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What a beautiful update Jahnavi with so many beautiful heart warming moments ...
When Jodha revealed the awful incident to her parents.. You have portrayed the worried parents anxieties n fears so well..Prameela's fear of JO's stepping out of house .. Saradhiji to give his daughter the support she needs..finally , worried mother deciding to set aside her fears n allowing jodha to go to work..is n't it the realty of so many households..
Samyu and Prithvi part was just awesome!!
Jodha really lucky to have such a faithful friend... Samyu being a true friend.. dared to warn ACP swearing to be his death.. Poor Prithvi lolz.. Love the Boy friend part..this is really going interesting he he.. I think he already came to conclusion about the one who was after Jodha's life...
Loved Jalal's musingsn his analysing the missing factor in their blooming love..
"Tiny lil home of birds hinted him.." How beautifully U wrote it..How sweetly U described Jalal's helplessness to keep his hands off .. How could he resist such an adorable creature ..
How nicely Jalal playing game with JO fooling everyone around.. Poor Raj..lolz..
Productive, promising, progessing a lot... making JO blush.. and he called her PINK ROSE
WOW!! What the color of her cheeks.. Hope soon his wish to make her cheeks MORE PINK
would come true...
"The ROSE come in search of its THORN!! " "A THORN is always within ROSE's reach!!!!
Truly Magical Wordings !!!!
Jalal couldn't stop himself comparing his PINK ROSE with a... How could he be angry with Jodha for the same reason..Will he realise JO's decision to pursue MBA to help him .. to understand his world was the sole reason behind...
Ankhon hi Ankhon mein ISHAAREIN...WOW!! His special HI to her and her AADAB to him
And his captivating smile to his exclusive employee..Winning each other with cute gestures..
LOVE BUD FULLY BLOOMED... ROMANCE yet to BLOOM!!!!
I can see CONFESSION OF LOVE coming soon !!
"When destiny dawns a game , it also devices the master moves in advance "...
How do you sum up all your chapters in one sentence Jahnu !!!!
You made me emotional many a time reading part B...
Thanks to Saradhiji for putting in a word of JALAL'S MAGNANIMITY in Jodha's ears..
Her plight after knowing Jalal's execution of butchering Ramesh.. Beautifully penned down..The way she expressed her gratitude to him .. was so pure so sweet .. I loved it so much...
"I will not let any one harm you " .. hIS PROMISE FOR A LIFE TIME WITH A KISS .. On her head of course .. lolz.. flattered me... loved it so much Jahnu !!
I can again see CONFESSION coming soon.. OOOH LA LA...
Phew !! finally the much awaited FIRST KISS happened😛...Only for a flick of a second !!
Me pouting ...😳 Hmmm... Oh okay accepted it was unintentional 😉..
Unplanned Unintentionally.. .. Accidentally in the descending process..😳
I must say you are mastering in teasing us with cliff hangers !! is n't it😡 😆
Thank u so much for giving such a wonderful update 🤗..
Edited by shruthikarthik - 8 years ago
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