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guyz....i think u dont like my ff...there r hardly any replies Cry plzzz reply bcuz ur replies are the sole encouragement i get....anywayz herez the nxt part and im xpecting lo0ads of comments...even if there negative...

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Part 6


Recap:Angad & Kripa have a small fight so Angad changes his seat.Josh cumz and sits next to Kripa and starts bothering her.



Edited by devilsoul - 04 November 2006 at 3:16am

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Part 6


Recap:Angad & Kripa have a small fight so Angad changes his seat.Josh cumz and sits next to Kripa and starts bothering her.

Angad can't take this anymore so he gets up from his seat and heads towards them.

Angad places a hand on Josh's shoulder…

A:hey buddy…do u mind holding my hand?...I don't mind.

J:who da heck r u?

A:That's for me to know…and u to find out and anywayz I don't think thts any of ur business.

J:I'll make it my business if u don't leave us alone.Wht da hell do u want?

A:I…(pointing at Kripa) want HER!

Kripa starts blushing…she feels really happy frm inside bcuz she knows tht Angad cares 4 her a lot.

J:well…tough luck!

A:(taking hold of a chain around his neck with a skull in it)soo tum yahaan se utho ge ya mein tumhein is duniya se utha doon?

J:(putting his hands up in surrender) ok ok chillax dude….

He gets up from his seat and leaves with a frown on his face and Angad whispers in his ear

A: u shud wish ke hum kabhi dobara na milen kyunke agar aisa hua…to tum kissi aur se kabhi milne ke kaabil nahin raho ge.

J:(with a smirk on his face)We'll c!

Angad looks at Kripa while Kripa has tears in her eyes and is feeling very guilty.Angad is abt to leave wen she takes hold of Angad's arm

K: Angad…..mujhe chor ke mat jao.

A:(turning his head towards her) kyun?y shudn't i?

K:(a tear rolling down her cheek) plz…mere saath beth jao.

A:nahin…I think ur brave enuff to take care of urself.

And he leaves and sits back on his other seat.Kripa is really touched by what Angad did for her & she feels attracted towards Angad but she ignores it.After awhile wen Kripa thinks she can't take this anymore,she heads towards Angad and sits down on the seat nxt to him.

A:ab tum yahan par bhi a gayee?

K:(making a face) mujhe tumse koi lena dena nahin….main to bus aise he bore ho rahi thi socha tumse do chaar baatien kar loon.

A:jhoot bolna to koi tumse seekhe.

K:(after a pause) acha baba ab maaf kar do.

A:nahin..

K:(holding her ears)plssssss

A:(smiling)acha theek hai theek hai magar next time I wont 4give u.

K:(all happy) ok I promise aisa phir nahin hoga…I wont fight with u.

A:thts better.

The rest of the flight goes smoothly without any fights.In abt 7 hrs…they finally reach U.S.A.


I know dis part was v short...i was really disapointed i didnt get any replies or comments frm u guyz...i hope u understand...khair nxt part will b better..

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nice part i really like your ff Tongue cont soon

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Posted: 04 November 2006 at 7:42am | IP Logged
amazing parts
cont soon
Josh and a Villian Cry

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nice part Big smile

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great part

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awesome

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