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new fan-fic by me (being continued) (Page 9)

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 3:28am | IP Logged

thnaks

it was awsesome

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 6:00am | IP Logged

dont make kripa fall in love with angad

present it is her habbit to b friendly with everyone even with prithvi which makes angad angry & when he tells not to b friendly too much with prithvi kripa doesnt like it

plz cont fast

lots of love

esha

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 7:21am | IP Logged
hey happy yr story is mindblowing......plz continue n plz don't listen to yr sis.......
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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 7:47am | IP Logged
TOTALLY AWESOME.
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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 11:28am | IP Logged

i m ritin the 5 th part

kripa is shocked by angads reaction n so is angad

next day is the mehendi function in mishtis house

(i think mostly all the members will not no wat is this function so i m explainin there r many small small functions in punjabi marriages like sangeet etc 1 such function is mehendi in this function the ladies from the dulhas(boy) house go 2 dulhans(girl) house n the mehendi to the dulhan is first put by the mother-in-law then later all put mehendi)(n 1 more thing the boys r not allowed 2 go there from the dulhas house)

kripa is gettin ready 4 the function all have left n kripa is the last 1 to go n angad will drop her

suddenly there is a knock at her door it is karthik

karthik:hey kripa lookin lovely 2day

kripa:thanx

karthik:i needed a favor from u

kripa:wat is it?

karthik:can u give this letter 2 mishti(n her hands her out a letter)

kripa(pullin his leg):is it love letter

karthik(blushes):no......... no ... a ..it.......it is......

kripa laughs :relax i was just kiddin i will give it 2 her

karthik :thanx bye

kripa:bye

kripa closes the door n gets ready after sometime she comes down n is lookin soo cute

angad is watin 4 her downstairs

kripa gets out of her room n she is lookin fabulous

angad cant take hs eyes off her n kripa shys

angad is standin at the end of the stairs n kripa is commin down that suddenly her leg trips n she is abt 2 fall n angad catches her n they stare at each others eyes 4 abt 5 mins then karthik gets out his room n sees them stare at each other

he purpously caughs 2 bring them back 2 their sences a-k come 2 their sences n seperate but theri chains in the neck gets tangled theey try their best 2 untangle the chains atlast they suceed n leave 4 mishtis house

karthik 2 himself:lagta hai meri shadi ke kuch hi din baad a-k ki shadi hogi

a-k sit in the car n r on the way

angad :kripa sorry 4 actin like a jerk yesterday nite i scared u totally

kripa:ya u did but u were no at all a jerk infact it was sweet of u to do so

hearin this there is a wide smile on his  face n kripa notices that

they reach mishtis place

kripa:thanx 4 the ride

angad:my pleasure

he gives her the sweetest smile n then drives back home , kripa is so happy but she her self does not no y

kripa enters the house the function was just abt 2 start

mishti:kripa ur rite on time the function is just abt 2 start

 

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 11:28am | IP Logged
i will continue later
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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 11:32am | IP Logged
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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 11:33am | IP Logged

hey angadkripafan,

thanx for continuing yaar. I actually had written the 5th part and was about to post when you posted your part. never mind, i'll just change mine a little bit to fit the story.

hey can u tell me if you gonna continue to 6th part, so i can wait for you to continue with the story.

once again excellent job Clap. love the staring part.

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