor


Part 1...

start from the prologue ...



Ram - vikram ur crazy !


Vik - kyu yar maine asa Kya ker diya Ki tu mujhe crazy bol Rha hai tera dost k ilava..

Ram- haa tu Kah rha hai koi ldki muj smjha payegi.. u really thik so ki meri life mai kisi b ldki k liye jgah hai...mai akela hi bht khush hu..

Vik - yes I know but her kisi k liye koi na koi bna hota hi hai ..
Ram and vikram  bat karte karte  come out from his study and come in  garden area.. vikram Tu na there talk cut in between when one person called ram..sir ?? 

Ram - yes  sushant ...

Person - sir ye kuch papers sign krwana the apse it's urgent..

Ram - hmm shure and ram apni gun nikalta hai ..and tells him sorry pen ki bjaye ye hath Aa gyi Kya kru ajkl pen se jada yhi hath mai rhti hai..give me pen...

Sushant - no problem sir ye lijiye pen..he is litterly shivering. 

 Ram - Kya hua tum kamp kyu the ho or pasina kyu aa rha hai.. tumhe..??

Sushant - sir kuch nhi bas ase hi garmi Bht ho gyi hai  na isliye...

Ram - ye lo ho gye paper sign ab tum jao ..

Sushant-  thanku  sir ..and sushant turn to go and ram shoot his leg..and he is lying on ground..

Vikram - ram tu Kya ker rha hai pagal ho gya hai ye Kya Kiya tune... Ram vikram Ki taraf dekhta hai or sushant k pass chala jata hai or usk hath se file le leta hai Jo ram ne kuch der phle sign ki.. and apni gun usk temple per rakhta hai..
Sushant- sorry sir plz chod dijiye muj agge se ye glti nhi hogi plz sir..

Ram - ye don ..kbhi bhi apne dushman ko galati krne ka dusra moka nhi...

Deta..and he shoot his head..vikram come to ram and said ram Ab to bta kya Kiya isne..Ram sushant Ki watch utarta hai or vikram k hath mai pakda de deta hai  isme csmera lga hua hai or hmari sari info hai isme he is CBI secret  agent..or is files mai b hmari work  detailes hain..Bht din se ye hmare khilaf proof collect ker rha tha.. I don't  know kya lgta hai in CBI walo ko ki ram Kya hai  Koi bacha Jo itni asani se ink hath Aa jayega... ye bhul rhe hai yha underworld Don hai Koi gali ka gunda nhi..jo in jese bacho k hath jaye..

Vikram - ram tujhe kase pta Chal jata hai yar ye sb.. tere ankhe hai ya scaner.. hme to kbhi pta nhi chlta...

Ram - kuki Tu ram kapoor nhi hai.. ase hi underworld per raj nhi krta mai..

Vikram - yes mai to bhul hi gya underworld king se bat ker rha hu mai..ab is sushant Ka Kya Krna hai..

Ram - Krna kya hai kisi ase jgah fekwao ki iski body kisi ko mile na mile to koi phchane na..

Vikram - yes boss ..!!!
 
Rams body guards takes the body from there...


Ram - hahaha vikram kitni bar Kha hai don't call me boss..per Tu baj nhi ata..

Vikram - Kya kru yar there talk disturb by a phn ring of vik... he attend the call and after 10 min he cut the call and come to ram and said ram yar kl collage jana hai yad hai na tujhe abhi principal ka call Aya tha...

Ram - ha to tu chala Ja tu janta hai na mujhe ye faltu kam psand nhi.. 

Vikram - yar vha ka trusty tu hai k mai.. Kabhi to khud Kiya ker kuch vase b mujhe kl conference attend krni hai office mai tycoon saheb..remember na..or tera collage jana Bht jaruri hai kuki puri management aa rhi hai tera Jana b jaruri hai..

Ram - haan mere bap Chla jauga bas khush... Ab bakash de mujhe or Chal  ab ek ek drink ho jaye..vase vikram hmane b collage mai bht masti ki hai Na kya din the yar vo..Dono bate krte krte ander chle jate hai..

Vik-Ram sun na tu ek baar ladki ke baare mein soch na..

