Divinity of thy Arms (chapter 4 updated) 19/9 page 38 - Page 22

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.

Wow Warda! Great work yaar!
I'm already loving this!
First part was just Beautifully written! Your way of description about nature, infact each and every detail in that update is like wow!
I didn't understand that update completely bcoz there are many things which i don't know! But i'm trying to know now!
I love this Khushi! She is some one to be admired! She was at fault once and now whatever she is doing about it now is admirable!
Payal looks like a good friend to Khushi!
Second update shocked me a bit! Seeing how things were intense in the first update, i didn't expect next one to be like this! But i really LOVED it!
So ASR here is like completely opposite to Khushi!
Now I can relate this to our original IPK! I mean that change of ideologies ArShi always had and even this attraction thing!
This is really good! I'm already excited for this journey!
Complex Arnav? Ummm...wonder why? Maybe something related to his dad!
Good one Warda 😊

Originally posted by: Sadh123

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Okay we delve into Arnav's past here. I assume it is Arnav though. So Arnav's dad has left him? Now why are dads so mean and callous? I can't understand. They are selfish too or has Arnav's dad died or something?

How did Arnav's mom die? Oh the starting was so adorable. The bond of mother and child can never be justified with mere words but you did it warda and I am giving you full brownie points for that. 

Oh it is natural for every child to feel this way when their mother's leave. And the Autumn leaves falling and Arnav's thought on this has stumped me speechless. Clearly, a kid like him shouldn't have been exposed to such harsh reality and I think seeing his mom die and not realising it is just the first Ray of harshness. Don't give him more lady.

The kid doesn't even realise. How bad is that? I seriously can't believe it. Is there no one at all to help him? And who is "mistress of his mother"? Where was she working? So his mother always wanted to die since I remember her initial wisdom statement. But I don't call it wisdom, it is foolishness or selfishness to let one's kid suffer while we go away to put an end to our torments. In that case you shouldn't have given birth to a child!

This was an equally hooking update and I am looking forward to the next. By the way, so this is the title Autumn Winds. In this page only you posted the king story na? See how much that story has seeped into my heart.

P.S: I have a question. Is Arnav's encounter with the Khushi happening in the present or is it also past? Sorry I got a little confused here.

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-

Yes baby, Khushi is a mystery which ASR will be solving, haina?

Oh god. This Arnav is so rude, he better make up for his foul mouth in upcoming chapters. 😆

I love this Khushi, she has explanations to every other thing in this world. Witty and intelligent, too good for this arrogant ASR.

Whut? He likes Payal lol, haha. Well, he would not know what's going to hit him, right?

Chapter three was really painful to read. My heart felt really heavier when his mother died. I wonder what happened to her. Poor him, he was only 5. I am so sad 😔

I was right on time it seems. I get to read the third chapter, well and ready.

Waiting for more.

Love

J

Originally posted by: shalbi

I really feel like crying right now.. How much has the child gone through.. How much has arnav suffered in his days.. The child who doesn't even know what death is, will be facing the death of the sole person who he loves and wishes to be by his side..

 

if its just the bigining, what else he has to go through