NiBir OS || Juda hoke bhi || - Page 5

Originally posted by: ...kuru...

wow that is fanfastic 👏
something that directly reached my heart

Originally posted by: Suhani_12

Superb!!!! Very well written Niya 😭 😭 😭 It was too emotional

Originally posted by: anu012

lovely & emotional os dear

loved it...

Originally posted by: itznimi003

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unres

awsm os mumma😊

aapne khub rulaya mujhe...but d way u hv written dis was mindblowing...👏👏

love der letter wala convo bhut bhut jyada emotional n touching tha❤️

nisha ko blood cancer tha fir bhi usne kabir k sapne uski khushiyo k bare me socha😔

Kabir ran towards his room and
stopped at the door... he freezed at
the sight in front of him... Nisha laid
there with an oxygen mask on her
face ... blood tube instered in her
hand...
He leaned on the door making it
bang on the wall with a thud... the
cousins who were sitting on the floor
near the bed looked up.. Umesh and
Sukku ran to Kabir to support him...
They took him to Nisha and made
him sit next to her.. he placed his
shivering hand on her forehead and
whispered her name making her
slightly open her eyes... her eyes got
teary immediately seeing him in
front of her... she tried lifting her
hand and touching his face but due
to weakness she couldn't do it but
Kabir caught her hand and placed it
on his cheek ... they both had tears
in their eyes... Nisha used her other
hand and some how managed to
remove the oxygen mask from her
face...
" Kabir ,..." She called him in a
shivering voice... "Tu.. best.. student
.. "
She tried speaking but had no
energy to say anything but Kabir
understood what she was trying to
say...
"Haan Nisha... main iss year ka best
student hun LSD ka

@bold i was crying😔

... Kitni ajeeb baat hai na Kabir...
jab tak tu wapas aayega shayaad
main na rahun... par yeh letter chod
ke ja rahi hun tere liye.. jab bhi tu
yeh letter padhega na main kisi na
kisi roop main tere aas pass aa
jaungi .. Ya toh baarish ki boondhon
main , Ya hawaon ke jhokon main...
par hamesha teri yaadon main
rahungi... Juda hoke bhi hum juda
nahi honge Kabir...

@blue superbly written👍🏼

He got up and blankly started
walking towards the sea.. he smiled
and remembered all the happy
moments he spent with Nisha and
kept walking deep inside the sea
hoping that even he would
disappear in this water and meet his
Nisha like the sky meets the sea at
the horizon ...

@pink again m crying😔

Originally posted by: ammu4u

this is awsum girl

rula diya tune muje😭

kya story hai yaar...dat letter and flashback scene😭😭😭

sukku and umesh supporting kabir

nishas hand slip from his hand..😭😭

its beautifully written niyuu

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Sasuma 🤗

Huggie le lo better feel karoge 🤗

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Mammaaa🤗

I knw U & Buasi r planniing to make ME cry Bt I wnt cry🤔

Samjhe aap donom I m not GONAAA CRY😈

Beautifully Penned down...👏

I loved the idea of letter to reveal the incidents👍🏼

The most Heart Wrenching tha Jab Kabir leaned on door umesh & sukku supporting him.. Its TERRIBLE😵

Pain reached The HEART👍🏼


One thing I want to say is... 😛

Ohhh Hello Mr.CANCER I hate U😡 I hate u to the core😡 Mere NiBir ke beech aaj ke baad aayenge nah Toh Saru se buri koyi nahi hogiii😎 SYS????😆🤣🤣🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

Sorry 4 late comments😳