SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 7

640119

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Aww...so cute

2

Reply

Quote

964932

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

Mine res

unres

amazing piece of writing

loved it srash

revisiting past

great job dude 😳

dont know why but dill kar raha tumhy dude kahon 😆

waiting for another OS 😳

thanks for pm

Edited by ashiii333 - 8 years ago

1

Reply

Quote

964932

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

Res for our world famous gang

Affu Aarzo Jas Aroo Yumi h.e.n.a Adi

2

Reply

Quote

Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Very GooD O.S Srash...
I have never read anything on a Army-AsYa story..., maybe a Sad O.S...but yes...this is Unique and Different.
Wish to read more.

1

Reply

Quote

KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

That was sweet

The way it was meant to be

Aww

❤️☺️

Edited by KeyaHira2 - 8 years ago

1

Reply

Quote

Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing os.
Child Labour is a crime n we should try to stop it.

1

Reply

Quote

Abi

@-ABI-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

1

Reply

Quote

Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

That was super awesome

You picked up a very sensitive topic

And penned down Asad s emotions very well

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

1

Reply

Quote

Linsie

@Linsie

IF-Addictz

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Beautifully written...
thanks for the pm...

1

Reply

Quote

paru

@enthusiastic

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

awesome story srashti
mene pehle kabhi nahi pada esa story
i loved it so much

1

Reply

Quote

SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 7

Related Topics