love makes life ...:)os.new story..part19/149. - Page 46

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

One more awesome part Ruchi
Loved it when nk hold hrr hand and take her inside and introduce her
Ak gesture for that girl... Soo heart touching
Ohh toh nk buy earings for ak ...
Nk ka dhyan ak aur mo ki taraf hi hota hai
Nk said right jab bhi voh aata hai ak apni cheezein chupa leti hai
I was doubting k hiw mohit don't know about nk marriage.
Update soon

ThaTha thanku thanku so much nidhi for liking this part nd my work to 😊 aww ye scene sabko kitna pasand aaya i didnt think 😃 ...haa swlly swlly u will get more interest i will try my best 😃
Sab i will show in next part about truth 😳 i will do update next part soon 😳 ..
Aacha mere frds ko na ye story bhut aachi lag rahi to maine esse thoda long bana diya hai... 😃 ..for my frds...

amazing part ruchi.. I like that you giving message from this part all scenes are nice.. akshara ka scarf par naitik ka naam likhna was so nice scene and naitik ka akshara ki care karna superb.. now mohit ka suspense.. waiting for it

again amazing part ruchi di
nk jealousy when he sees ak wid mohit
luved it whn nk introduced to ak wid every1
the difference which u showed b/w luv nd money is so true...ak made tht girl happy by celebrating her bday unlike sneha by giving money...past scene was so cuteee...ak writing nk name on that scarf aewww...mohit got to knw about naksh wedding bt howw?????
waiting for next part eagrly especially naksh dancee 👏 😳
update soon

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

amazing part ruchi.. I like that you giving message from this partall scenes are nice.. akshara ka scarf par naitik ka naam likhna was so nice sceneand naitik ka akshara ki care karna superb.. now mohit ka suspense.. waiting for it

Aww thanku thanku so much misri for liking this part nd gave sweet si comments. .loved it.. 😊 ...haa actually i want to give one message of love in dis os... 😊 ..hope u all will like this part..i ailll do update next part soon 😃

Originally posted by: deepshikan

again amazing part ruchi di
nk jealousy when he sees ak wid mohit
luved it whn nk introduced to ak wid every1
the difference which u showed b/w luv nd money is so true...ak made tht girl happy by celebrating her bday unlike sneha by giving money...past scene was so cuteee...ak writing nk name on that scarf aewww...mohit got to knw about naksh wedding bt howw?????
waiting for next part eagrly especially naksh dancee 👏 😳
update soon

Thanku thanku so much vishu baby for liking this part nd gave sach a lovly sweet pyari si comments 😛 ...aww u liked that scene so true na money nd love mai differences hote hai 😛 ...oo hoo u guys knew all that what will happen nexxt 😃
I will do update next part soon 😳

Nyccc Part Ruchi Dear well done...but I wish in your next part ...Naitik realise his love for Akshara...plz cont next part soonEdited by sameera_naksh - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh

Nyccc Part Ruchi Dear well done...but I wish in your next part ...Naitik realise his love for Akshara...plz cont next part soon

Aww thanku so much sameera for liking this part nd gave sweet comments 😊 ..dont worry in next part aur maja aayga i will try to give an interesting part 😊

