Jodha Akbar

} The Bet {

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Posted: 8 years ago
} The Bet {



He entered inside the party... Loud music, drinks, shimmering lights gave a perfect environment for youngsters...




He roamed his eyes, but alas!! She is not there yet... He wants to apologize her for his mistakes... More precisely sin... Which he has done by broking the most beautiful heart...




This party is a farewell party of St. Xaviers final semester batch... After this the life of luxury will be over and struggle will hold their hands... So to enjoy the last moments of college, the farewell party is organized...
Jalal entered and directly goes towards his group...




"Hey Guys..." he greeted everyone... All replied his greetings...
After a little chit chat... Jalal very cleverly took out the most sensitive topic...
"Anybody saw her??" he asked casually sipping his drink...




"Oye love ho gya us se...(Hey bro have you fall for her??)" and all laughed at this except Abdul... He knows Jalal feels for her!!




Jalal was in a dilemma... Yes!! He had fallen for her, that to terribly...
This all started with a bet... She is a simple confident yet innocent girl... Never ever anyone had heard about her having affairs or being involved in relationship... She is just a pure hearted angel...




His friends made a bet with him... Wether the charms of Jalaluddin Mohammed can woo this girl...
Jalal don't want to destroy the innocence of her... But when his friends pointed at his ego... No one can remain unaffected... When that big fat ego is of 'THE' Jalal, then remaining aloof is next to impossible...




From that day... Jalal's whole world roams around Jodha... His morning starts with her and night ended talking about her to his best buddy... He doesn't even know, all the while trying to woo her, he himself got bowled by her... Her smile, her selfless nature, her innocence, her eyes... Everything just everything of her is soo different...




For him, his friends were everything, family doesn't mattered him much coz they never understood him...
But after he met her... His perspectives of watching life changed... The bitterness that came into relations has started to fade, coz sweetness has took its place...




The son who never talked with his father unnecessarily... Now touches his feet everyday... The reason is She!!
The Son who always just nods or stops his talks in mono syllables... Started to talk freely and crazily with his mother... The reason is She!!




When at last she confessed her love, he harshly rejected her coz his so called friends were standing behind and watching the Angel shattering into pieces...
His reverie got broke due to, the announcement...




"Hey Guys, our college's rock star... Jo is going to sing a song..." the host, actually a friend of jodha, announced happily... All hooted...
His lips got curved upwards... Jodha is the favorite of their batch... After all she talks to everyone... If anyone doesn't know the person's name he/she is sitting with but Jodha being the topper of class and rock star, yeah!! Rock star!! known by everyone... Madam has a passion for singing that's what she do in canteen everyday... Sitting in the middle of table with that blue guitar of hers and sings the song on her friends insistence...




Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Dil mera maange bas ye duaa
Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha



His eyes got moist hearing the song she dedicated him before the day she proposed him...
He finally gaining some courage looks at her... Reddish moist kholed orbs and perfectly blended with mascara looking alluring as always... He can't neglect the pain that eyes held, the reason is HE!!




Humdard hai, humdum bhi hai
Tu saath hai toh zindagi
Tu jo kabhi door rahe
Ye humse ho jaaye ajnabi
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Kaise kare hum usko bayaan
Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhulna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa




After the rejection... The smiling Jodha has lost somewhere... The chirpy bubbly girl had left... Leaving a fake smiling Jodha behind... One single smile which hides the thousands of pain behind it... She left singing after that, after a lot of insistence, her friends to gave up on her...



But today she wants to sing her last song and want to convey him that... Whatever he have for her, being a bet for him... But what he has made her feel in this time, is the most beautiful moments of her life...




Jaagi bhi hai royi bhi hai
Aankhein ye raaton mein mere
Kyun har ghadi milke tujhe
Lagti rahe bas teri kami
Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho
Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho
Kyun tumko paake tumse juda
Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa




Jodha closed her eyes and reminisce the sleepless nights she has spent after his rejection... Wasting her pearls on the emotion which was alien to her before she met him... She is addicted to him... But she can't force him or bind him with her...



The only thing she prays now is his well being... She want nothing but his happiness...
As soon the song ended, crowd burst into cheers... Clappings and praising are echoing in the party hall...
Jodha gave a small smile and left the stage... Heading outside... With muttering thank you to the people who are showering her with praises...




Finally she came out, standing in the secluded corner of garden... Wiping the smudged khol that prevented her pearls to come out in the party...



A hand with a handkerchief came from behind... She knows its owner... So turned out to go... But felt a possessive yet gentle grip on her wrist she stopped...



She turned around and found him on his knees...
"Sorry Jo!!" He whispered...



Jodha too came down at her knees and hugged him tight... Crying profusely in his chest, he pressed her more closer...
"You idiot!! When you love me!! Why this drama..." She said while slapping him...
Jalal looks shocked and shot an angry glare to her... Jodha again slapped him...
This is a tight one...




He held back her hands and hissed angrily...
"Who said this?"




She wriggle to come out but he didn't left her hands...
"Leave me... Its painful..." She said and he left her hand...



She pressed the gallery option and showed him a picture... Its the picture of a paper... In which Jalal has wrote his feelings and hide that into his book... Which she took with her by mistake... And after getting this only she has proposed him hopping for a yes... Not for that harsh rejection...



Jalal just spread his arms... Jodha got his indication and jumped over him...



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Tda !! Surprise !!
This one is for you deep di!!
I know m late but what to do...!!
M really sorry!!

@ shagu sorry yrr... I wrote it just now...

Sorry if it's not worth reading😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow!!   πŸ‘
Its wonderful   πŸ˜³
I totally loved it! ❀️
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it is fab...so touching...loved the slaps he got...it is outstanding...😊
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Yaar ekdam dhasu aur jhakas h
Ekdam mast
Kya kahu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome partner .. I love it yar ... πŸ˜› ... I love this song ... Tujhe to bas har kahi jodha ko rulana hota h ... πŸ˜• .. Happy bday deepa di
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Beautiful and emotional OS Neetu 
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Wow Neetu Beautiful OS dear... Simply superbπŸ‘
Deepa once again Happy Birthday dear :)
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awesome os
love it
this song is my favorite
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superb os dear... πŸ˜‰ it was really touchy one... πŸ‘ beautifully written... 😳
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Sweet and cute OS Neetu 😊
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