HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 3

Posted: 8 years ago
 Awesome


Fab



Mind blowing


Update soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Its going wonderful dear...plz continue :)
Posted: 8 years ago
plz do continue..bt i m asking frm the starting that is it an incomplete manan stry..??
now i cant handle more separation nd sad endings..so i hope it has a happy ending.. 😳
Posted: 8 years ago
PLEASEEE CONTINUE AND UPDATE SOON
Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Aditi..My name is Aditi tooπŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ
its an awesome start..
cont soon..
will be waiting for d update

Posted: 8 years ago
wow nice prologue
continue soon
all r ok
but manik's age 30
its seems not ok.becoz all r near 20 only but his 30
plzzz change his age25 r near that
practically becoz of age diff thr will be lot of prob
its somewat ok if 6 r 7 years diff,but 11yrs diff
just its a req only
its ur story u hav all d rights
sry .dont mistake me
thank u
Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...super interesting concept..
Excited to read further..
Plzz pm me when u update next
Posted: 8 years ago
I loved the age difference in Manan..keep it lyk that only plzz..

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