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN

nice part dear

Thanku simi 😃

Part-9
Ak was shocked to listen bhabhi"..word...from mohit...
Mo-chok gai na ...mujhe dekh ke...ye sun ke...
Ak-nahi..ye sab kya...mai kisi ko koi bhabhi nahi hu..
Mo-kisse jhut bol rahe aap..mujhse ya kud se..aap nk ki wife ho...na..
Ak-mujhe koi bat nahi karni...was about to go..but mohit hold her hand..
Mo-mai dekh raha hu ...pehle din se..ap sad ho...kisi na kisi bat ke liye ..mujhe pata dhire dhire chalna laga...jab apko pucha ki aap kaha se hai ..udaypur..nk bhi wahi se ...But i thought it was coincided. .but jab wo bag ...yad hai...bhul se maine bola ye nk ki hai...wo is bag ko foreign leke gaya tha...hum ek room mai rehte the...us par maine kai drawing banai thi...mujhe thoda sa dobut hua ki aap dono frd hai..because maine bar bar apke pass aake nk ko test kiya...wo har bar mujhe apse dur kar raha tha...
Tears came from her eyes...now he skkiped her hand nd she was listening all his talks..
Mo-mera yakin shock mai jab badla...jab shopping ke duran aap giri aur maine apka sindur dekha..
Ak-to kya mai nk ki wife ho gai...haa meri shadi hui hai..par kisi aur ke sath...nk ke sath nahi...tum pagal ho rahe ho..
Mo-maine nk ke ghar call kiya...hum kisi ko family ko nhi jante par usne india ka house ka no diya .tha..maine call karke pucha...gy3..aunty ne kud bola aap dono yaha trip pe aaye hai..aur koi jhut...
Ak-pls..mai hath jodti hu..kisi ko kuch mat boliyega...nk mujhse pyar nahi karte ...is trip mai wo apna pyar leke hum dono alg ho jayge bas...
Mo-really wo seneha...par ye pyar ho sakta hai bas attraction ho..because maine nk ko dekha hai..wo kisi ke side attract ho jata hai to lagta hai ye mai lunga hi..par phir chod deta hai...pyar esse nhi hota ..waise bhi wo bhut alg tipe ki hai...dont know un dono ki pategi bhi ya nhi...uska gussa ek essi ladki rok sakti hai jo kud gussa kam karti ho..usse ek samjhdar ladki ki jarurat hai ..aap...waise bhi wo aapko dekhta hai to..
Ak-bas pls bas...put hand on her ears...mai nk ko bhula dena chahti hu pls...mujhe nhi pata kya aacha hai kya bura...wo seneha se pyar karte hai...crying nd saying...par mujhse nhi...mai ja rahi hu..leave..
Mo-mai jo sachi hoga usi ka sath duga...bhabhi ya nk...isse pehle nk ko dekhna hoga ..ye love hai ya sirf ek attraction. .. 😲 ...
Now in morning...
Everyone was so tried due to last nyt...so came late for visit. .
Ma-so now hum jangle ke side mai jayge ...nd waha tambu mai rahege...dis was also different for all...dey was going...
Ak was admiring d beauty of nature...nk mohit nd seneha was together. .
Mo-so seneha ...thm khana banna nd saree nd all..pehen sakti ho..na..kyo nk...tumhare yaha pe to yahi...pehente hai na..
Se-haa sab pehen sakti hu..bas koi bole to ...saw to nk...nk passed smile. .
Nk-haa mujhe yakin hai pura seneha kuch bhi kar sakti hai..
Mo-hope so..jayda soch mai..waise mai chala ak ke pass..amm tum dono raho ek sath...bye. .in teasly tone...nk saw to mohit...
He went near of ak...who didnt talk with him.
Mo-anmmm..i think u was right ak...aap thik thi...nk na seneha ko pyar karta..hai..hum frds hai ok...
Ak-haa...pls wo sab kisi ko mat boliyega...nk was turning nd seeing to both...than walking...aur kuch bataiye mohit..
Mo-kya batau...nk ke bare mai..
Ak-nahi...apne bare mai ..
Mo-mohit saw to nk..who was again nd again seeing to mohit nd ak..mai na bhut jayada aacha hu..kya tairf karu..apko pata hai ...touches her hand...mai hath bhi pad sakta hu...nk saw to mohit..
Se-yad na kitna dance kiya na..nk...nk..
Nk-haa..
Se-kya dekh rahe ho..
Nk-wo ak ko ..mohit..
Se-pls nk...tumhe mujhse bat karni hai ..ye ak ka kya hai..pls..mai hi jau...nk hold her hand...
Nk-i m sry...nhi kucch nahi...wo mujhe thodi si chinta..hum pahuchne wale..hai na
Mo-aur haa...jald hi maine hath padte padte us ladki ko bola..in lill loud voice. .mai tumhe bhut pasand karta hu...
Ak laughs vry much...-mohit tum bhut funny ho...wo samaj nhi pai..
Nk heard ...shocked...went near of ak...withh seneha..
Nk-in anger...saw to ak...mohit mujhe tujhse kuch bat karni hai...took to him..
Se-kya hai nk...pagal kyo ho rahe ho..
Nk--mohit tune ak ko propose ..mana kiya na dur reh..
Mo-kyo haa...mai usse apna kissa bata raha tha..ye sab nahi na..
Nk smile...-mujhe laga. ..koi bat nahi ...par tu mere sath bhi reh na..chalo...trio went ...nd all was arranging their tentss...
Now in evening. ..manager said for cooking...all was making. ..their food...ak with four girls...nd nk with mohhit seneha nd one boy..
Se-mujhe nahi aata banana...kuch bhi..sry nk..
Nk-koi bat nahi...see recepie...isse try karte hai...
Here ak was making peacefully boths tent was infront of each...mohit saw to ak nd her gang..
Mo-dekh na nk...kitni aachi khusbu aa rahi hai...waaw...ak kya bana rahi hai..
Ak-tum logo ko pasand aaya..
One gir-hug to her...thanku so much...tumhe frd banake mai to bhut kush hu..itna sweet sa halwa nd parathe...sikhaye bhi ..help bhi ki ek dusare ki..aur sikh bhi gye...u r lso talented. .
Ak-smile...thanku...wo tum mujhe makeup ke bare mai bataogi..mujhe nhi aata..
Gi-ofcourse...waise yaha hamare alg alg tents hai...but mai abhi batati hu..u will look so much pretty...than ak saw to nk nd his frds..
Se-ban gai..
Mohit nk nd boy made face...all..in throught yakk..
Mo-thik hai...made face..
Nk-fake smile. .nice roti...
Seneha was so much hpy...thanku...mai aati hu haa..
Mo-ye khayge...
Nk-true yr...bhut..
Mo-teri hi choice thi na seneha yakk..
Nk-kya kare..
Ak was seeing to both..
Ak-wo nk..means..
Gi-kya...yakk..jalne ki badbu kaha se aa rahi hai...turn..ak nd that girl seeing to each..
Ak-khana..she running near nd uthaofy to bartan..nk mohit saw to ak..
Ak-mohit...ye kya hai...ye khaoge...saw to nk..means khayege aap sab.
Mo-kya kare...kisi ko banana nahi aata..
Ak-material bhi to waste kar diya ...koi bat nahi mai isse dish bana deti hu...to ye ho jayga...ruko..
Nk-thanku ak...
Ak-saw in his eyes...most wlcm..
Nd start making...mohit nd nk r doing help of her...
More parts coming soon Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago

