Its nice!! but would be best if you convert it to SS or write another part or extension for this OS where in you can show how Arnav repents and woos Khushi. Just a suggestion, don't mind.
hope aese huwa hota toh shyd story zydaa daer tak chalti.. Arnav n Khushi k Raastey miltey but kaese? Payal ka sacha pyaar waps aata.. Have u evr thought of writing next part of dis OS.. And surely dis OS was Mastercake among all
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