Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

ff praja : is it love? (completed on pg 29) - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
woah! your story is off to a flying start! Love the cmedy,cuteness, romance and plots. Best part was the dream!
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb it WS read all parts in 1 go. amazing..too much of fun love n... curious too know wat will happen further. excellent
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thnk u guys ur appreciation means a lot to me...
U see I m new in writing but glad u people like it...
Sorry I can't personally thanks to everyone techinal problem
Bear with me plzz 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome!! Dhulaayi!!! 😈
He deserved it!!!

How can Rao Ji be so cheap and pathetic! He's hopeless!!

My Patta is a hero here also! He will surely Dave his Jija from those disgusting monsters!
I miss him already and I'm glad we get to see him as a hero in so many stories πŸ˜›
Update soon ❀️
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Posted: 8 years ago
She was sobbing, suddenly the door open karma daadisa walked in
K: how r u feeling now ajab see this monkey slept there only
Ajab lifted her head only to see pratap sleeping in the bedside holding her hand.she filed relieved.
K: a lot happened last night ajab.
   
Pratap's room
Pratap threw shakti in the floor but his phone rang flashing ajabde name . he picked up
Patta : hello, I m patta is pratap Singh there?
Pr: yes its me patte
Pa: pratu he got excited
Pr: its pratap not pratu got that
Pa : i don't care my jija is in danger come home.
PR : what happened he got alarmed.
Pa : mm is saying to monster come home and hurt jija she fainted and that monster always kicks me on the floor his name is something like maldev.
PR : we with ajabde m coming.

Pratap rushed in the main hall, aky get the car ajab is in danger, he almost graon to everyone .
But he was damn nervous for ajab.
PR: I forgot how to drive
Chakri : u r just nervous get off m driving.

Mm and RM are having there drinks when suddenly a salesman come. Mm headed towards the door only to find out aky smiling and get him a punch in stomach.
All run inside the home.
RM : ohh soo now pratap came for saving that girl .
Pratap took a wine bottle and crashed it in RM head making him graon in pain.pratap lifted him with collar "u old brat dared to eye ajab " and throwred him hard on ground.
Chkri : wait pratap , u can even get arrested for this leave him
Pr : no never
Pratap lifted RM and threw him in the glass dining table, making every part of glass pierce maldev body
Patta started clapping seeing man in Action
Pa : my jija was right u r a hero pratu
Veeni : where is ajabde
Pa : in her room . they headed for her room and som for tota he found him black n blue and half conscious . it was difficult for all of them to left in pain soon they took tota to hospital with ajabde.

In the hospital ajabde was personally checked by subho ( chakri's wife) , and tota who cares.while jb came to hospital with bd and daadi sa. And old friend of her came running to her.
Doc : hey jb where is pratap
Jb: what happened
Doc : uday Singh make an accident , he needs blood , we called for dheer but she said I m busy in party , then we called for jagmal he said he dont care for his father , now only pratap and shakti can give him blood , as they r his sons
Pr: no we wouldnt give them blood, where blood relation gone when he blamed my mrother trust saying that i m not his son . his eyes were moist.
jb: u can prove my loyalty towards him when i was his wife go pratap
doc: come with me jaiwanta he is calling your name in unconsciousness...
                     It was hard to type with cell
Precap : uday jaiwanta remarriage


πŸ˜† Edited by aditi_angel - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update Aditi😊
PM me for the next update😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
I just wanted to finish this story as soon as I can , soo that I can start my another ff " the royal Rajputana academy" I can't wait... πŸ˜‰ 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice! And longer as well! πŸ˜›
I liked it a lot!
Precap sounds awesome...update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! Pratap to ajabde's rescue!πŸ˜³πŸ‘And US met with an accident!😲
Hope ajab gets well soon.πŸ˜ƒPrecap sounds interesting so do update soon.πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thnks all of u
A mission is gonna start soon ...
More villains will make entry ...but I m not that good in villain I tell u before... πŸ˜†