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Humko Deewana Kar Gay(prt 78 pg 127)AK ff (Page 4)

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Posted: 03 November 2006 at 1:01am | IP Logged

Originally posted by hot_girl_2525

sweet part
cont soon
i bet the air hostess interupts them LOL

 

U were rite..the airhostess interupts them...iz my story becummin predictable? ConfusedCry.....here's the nxt part...

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Part 5


Recap:Angad gives Kripa her gift and she forgives him.

They get lost into eachother and start to come closer to eachother.Angad looks passionately at Kripa and Kripa closes her eyes while coming closer and closer when suddenly………..
An air hostess approaches them.
(air hostess=AH)

AH: Excuse me…may I bring u anything?

Both Angad & Kripa part away from eachother and feel very embarrassed.

A:ummm no not rite now.

AH: & ma'am may I bring u anything.

K:(all red & shy) n-no,maybe later.

AH:ok,I hope u enjoy the flight.

A:thanku

Now Angad & Kripa feel very embarrassed at their behaviour.Angad cudn't help but smile whereas Kripa's face had turned a rosy pink color.
Angad came closer to Kripa and whispered…

A:(in her ear)kissi ne kabhi tumse kaha hai ke jab tum sharmati ho to tum…

K:(softly)mein kiya…

A:tum…tum…TUM MONKEY LAGTI HO!!!

And he starts to laugh whereas Kripa feels offended & pinches him really hard on the arm.

A:ouch!! Yaar Kripa mein to mazzak kar raha tha.

K:aisa mazak bhi koi karta hai kiya?

A:ok baba..(he holds his ears) I'm sorry(and makes a really cute face)

K: acha acha…bus theek hai.

A:bus?

K(confused)

A: "bus" theek hai?I thought we were in an aeroplane! thanx for telling me yaar.

K:(whining)STOP IT NAAA!!!

A:OK OK…..

After some time,Angad puts his hand on the arm rest which is between the two.

K:(pushing his elbow aside & placing hers)Angad,yeh mera arm rest hai.

A:Kripa….yeh MERA arm rest hai (and pushes her arm aside)

K:(irritated) Angad….u have to learn to share

A:LOOK WHOSE TALKING!

K:dekho agar tum yahi karte rahe na to mein apni seat change kar loongi!

A:acha….dhamki???

Kripa presses a button to call the air hostess.in anger.The Air hostess arrives.

AH: yes,may I help u?

K:yes….I wud like to know if there is any other empty seat.

AH:(glancing at Angad) y?is there any problem?

A:no…not at all actually she can stay here…I wud like to change my seat.

K:(under her breath)acha hai!

AH:ok I'll c wht I can do

And then she leaves. Kripa sits with her arms folded across her chest.Then the air hostess comes back.

AH:yes,there is one man who is willing to change his seat with you.

A:oh..THANK GOD! (he gives Kripa a mean look)

AH:plz cum with me.

A:yes..(& he leaves)

The air hostess takes Angad to a seat which has quite a clear view of Kripa.The seat next to him is also empty.Angad just sighs & sits down.

Villain ki Entry…
On the other hand, a guy approaches Kripa and sits down on the window seat next to her.
(Guy=G)

G: hi

K:hi

G:y ur a beautiful lady.

K:(feeling awkward)t-thanx.

G:By the way my name is Josh.

K:ahaan…my name is Kripa (and then she tries to avoid eye contact with him becuz he just seems to stare at her)

Angad is watching all this & seems a bit concerned because he can see that Kripa is quite infuriated but he thinks tht she deserved it so he duzn't really bother.

Josh:(touching her arm)sooo,y don't u tell me something more abt urself?(he trails his
index finger up & down her arm)

K:(folding her arms) plz leave me alone.

J:but y?am I not gud enuff for u?

K: listen mister! Leave me alone or I'll call the air hostess.

J:(with hands up in the air)oooooh I'm scared!

Then Josh grabs her hand…

J: now let's c wht u can do…

K:(trying to release her hand from his grip)CHORO MUJHE!!

Angad can't take this anymore so he gets up from his seat and heads towards them.


Hope u guyz liked this part...i wud really like it if u guyz told me wht u didnt like abt the parts tht i write...4 future reference...laterzz
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Posted: 03 November 2006 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
great part
can't wait to see what angad does
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Posted: 04 November 2006 at 3:09am | IP Logged
guyz....i think u dont like my ff...there r hardly any replies Cry plzzz reply bcuz ur replies are the sole encouragement i get....anywayz herez the nxt part and im xpecting lo0ads of comments...even if there negative...
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Posted: 04 November 2006 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Part 6


Recap:Angad & Kripa have a small fight so Angad changes his seat.Josh cumz and sits next to Kripa and starts bothering her.



Edited by devilsoul - 04 November 2006 at 3:16am
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Part 6


Recap:Angad & Kripa have a small fight so Angad changes his seat.Josh cumz and sits next to Kripa and starts bothering her.

Angad can't take this anymore so he gets up from his seat and heads towards them.

Angad places a hand on Josh's shoulder…

A:hey buddy…do u mind holding my hand?...I don't mind.

J:who da heck r u?

A:That's for me to know…and u to find out and anywayz I don't think thts any of ur business.

J:I'll make it my business if u don't leave us alone.Wht da hell do u want?

A:I…(pointing at Kripa) want HER!

Kripa starts blushing…she feels really happy frm inside bcuz she knows tht Angad cares 4 her a lot.

J:well…tough luck!

A:(taking hold of a chain around his neck with a skull in it)soo tum yahaan se utho ge ya mein tumhein is duniya se utha doon?

J:(putting his hands up in surrender) ok ok chillax dude….

He gets up from his seat and leaves with a frown on his face and Angad whispers in his ear

A: u shud wish ke hum kabhi dobara na milen kyunke agar aisa hua…to tum kissi aur se kabhi milne ke kaabil nahin raho ge.

J:(with a smirk on his face)We'll c!

Angad looks at Kripa while Kripa has tears in her eyes and is feeling very guilty.Angad is abt to leave wen she takes hold of Angad's arm

K: Angad…..mujhe chor ke mat jao.

A:(turning his head towards her) kyun?y shudn't i?

K:(a tear rolling down her cheek) plz…mere saath beth jao.

A:nahin…I think ur brave enuff to take care of urself.

And he leaves and sits back on his other seat.Kripa is really touched by what Angad did for her & she feels attracted towards Angad but she ignores it.After awhile wen Kripa thinks she can't take this anymore,she heads towards Angad and sits down on the seat nxt to him.

A:ab tum yahan par bhi a gayee?

K:(making a face) mujhe tumse koi lena dena nahin….main to bus aise he bore ho rahi thi socha tumse do chaar baatien kar loon.

A:jhoot bolna to koi tumse seekhe.

K:(after a pause) acha baba ab maaf kar do.

A:nahin..

K:(holding her ears)plssssss

A:(smiling)acha theek hai theek hai magar next time I wont 4give u.

K:(all happy) ok I promise aisa phir nahin hoga…I wont fight with u.

A:thts better.

The rest of the flight goes smoothly without any fights.In abt 7 hrs…they finally reach U.S.A.


I know dis part was v short...i was really disapointed i didnt get any replies or comments frm u guyz...i hope u understand...khair nxt part will b better..
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Posted: 04 November 2006 at 3:19am | IP Logged
nice part i really like your ff Tongue cont soon
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Posted: 04 November 2006 at 7:42am | IP Logged
amazing parts
cont soon
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