*NIBIR FF-A STORY BEHIND THE DARK HOUSE* part 1-page 6 - Page 4

Wow story concept seems interesting 

Originally posted by: Chi_prachi

Awsome story yar... M to visualize bhi krne lagi...👏👏

Nibir hand in hand- mere hath mein tera haath ho... Saari jannatein mere sath ho...😉

Nyws continue soon... Uss haveli m kya hota use janne k liye m bekarar hu...

awww...thank you prachi 😊

Originally posted by: alisha17

Wow story concept seems interesting

Can't wait for next part

Thnku for the pm

thank you alisha...I vl update it soon

Awesome start

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Awesome start

loved the way you started the story with a scary intro scaring me already

then came our hero heroine

going on a trip but to the haunted place

very excited

Cont soon

ritika

thank you ritika 🤗

Vaissy tu horror story likh rhi😊 wow...yr😊


it feels so scary😉 umargad aisa kya hua tha wha jo 75 yrs baad bhi log itna darte h😔👏

to nibir n dosa trip me umargad ja re😉 mujhe aisa kyu lag ra ki nibir ka dobara janam hua h 50 saal baad...🤣

loved nibir convo😉

nisha to kabire ki insult pe insult kiye ja ri🤣

nibir engaged h n dosa were dating❤️

waiting for der trip

update soon😊

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Vaissy tu horror story likh rhi😊 wow...yr😊


it feels so scary😉 umargad aisa kya hua tha wha jo 75 yrs baad bhi log itna darte h😔👏

to nibir n dosa trip me umargad ja re😉 mujhe aisa kyu lag ra ki nibir ka dobara janam hua h 50 saal baad...🤣

loved nibir convo😉

nisha to kabire ki insult pe insult kiye ja ri🤣

nibir engaged h n dosa were dating❤️

waiting for der trip

update soon😊

thank you niju 🤗
well u guessed it right...nibir ka punar jaman h bt 50 saal baad nhi

continue soon vaishuu

Originally posted by: ammu4u

continue soon vaishuu

its very intrstng

I vl continue soon ammu massi 😊

tysm for writing on my concept
I know u r going to take it beautifully
I won't be able to comment everytime but I will read every part of it