Ak-aacha mujhe sault dena ...mohit...mai veg cut kar leti hu nd turn ...but her head takarofy from nk..aauchh..
Nk-auch...smile...takra gaye...than seneha saw from middle...
Ak saw to nk face...than someone shout. ..ak...she came in sence...haa..nd making...food...ak was cutting veg nd her hair was distributing to her...mohit was arranging somthing. .nd nk was busy suddenly he saw to ak...came near of ak..
Ak-oo god ye mirch...mere bal...than she was telling to her frd but no one is listening to her..
Nk'-ak...aap..mai kar deta hu...mai inki choti..
Ak-par...mai kar lungi...suddenly she touched to her face..aah.
Nk-suniye...touches to her hair...nd pushed back of ears..ak felt his touch..her heart skkiped lill...ok...
Ak-hmm...thanku..
Nk-my pleasure. ..than she was making to food..than nk was behind. ..someone was here...kon hai...than no onne was here..
Mohit ak saw to nk..
Mo-kya hua..
Nk-essa laga ak ke piche koi tha..ye seneha kaha hai...who was seeing to ak from side...
Ak-ho gaya...aap log kha lijiye mai chalti hu...
Nk-ak...thanku...she smile nd went...
Than seneha came in anger...nk saw nd passed smile. ...mohit saw to both...
Nk-chalo kha lete hai...
Se-mera pet bhara hua hai..mujhe nahi khana ...
Nk-but thodi mai pass ke hull mai antaksari ka program hai..jaldi..
Se-mujhe nahi khana pls...nd leave in her room..
Than nk was going behing to take food..
Mo-nk...seneha ko gussa kis bat ka hai ki..ak ne food banaya ya wo nhi bana pai..
Nk-i dont know but mai kisi ko bhuka nahi dekh sakta..nd went..
Mo-chii..ye kuch dekhna chahta hi nahi...samjhana nahi hai isse...pata nahi kab samjhega ki ek aachi ladki kaisi hoti hai...inside of tent..
Nk-kyaa hua tumhe..
Se-pata nahi ...tum jao pls...mujhe nhi khana..
Nk-pls kha lo na...kitne pyar se bol raha..dekho mai kisi ko bhuka nahi dekh sakta ...pls...waise tumhare gift on d way hai..
Seneha saw with big smile. ..do ..kya hai..
Nk-wait kha lo phir. .
Se-aa...kilao..
Nk-tumhe manna to bhut easy hai...gift do man gai..
Se-nahi actually maine socha gussa jjayada kyo karna bas isiliye...nd he feed to her..water..
Nk-abhi lata hu...
Here ak was sat outside of her room...than one boy came...hii...ak saw to him..
Ak-kon ho tum..
Boy-i m seeing to u in trip...mai tumse frdship karna chahta hu..meri dost banogi..
Ak-nahi mai esse hi kisi se dosti nahi karti hu..pls..i m going..
Here nk came out nd saw to ak nd that boy...thought. ..ye niraj yaha kya kar raha hai...badmiz hai..mujhe sachi mai bolna chahiye...ye aacha ladka nahi hai...ladki ko dekh ke...waise bhi iska background. ..he was about to go..wen ak shout on him...went inside...boy went in anger..nk also leave ...
Se-aacha ab chalo sab ja rahe na...
Nk-hmm...chalo...than both was going. ..saw to ak...she was again writing..
Nk-ye kya likhti rehti hai ...esse baith ke..
Se-mai jau kya...tum hamari bat to karte hi nahi ho..
Nk-nahi...sry chalo...both went in hull...wer was all student's. ..
Ma-so we dicided two team is here...one team of mohit nd one team leader is niraj...
Here ak was tired now...nd went in tent...she packed d tent...nd unwore her cardigan. ..nd took duppata..meri aankhe jal rahi...
Aur mai bhut jayada...she turned to listen dis voice...kon hai kon hai.
Here niraj is not here..so dey changed leader...nk thinking a while..
