Sandhir and Vidharth FF:Na tum jaano na HUM Chapter 6 updated !!!!!! - Page 3

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by 7APK


Super - Duper Awesome
Amazing Update
Post Next Super Soon
Thanks for the PM


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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by bolston


update it early so that after catching the kine many more will stick to your ff



okkk i'll do that๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 8 years ago
Part 2 is up!!!
Enjoy...๐Ÿ˜Š



Part 2: Proffesional life...

Sanyukta entered the office in a rush as she thought that she was hell late.
She ignored every person on her way and directly dashed into Vardhan's cabin.

She saw that noone's there in the cabin so she breathed a sigh of relief...

But next instant she found someone twisting her ear very hardly...

S:Owww Dada I'm really sorry...(thinking it to be Vardhan)
V:You are late again???
S:I'm sorry Dada aapko toh pata hai na Maasi har baar mujhe uthana bhul jaati hain.Aaj bhi bhul gayi...
V:Very funny Sanyukta...This was the last time I had given you the chance.But you are late again...

Before Sanyukta utter her next pleading words she heard someone wriggling behind her with his hands on her ear.The grip on her ear loosened and she heard the voice:AAA
By the time the grip on her ear was left she turned behind only to find a wriggling Parth and a smirking Vardhan.
Sanyukta was shocked to the core as the view in front of her was little confusing.

V:Parth tumhari itni himmat ki tum mujhe immitate karo??? How dare you???

Yes Parth was the one who was immitating Vardhan and was twisting Sanyukta's ear!!!!
Sanyukta by mistake considered Parth as Vardhan and was pleading to him.
But they both didn't knew that Vardhan was watching the whole incidence from the start as he had seen Sarth entering his cabin.

P:Oww Dada plzzz mera kaan chodiye naaa...
V:Pehle batao mujhe imitate kyun kar rahe the???
P:Are aap chodoge to batunga na...

Vardhan released his ear and folded his hands in front of his chest demanding for an explaination.
The poor confused soul  Sanyukta was still not getting anything and was standing there dumbfounded.

Parth shrugged his shoulders and said:Main kya karta Dada?? Sanyukta jab mujhe raste mein mili to mein use yeh file dene wala tha.
But madam Bhaag milkha bhaag movie se inspire hoke bullet train bani hui thi ki mujhe ignore kar diya.
Main isse bulata raha lekin iss ladki ne meri ek nahi suni.

Sanyukta now understood the whole scenario and jumped on Parth and said:Kaminey kahinke!!!!
Tune to mujhe dara hi diya tha...Koi aisa karta hai kya???

Parth was desperately trying to free himself from Sanyukta's clutches and finally Sanyukta left him.

P:God kitni bhari hai tu??? Itna gym jaati hai thoda weight bhi kam karle...(with a frown)
S:Hahaha very funny mujhe nahi karna(making a face)
Wasie tu yahaan kya kar raha hai???
Policewalon ne nikal diya kya???(chuckling in between)
P:Teri to...

V:Okkk chup ho jao tum dono.
Sanyukta maine hi ise yahaan bulaya hai.Ye files dekho.
This is important.

Sarth sensed the sincerity in Vardhan's voice and quickly maintained there composure and sat on the adjacent chairs.

Vardhan went towards his laptop and brought it in front of Sarth.

V:Yeh dekho.These are the key points in the file.But main part is here in this presentation.

One look at the presentation and Sarth had there eyes coming out of there sockets.
What was there in the presentation????
You'll come to know...

S:Sir yeh to...
P:Exactly Sir...

V:I know guys tum log kya soch rahe ho.But yehi sach hai...
Isilye tum logon ko yahan bulaya hai...
Tum logon ke paas koi suggestions hai to batao...

Sarth started thinking about the solution to the problem in front of them.
The current case that they were solving was a bit personal for 2 persons.
One of them was obviously Sanyukta...
Who was the other person????

After thinking for a while Sanyukta came up with an idea and said:Sir I've an Idea...

Vardhan and Parth looked expecting for a way to tackle the case.

S:Sir kyun na hum ek criminal ki tarah soche???
Matlab yeh bhi toh Criminals hain.Inko pakadne ke liye humein bhi unki tarah sochna chahiye.

P:Hmmm I agree.. She has a point Sir...
V:Even I agree with you.But kaise???

P:Amm sir kyun na hum kisi aise Criminal ko approach karein jo ki pehle Criminal tha par ab sudhar gaya hai aur humari madat bhi kar sakta ho?? 

S:Haan yeh sahi rahega.Tum sahi keh rahe ho par aise koi humein help karne ke liye taiyaar hoga???

P:Kyun nahi??? Hum kisi aise ko approach karenge jo humari pehchaan ka hoga...

Vardhan was thinking something as how to bring that someone here and BINGO he got the solution thanks to Parth.

V:Mujhe pata hai aise koi jo humari help ke liye taiyaar ho jayega...

Sarth:Really???

Vardhan just nodded and said:Haan par uske liye tum logon Pune jana padega.

Sarth:Pune??

V:Haan wo koi Pune ke Yerwada Jail mein hai abhi.Uski saza khatam hone wali hai.Iss case ke liye usse acha koi ho hi nahi sakta.

S:Par Sir woh ek Criminal hi hai.Jail se bahar aate hi hamari help karne ke liye taiyaar hoga???

V:Hmm wohi to...Koi baat nahi pehle ye batao kaun jayega usse lene??

S:Sir mein jaungi.Mein bhi to dekhun jo iss case mein meri help karne layak hai bhi ya nahi.

Vardhan smiled and thought in mind:I knew it Sanyukta ki tum pehle usse test karna chahogi.But don't worry.Jisse tum milne jaa rahi ho woh iss case mein involve hone ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai.Tumse jyaada uske ghaav purane hai.Aur kehte hai na ghaav jitna purana ho utna hi gehra aur khatarnak hota hai.Tum dono milke iss case ko aur apni personal hatred ko asani se khatam kar sakte ho.

V:Thik hai.
Aur haan wahan jaate hi hamare suspect ke naam usse jarur bata dena.
Jab tak tum Pune pahunchogi Maine wahan ke Jailor ko bata diya hoga ki tumhe kisse milana hai to tumhe jyaada takleef bhi nahi hogi.
Ok???

Sanyukta smiled and nodded.

S:Sir mein aaj hi chali jati hun.Mujhe yeh case jald se jald solve karna hai.Abhi to iss case ki shuruat huyi hai.Main jab tak iss case ko solve nahi kar leti chain se nahi bethungi.

Vardhan went and hugged her just like a father hugs his daughter.He was just about his daughter who had been through so much.
He was also thinking about the other person.He had to suffer a lot more than Sanyukta.He was just praying to God to give these both persons enough strenght to fight against the evil people.
V:Take Care Beta..(with slight moisture in his eyes)
S:I will Dada(she also had little tears in her eyes)

V:How will you go??
S:By Car...

Parth and Vardhan got shocked and started praying for other's safety...

Precap:Pune... and revelation of the other person...
Some masti on the way...


How's it???
Plz like and review...

Posted: 8 years ago
sooo awsm update..
read both the chappy in one go..
loved Parth, Sanyu and Vardhan's masti...
update next part soonish...
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
masti...
and nw revealation๐Ÿ˜•
update next soon dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 8 years ago
Super interesting
Update soonish๐Ÿค—
Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update

Parth is naughty but he is caught by Vardhan, the bond between them is good.
they are going to grab a criminal an evil person
Sanyu's plan is perfect, that person in jail must be Randhir
now these two will teach a lesson to that criminal


Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Loved it

I so loved the sarth and vd bond
Full on masti

New case
Bt what is the mystery

The other person will be rr

Excited for update
Update soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Read both parts !! D story seems so unique but catchy !
Loving it ! 
Wen i read Sanyukta -CID officer ...nd randhir - criminal ..my reaction was ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿคฃ

Very well written ๐Ÿ‘
Update soony๐Ÿค—
Posted: 8 years ago
Hellooo
Kya yaar mein wait kar kar ke thak gayi ki koi aayega aur acha review dega...
But nahi mila๐Ÿ˜ญ


Heheheee juss kidding guys...๐Ÿ˜†
Thanx for your support...๐Ÿ‘
howardscarlet,thundercute,lolita1997,newmoon18,sakura_otaku,7APK,bolston,Reshma,ritikaagrawal,Twinkle_Isha,twni and last but not the least shivika838...
Thank you loads guysss๐Ÿ˜ƒ



I know yeh meri friend ki storyline thi...
But kya karun aik baar aise hi hum discuss kar rahe the and I suggested some developments...
So she agreed quickly and asked me to continue on her behalf...
Aur mera kya hai...Main toh taiyaar hun Sandhir the lovers pe likhne ke liye...
So now end of my bakwasss
Presenting to you...
with a chotu teaser...๐Ÿ˜‰
Hope you like it...๐Ÿ˜‰




Teaser...

Sanyukta finally reached Pune...



The other person and Sanyukta clash...๐Ÿ˜ณ



S:Tum??? 
P:Haan mein 
S:Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho???
P:Mein??? Woh mein na achar daal raha hun...
Khaogi???๐Ÿคฃ



S:Dekho tum niche utro...
P:Nahi utrunga... Kya kar logi????
Yeh apni CID giri kahin aur dikhana...
Tum CID wale kuch kaam ke nahi hote ho...Socha tum logon ki kuch help hi kar dun...
Upar se ise dekho...๐Ÿ˜ญ
Huh...


S:Dekho tum niche utro...
Warna mein tumhe shoot kar dungi...(pointing her gun)



The other person froze on the spot...๐Ÿ˜ฒ


How was it???
Me nervous...
Looking here and there...
Kisi ke paas ande aur tamatar to nahi hai na???๐Ÿ˜†
Agar haan to mein apni jaan bachake bhaag jaun???
Hehehee
Hope meine the other person ke baare mein kaafi clue de diya??๐Ÿ˜‰
Like and reviews plzzz
Love you all...
Edited by natureloverr - 8 years ago

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