Ram-phir vahi baat kyu tension de raha hai yaar...

Vikram - haa yar vo to hai tb hme kisi bat ki tention  nhi Thi. .ldkiya tb bhi tujh per Marti thi or abhi bhi sbse jada tujh per hi Marti hai..but tune kbhi kisi ko ghas tak  nhi Dali.. kyu krta tha tu asa Julem un bachariyo per..

Ram  - viki Tu achi trah janta hai Maine kyu kbhi kisi ko apne pass nhi ane diya muj apna maksad pura krna tha or mai usk bitch kisi ko ane nhi de skta or pyar.!!! Pyar insan ko bekar ker deta hai..pyar hone k bad fir vo insan khi Ka nhi rhta use apne pyar k ilava kuch najar nhi ata.. or pyar mere health k liye acha nhi hai u know na...


Vikram - haan but pyar to tujhe bhi hoga ekdin jarur pta nhi kon itni himmat wali ldki hogi jise is dangerous Don se pyar hoga..

Ram - hahaha... Vase mai to dangerous  Don hu isliye muj nhi mili  but tu to nhi hai na to tujhe kyu nhi mili..huh..

Vikram smile...!!! 

Ram - one minut let me  guess.. kmine salle.. btaya b nhi mujhe...tujhe koi mil gyi hai ryt...

Vikram - arre kya yar asa nhi hai yar mili hoti to sath hi hoti koi miss india thodi dhunduga jo dikhayi nhi Degi..

Ram - to fir ab ye mt bolna Ki Maine galat guess kiya .. kuch to hai Jo Tu chupa rha hai..

Vik - haa haa btata hu kase bhul skta hu ki Don k Samne Betha hu or Don kbhi wrong nhi hota...actually tujhe yad hai last month hme ek conference per jana tha singapur or last min tera jana cancel ho gya or muj Jana pda akele..

Ram- haan haan I remember agge bol...

Vik - haa or vha Maine ek ldki ko dekha flower shop per mai main vha bukke lene gya tha but us ldki ko dekh ker muj sbkuch bhul gya vikram continusly smiling when he is talk about that girl ...she is so beautiful yar mujhe uska  chehra bhulta hi nhi...I don't know ab Vo mujhe kbhi Milegi bhi k nhi..

Ram - ohoo to mere yar ko ishq ho gya hai ab tu kisi kam Ka nhi rha mere yar..hahaha. .

Vikram - jb tujhe pyar hoga Na fir pta chlega  tujhe Ki Kya hal hota hai  
Ram - tu phle hi adha pagal tha ab pura  ho gya...bta naam kya uska 

Vik- kiska ???

Ram - tere biwi ka...# idiot afcos us ldki ka..

Vik - pta nhi 

Ram - kya? ? Pta nhi
Rhti kha hai..

Vik- pta nhi..

Ram -  ye b nhi pta..??
      Krti Kya hai ye to pta hoga..

Vik - nhi ye b nhi pta..

Ram - in irritating tone to pta kya hai tujhe naam nhi pta address nhi pta krti kya hai vo b nhi pta to..ye kase pta chla Ki tujhe pyar ho gya..Dambo..!!

Vik - to Tu Don hai pta lga Na Ki kon hai vo Kha milegi apne dost k liye itna to krega hi na in pleading tone..

Ram - salle..! Don hu  dakiya (postman ) nhi yhi kam hai reh gya Kya 
 Mujhe.. Ram looking at vikram dull face and say  him vikram vo ldki chahe duniya k kisi bhi kone mai ho mai use dhund lunga Tu fiker mat ker or khush reh smjha..tu janta hai Na tujhe udas nhi dekh skta mai..

Vikram - vik smile and hug ram and tell him I know ram or mere liye tere se badker is duniya mai koi b nhi I love u yar...
 
Ram - bas bas jada senty mt ho or ab kiss mt krna mujhe hehehe. ...Mai tere dream girl nhi hu..

Vik - salle... # gale b nhi laguga.. they both laugh and hug each other again and smile. .they both saprated when one femail voice Come from behind...both look at the voice direction..and say in unison daijaan..!!

