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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 6:10am | IP Logged
cnt wait sis!!
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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by memze

Originally posted by a-k-fan17

Cry hate u sista Cry what r u doing near my hubby in the pic Cry nd by the way its nice to change Big smile so i'm sure the ff will rock too but sista u better keep distance with my hubby Angry Embarrassed Cry

thanks and ure sista is near ur hubby in the pic but in the fanfics ............ull see anyways first part coming soon im sure youll like itBig smile

 hope he isnt with her becoz u promised me that laksh is mine not sistas Cryi hope lakshya hate sista in the FF Big smile if he does then i'll be the mroe ahppier person in the world Big smile haha ! anywes do post the first part soon! luv u

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Part 1

 

In a creepy looking house in 1978 in canada

 

We see a guy taking the bricks out of a wall making a big squar shaped space,he then picks up a wrapped unusually heavy thing and puts it inside the space,asoon as he puts it in we see a white cold hand from ht eedge of the blanket,yes there was a dead body in it.he then got the bricks and cemented them back in the wall.

 

10 years later(1988)

 

We see that same guy this time hiding behind the fridge in the same house with a axe,a new couple had recently moved in to a house ,they were cooking for the dinner party they had held tonight but what did they no,the guy came from the back of the fridge with the axe and killed the couple and wrapped the up in blanket also putting them in to the wall.

 

18 years later (now the real story begins)

 

We see a college behind that house,in the college people are cheering,screaming,kissing,all things normal 16-18 year olds do.in one side of thecollege at the gym we see a guy working out,a guy next to him on the phone and a guy next to him sleeping.

 

Guy on the phone-what were coming(disconnects)

 

Guy working out-kya hua

 

Guy on the phone-angad they've told sir

 

We now see the fit guy working out,its Angad khannah:

 

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Angad-lakshya im gonna kill them,we gotta find sir

 

We now see the guy who was chatting on the phone,it was lakshya,lakshya virani Angads best friend:

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Lakshya-yep but first wake up that dumbo

 

Angad gets his water bottle and dumps it on the guy who was sleeping,the sleeping guy wakes up angrily

 

Sleeping guy-kya angad

 

Angad-get up Rishi,them idiotic girls have told sir

 

We now see the sleeping guys face it was Rishi,Rishi khan,Angads other best friend.

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Risi-wat aur tum mughe abhi patare ho,u fool

 

Angad-we just found out now come we gotta find sir

 

Rishi-yea u go ill cum later

Lakshya-why later u cum with us now

 

Rishi-lakshya im tired give me 10 more mins to sleep

 

Lakshya-(shouting)rishi if u don't get ur lazy ass off that floor now I will personally invite those girls to come and batter you

 

Rishi(gets up)-ok im up just don't shout

 

Lakshya-ok angad u deal with drama queen,Rishi u deal with fashion queen and ill deal with miss money queen

 

Angad-done but I think we should let sir in to a secret first

 

Rishi-wat secret

 

Angad-the queens secrets

 

Lakshya-now were talking

 

Right guys I know it wasn't that scary but the next two parts will be mostly the introductions' then the horror will be unimaginable

 

Preview-the queens introduction

             -punishment

 

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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 6:34am | IP Logged
I really like itBig smile Can you continue again nowLOLEmbarrassed
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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 6:49am | IP Logged

amazing part
lolz a drama queen (kripa), fashion queen(u) and money queen (unum) LOL is that rute
anyways cont soon
cant wait 4 the next part
the guy hu was in the houz kinda creeped me out ewww Dead
it wuld be so funny 2 c the queens in that houz LOL

wat hav the boys been up2 that the queens told the sir



Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 24 October 2006 at 6:55am
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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 7:04am | IP Logged
mummmmmmy i am so scared LOL
nice intro and starting Big smile
plz cont soon wid the girls intro
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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 8:24am | IP Logged
awsome shaz Big smile luved it! do cont soon Clap
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hailaaa its too gud shazuuu......cnt wait till u cont!!!!i wonder whz that Queen? Wink

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