Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Reserve.
^Unreserve^
Nice OS for the first attempt. Swayam and Sharon sharing a passionate night of love feels good to imagine.
Morning was cute. I could imagine Swayam and Sharon doing that with the voice of Kaka outside :P
Chitra :)
Originally posted by: --Keechu--
OMG Ana 😲
You wrote this??? 😲Dont lie ohk...😡From where you got it???? I didnt know that you write this well 😲 😆 😆This was beautiful 👏, like seriously i didnt expect this.😳..When i got the pm, i thought hmm yaa will read later but when started to read, i was like ... really she wrote this😆... your each word screamed passion and romance ☺️ I really loved it 😉Btw how old are you??? 😆 😉You should write more and u will improve for sure...dont leave it in middle 😉Lovekeechu di 😊
Originally posted by: SalmanShahidSm
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UnresAnagha!!Tu acha likhti hai woh toh pata tha..Par itna acha🤗Mastt re :)👏Awesome OS!!Loved it!SwaronRomanceNaughty girl😆😳Waiting for more stories from uKeep writing dearJab bhi free time mileBut don't let it affect ur studies OK!Love u❤️
Originally posted by: asthamehrotra
Aaye-haaye Kamal kar ditta 😉 Mai toh pehle se hi jaanti thi Ki meri chamgadar ne likha h toh bura toh Ho hi nahi sakta 👏 now coming to the os- trust me this seemed to me a brand new version of ur writing technique...what I mean to say is when u wrote ss journey with me I could see some open loops or undone finishing here nd there but I couldn't bleve that u have improved this much just after one write up 😲 seriously"AWESOME" the way u wrote it made me doubt that is it really ur first one ?I mean the finishing and flow of os was great 👍🏼 I have a habit of skipping lines or even paragraphs whenever I feel that it is not imp. to read it or when I start getting bored but trust me on this one I sticked to it till the end honestly there was no moment at which I felt any part of this is boring or unimportant to read... Mujhe bahot saara likh e ka Mann h nd trust me I feel like telling u what I felt while reading each of ur line but that would me a little close to impossible for me as u know I don't generally stay online for that much of time 😛 still kudos chamgadar for writing something so nicely that too on first attemp itself and then dedicating it to me, lavsnd renu d
Thanksss for this wonderful gift 😃
Thari cheater cock 😆
Omg ana 😳☺️
Awesome yaar👏Loved itPlz plz do write again on swaron or vrushan😉Thanks to renu lav n astha jinki wajah se hume read karne mila
Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy
You liar! Tu kitni clearly jhut bolti hai! Tu aisa kaise kar sakti hai? Tu pehli baar me itna acha kaise likh sakti hai!
Dar gyi thi na? Haha!
Now for the update, it was just WOW! Amazingly elaborated feelings of both.
Ek baat aur, bacchi hamari badi hogayi!
Love,
Teri pagal bacchi
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Ana this is beautiful..
Loved it
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