Daijaan - haan ager tum Dono Ka ho gya hai to is budiya Ki taraf bhi dhyan do..Ram and vikram come to daijaan  and bends down or touch her feet and taking blessing.. kya bate Chal rhi thi dono dosto mai..

Vik- kuch b nhi daijaan bas ase hi daijaan darshan ache se ho gye na..koi problem to nhi hue na..

Daijaan -  nhi nhi viki koi problem nhi hue babu ne arrangement hi bht ache se kiye the taki uski daijaan Ko Koi taklif Na ho...and she look at ram

Ram - daijaan kitni bar kha hai apse muj babu mt kha kro I m big boy now so call me ram..

Diajaan - tum chahe kitne bhi bde ho jao kitne b bde business man ban jao mere to vhi chote se babu hi rhoge. ..

 vikram is laughing at rams irritation..
   
Ram - tujhe bdi hsi Aa  rhi hai abhi btata hu tujhe..isse phle ram vikram ko kuch khta his phn is ringing or ram phn attend krne chla jata hai kuki that call related to his underworld work or daijaan Ko isk bare mai kuch nhi pta..

Daijaan to vikram - viki beta Tu hi ram ko smjha kuch Vo kyu nhi sochta apne bare mai kuch apni jindgi k bare mai ase akele jindgi nhi kati jaa skti tera dost hai to tu kyu nhi smjhata usey...dekh vikram beta mai kb tak rahugi usk sath jada se jada 2-3 Sal or usk bad Vo bilkul akela ho jayega mai bas apni ankhon k Samne use settle hota dekhna chahti hu uski biwi is ghar mai dekhna chahti jo use bht pyar kre or use sambhal Le. ..tu krega Na mere liye usse bat...

Vikram - jee daijaan mai smajh rha hu apki chinta mai bat krta hu usse per Vo nhi smjhta per firse ek bar try kruga Apk liye..ap fiker mt kro mai hu na ...ap thak gye honge rest kro abhi Ap..

Daijaan - haan beta ja rhi hu per tu Vo bat bhulna mat or haan apne liye b achi c ldki dhund le Tu shadi krle ho skta hai tujhe hi dekh ker use thodi akal aa jaye..and smile

Vik - jee dadi jesa Ap Kho bas Koi achi ldki mile to..and they both r laughing daijaan go to her room for rest ...
Vikram in heart kase smjhayu Apko daijaan ki apka babu ab kis kam mai pad chuka hai uski jindgi mai pyar jase chij ki koi jgah nhi kash koi to ho jo ise pyar Karna sikha de or Vo in sb kamo ko chod ske...

Ram door per khda hoker sbkuch dekh rha hota hai and he comes to vikram and tell him Tu shadi krle jaldi daijaan ko is ghar mai ek company Ki Jarurt hai. 

Vik- unhe is ghar mai is   ghar Ki bahu ki Jarurt hai jo tere biwi hogi so tujhe bhi sochna chahiye daijaan k liye to Tu ker hi skta hai itna..

Ram - vik tujhe sbkuch pta hai daijaan ko nhi mai kisi Ki life barbad nhi ker skta apne sath sath or mai apne kam k sath bht khush hu ... mujhe acha lgta hai to Tu kyu mere piche pda hai haan tere wali ko jaldi hi dhund lenge ...and smile 

Vik - or tere wali bhi tujhe jaldi hi Milegi ..Ram and vik both smiling..and go to office..





Ram and priya meeting in next update pkka..


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Posted: 8 years ago
Yar up to I can understand its very nice I like this part so much I can't give like because its showing as error but please try to update in English yar please please but lovely written ms jerry
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Nice update. Thanks for pm.
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.vry nice part...undrwrld don ram kapoor...intrstng stry...wtng fr ram priya mtng...
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nice
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wow...super update.. :-D ram underworld don! but he is so. genuine... well really interesting concept... just a piece of advice...just make his character a little darker if possible..or else it depends on.. u.. well waiting for the next..raya meet!!! <3 haae..cant wait to see how she turns him in a human being
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V nice update...
Raya r going to meet in college??
Plz continue soon...
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