Nk-ye nitraj to ak...ke pass..oo shitt...stood...
Se-kya hua. .
Nk-wo mai pani..aata hu..
He holded her hand..
Ak-chodo mujhe ..i said leave my hand...marofy slap..vry loud..
Ni-aaya tha na bat karne..i said ..i like u ..jab se dekha hai...she protest..chodo mujhe ...crying...tum...jane do...bachao..
Ni-koi hai..tapad ki gunj sunata hu...throw her duppata..she was shocked..so much...chodo ..mujhe ...nd running her hand on him...jane do..koi to bachao mujhe...crying vry loudly...pls koi hai..koi hai..
Mai hu yaha...enter in room...
Nk-in so much anger...chod tu isse..
Ni-nk..wo..skkiped to her...she was crying badly nd sat in her kness...nk saw to her nd was so much in anger..i m sry wo..galti ..
Nk-galti..haa..ek ladki..wo mujhe pata chal gaya tu kaisa hai thank god ..hold his collar. ..chal batata hu tujhe...start fighting with him...ek ladki..tujhe samaj nahi aata ...yahi mard hai ...chii...nd gave punches to him...he run away ...nk was shivering. ..now he think about ak..went inside...
She was shivering to holded to her...nd crying badly...nk have so painced..for her..saw duppata...nd took it from floor nd put it on aks shoulder..
Nk-aaa..aakkk...suniye...she was crying...dekho everything is fine na.. now..mai use bol dunga ki nikal de...he sat on his knees...pls esse ro..mat kuch nai..he was about to touch to her..but taking his hand back...see..smile pls...i m sry...ye sab my fault...mujhe yaha lana hi nahi chahiye tha..mana kar...suddenly she hug to him..he cant understood how he will handle dis situation ...
Ak-kuch ho jata to..hhaa nk...kuch ho jata to..kaise face karti sabko..nahi mujhse nhi hota ...aap nahi aate to..she breathing heavily. .griiped vey tighty to him...he also malted with her fear..
Nk-nothing Will happen..mai hu na...caressing her hair...mai hamesha sath dunga...she saw to her...broke..haa..nk...put hand on mouth..
Meri ijat..nk...haa...wo kuch kar deta to bhut gusse mai tha...maine kya bigada hai kisi ka jo sab mere dusman ho gye hai...she was fearing so much..haa nk...he put her head on his chest...she was resting on his chest..
Nk-a tears came from his eyes..no..kuch nahi hoga...i m sry ..mai hi ek pati hone ka farz nahi nibha paya...
Ak-nk...mai apke layak nahi rehti..thanku..mujhe bachane ke liye..hold his shirt...mai kaise rehti ...
N-mai hu na...hamesha sath rahuga...bas...hold to her vry tightly...
Kyo hum apne pyar ke samne hi sab bol pate hai...sacha pyar hamesha har time apke pass hota hai hi..ab itna to samaj mai aane laga tha..mera pyar sacha tha...thabhi to aaj uski shoulder pe sar rakh ke ro rahi thi..dar tha ..par sathwo tha jo mere sabse jayada pass hai...par ye bhi ek pal ki duri hone wali...thi..ya janam ka sath...mai aur pass ja rahi..
Mai use taklif mai nahi dekh pa rahi thi..wo mujhe..kyo essa ho raha tha..hum pass bhi aa rahe dur bhi jane ka time aa raha tha..
Ye kya mod lene wali thi life...ek pal khushi to dusari taraf nirasha..pata nahi..meri life essi kyyo thi...us raste ki tarah jis par ja to rahi thi..par bhatak bhi rahi thi...
Ak-mai nahi reh paugi dur apse...
Nk-mai bhi...
Se-nk...
both saw to seneha...better saw to each-????
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Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago