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Love-the state of despair 4 Garv-kumud

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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Kumud sings about her love life


Love is the state of despair,
Which tore the heart into the pieces
Which caused eyes to cry.
The love of my life
Made my life hopeless
With his unfaithful nature.
When my condition
Was equal to death,
My best friend
Invited me to his life.
My heart was'nt longing
For his love,
His words did'nt smell
The love for me,
Still I became his bride.
My marriage did'nt flow
Like the lake of love,
But it moved
Like the evergreen ship
Of friendship.
His smile gave me comfort,
His friendship wiped my worries,
His care made me forget my past..
My eyes showed
The rainbow colours
Of affection for him.
His eyes expressed
The passion for me.
My unfaithful lover's
Innocence put me
Into a shock by my true love.
But still my heart thirsted
For my husband's love.
Our heart confessed
Our feelings 2 each other.
But my heart was broken
When he betrayed me.
My lover caught
My hand to be my spouse.
My unsatisfied life
Showed me who my
Real love is.
But I hated to forget
His betrayal.
God of love opened my eyes
To show the truth of our relation,
My suspecion killed
Our bond of marriage.
But out love did'nt die.
I cursed my mind
Which suspected him.
I repent, but he is so far
That my hands can't reach him.
I'm so depressed
That I have lost all my tears
To weep.
My love was pure,
But it gave me only sorrows
Which led me to the stage of despair.

Edited by jasminerahul - 22 October 2006 at 8:57am

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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
that describes kumud and garv's relationship completely Cry awesome poem cont soon Clap


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Posted: 23 October 2006 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Its marvellous.You are a gr8 poet. Tongue
Are you gonna continue.




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Posted: 04 November 2006 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by GK-KK~ROCKS

Its marvellous.You are a gr8 poet. Tongue
Are you gonna continue.

yea i hope u continue

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