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Part 4

Recap:They eat at a Chinese restaurant…Angad becomes worried because he can't find Kripa…he screams at her wen he finds her…He buys a small crystal statue of Liberty for her but duzn't tell her yet as she is upset with him.

A:(thinking) yeh Kripa kahan hai?nazzar nahin arahi.I hope she makes it in time.

Aboard the Aircraft

Angad was walking down the aisle looking for his seat number.Alas he found it.

A:wow,here is my seat!

It was the window seat and a lady was already seated beside his seat and had her face buried in a magazine.

A:(as he passed in front of her)xcuse me…

The lady:(looking up)yes?

A:Kripa tum?

K:Angad tum?

A:(as he sat next to her) WOW! Kismat ko bhi humara saath manzoor hai.

K:(making a face) issi baat ka to afsos hai.

A:huh?did u say something?

K:who….me? nopes.

15 minutes had passed and neither of them had said a word 2 eachother.Angad felt very guilty & puzzled over his own behaviour where Kripa felt that Angad cared abt her a lot & was happy abt it but thought that he had no rite to scold her in front of every1.

A:(thinking) yaar kiya karoon?is ka mood to bauhat kharab lag raha hai.

K: :(thinking)ajeeb hai,eik to ghalati karta hai aur fir maafi bhi nahin maang raha…ufff these BOYZ!!

A: :(thinking)agar ab baat nahin ki to phir kabhi nahin ho gi.

After awhile of thinking,Angad takes out the crystal model of the statue and hides it in his left hand.

A:Kripa…

K:KIYA HAI??

A:naraaz to mat ho plz.

K:(cracking a small smile)bolo,kiya baat hai?

A:who..mein..meine..woh

K:(kinda annoyed)ab bolo bhi!

A:(thinking)yaar kaise kahoon….baat kaise shuru karoon?

K:ANGAD!!

A:HAAN!...ummm…yeh lo…(& he hands her the statue bcuz he duzn't no wht 2 say.)

K:(awfully surprised) WOW!angad,yeh tum mere liye laye ho?

A:(sarcastically) nahin mein us sexy air hostess ke liye laya hoon!

K:(lightly punching him on the shoulder)Angaddd…tum bhi na..

A:(in a naughty way)mein bhi na kiya?

K:tum bauhat sweet ho.

A:thanx

A:& I also want 2 say that I am very sorry for my behaviour.

K:jao!meine tumhein maaf kiya…..waise Angad,kissi ko manana to koi tumse seekhe!

A:(joining his hands)Shukar hai bhagwan ka ke tumne mujhe maaf kar diya warna mein to..

K:warna tum kiya?

Now they both look into each other's eyes.They get lost into eachother and start to come closer to eachother.Angad looks passionately at Kripa and Kripa closes her eyes while coming closer and closer when suddenly….

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I know this part iz awfully short guyz and im very sorry 4 it...i'll try to make the nxt 1 a bit longer and more interesting...

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Posted: 02 November 2006 at 9:50am | IP Logged
awesome.humko deewana kar gaye aap

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Posted: 02 November 2006 at 10:49am | IP Logged
sweet part
cont soon
i bet the air hostess interupts them LOL

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nahin the airhostess shud not interpt them Big smile

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Originally posted by hot_girl_2525

sweet part
cont soon
i bet the air hostess interupts them LOL

 

U were rite..the airhostess interupts them...iz my story becummin predictable? ConfusedCry.....here's the nxt part...

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Part 5


Recap:Angad gives Kripa her gift and she forgives him.

They get lost into eachother and start to come closer to eachother.Angad looks passionately at Kripa and Kripa closes her eyes while coming closer and closer when suddenly………..
An air hostess approaches them.
(air hostess=AH)

AH: Excuse me…may I bring u anything?

Both Angad & Kripa part away from eachother and feel very embarrassed.

A:ummm no not rite now.

AH: & ma'am may I bring u anything.

K:(all red & shy) n-no,maybe later.

AH:ok,I hope u enjoy the flight.

A:thanku

Now Angad & Kripa feel very embarrassed at their behaviour.Angad cudn't help but smile whereas Kripa's face had turned a rosy pink color.
Angad came closer to Kripa and whispered…

A:(in her ear)kissi ne kabhi tumse kaha hai ke jab tum sharmati ho to tum…

K:(softly)mein kiya…

A:tum…tum…TUM MONKEY LAGTI HO!!!

And he starts to laugh whereas Kripa feels offended & pinches him really hard on the arm.

A:ouch!! Yaar Kripa mein to mazzak kar raha tha.

K:aisa mazak bhi koi karta hai kiya?

A:ok baba..(he holds his ears) I'm sorry(and makes a really cute face)

K: acha acha…bus theek hai.

A:bus?

K(confused)

A: "bus" theek hai?I thought we were in an aeroplane! thanx for telling me yaar.

K:(whining)STOP IT NAAA!!!

A:OK OK…..

After some time,Angad puts his hand on the arm rest which is between the two.

K:(pushing his elbow aside & placing hers)Angad,yeh mera arm rest hai.

A:Kripa….yeh MERA arm rest hai (and pushes her arm aside)

K:(irritated) Angad….u have to learn to share

A:LOOK WHOSE TALKING!

K:dekho agar tum yahi karte rahe na to mein apni seat change kar loongi!

A:acha….dhamki???

Kripa presses a button to call the air hostess.in anger.The Air hostess arrives.

AH: yes,may I help u?

K:yes….I wud like to know if there is any other empty seat.

AH:(glancing at Angad) y?is there any problem?

A:no…not at all actually she can stay here…I wud like to change my seat.

K:(under her breath)acha hai!

AH:ok I'll c wht I can do

And then she leaves. Kripa sits with her arms folded across her chest.Then the air hostess comes back.

AH:yes,there is one man who is willing to change his seat with you.

A:oh..THANK GOD! (he gives Kripa a mean look)

AH:plz cum with me.

A:yes..(& he leaves)

The air hostess takes Angad to a seat which has quite a clear view of Kripa.The seat next to him is also empty.Angad just sighs & sits down.

Villain ki Entry…
On the other hand, a guy approaches Kripa and sits down on the window seat next to her.
(Guy=G)

G: hi

K:hi

G:y ur a beautiful lady.

K:(feeling awkward)t-thanx.

G:By the way my name is Josh.

K:ahaan…my name is Kripa (and then she tries to avoid eye contact with him becuz he just seems to stare at her)

Angad is watching all this & seems a bit concerned because he can see that Kripa is quite infuriated but he thinks tht she deserved it so he duzn't really bother.

Josh:(touching her arm)sooo,y don't u tell me something more abt urself?(he trails his
index finger up & down her arm)

K:(folding her arms) plz leave me alone.

J:but y?am I not gud enuff for u?

K: listen mister! Leave me alone or I'll call the air hostess.

J:(with hands up in the air)oooooh I'm scared!

Then Josh grabs her hand…

J: now let's c wht u can do…

K:(trying to release her hand from his grip)CHORO MUJHE!!

Angad can't take this anymore so he gets up from his seat and heads towards them.


Hope u guyz liked this part...i wud really like it if u guyz told me wht u didnt like abt the parts tht i write...4 future reference...laterzz

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Posted: 03 November 2006 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
great part
can't wait to see what angad does

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