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it was awsesome
Remixís own Shaitaan
Joined: 05 June 2005
dont make kripa fall in love with angad
present it is her habbit to b friendly with everyone even with prithvi which makes angad angry & when he tells not to b friendly too much with prithvi kripa doesnt like it
plz cont fast
lots of love
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i m ritin the 5 th part
kripa is shocked by angads reaction n so is angad
next day is the mehendi function in mishtis house
(i think mostly all the members will not no wat is this function so i m explainin there r many small small functions in punjabi marriages like sangeet etc 1 such function is mehendi in this function the ladies from the dulhas(boy) house go 2 dulhans(girl) house n the mehendi to the dulhan is first put by the mother-in-law then later all put mehendi)(n 1 more thing the boys r not allowed 2 go there from the dulhas house)
kripa is gettin ready 4 the function all have left n kripa is the last 1 to go n angad will drop her
suddenly there is a knock at her door it is karthik
karthik:hey kripa lookin lovely 2day
karthik:i needed a favor from u
kripa:wat is it?
karthik:can u give this letter 2 mishti(n her hands her out a letter)
kripa(pullin his leg):is it love letter
karthik(blushes):no......... no ... a ..it.......it is......
kripa laughs :relax i was just kiddin i will give it 2 her
karthik :thanx bye
kripa closes the door n gets ready after sometime she comes down n is lookin soo cute
angad is watin 4 her downstairs
kripa gets out of her room n she is lookin fabulous
angad cant take hs eyes off her n kripa shys
angad is standin at the end of the stairs n kripa is commin down that suddenly her leg trips n she is abt 2 fall n angad catches her n they stare at each others eyes 4 abt 5 mins then karthik gets out his room n sees them stare at each other
he purpously caughs 2 bring them back 2 their sences a-k come 2 their sences n seperate but theri chains in the neck gets tangled theey try their best 2 untangle the chains atlast they suceed n leave 4 mishtis house
karthik 2 himself:lagta hai meri shadi ke kuch hi din baad a-k ki shadi hogi
a-k sit in the car n r on the way
angad :kripa sorry 4 actin like a jerk yesterday nite i scared u totally
kripa:ya u did but u were no at all a jerk infact it was sweet of u to do so
hearin this there is a wide smile on his face n kripa notices that
they reach mishtis place
kripa:thanx 4 the ride
he gives her the sweetest smile n then drives back home , kripa is so happy but she her self does not no y
kripa enters the house the function was just abt 2 start
mishti:kripa ur rite on time the function is just abt 2 start
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thanx for continuing yaar. I actually had written the 5th part and was about to post when you posted your part. never mind, i'll just change mine a little bit to fit the story.
hey can u tell me if you gonna continue to 6th part, so i can wait for you to continue with the story.
once again excellent job . love the staring part.
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